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Post by †hê Jå§ðñ Wïllïåm§ on Aug 23, 2008 23:40:20 GMT -5
his name is Mr. intellectually- disabled person... Im Mr. Spammer...
I said it as a joke.
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Post by revolution on Aug 23, 2008 23:48:48 GMT -5
That was weird.
Well here's a better reply then: Very detailed and it will be interesting to see what will happen next week at REW. The storyline sounds good as well. This getting better as you go so keep it up.
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Post by pineappleexpress on Aug 23, 2008 23:56:06 GMT -5
This is good Original, sorry for not replying for ages.
As Rated R noted, it's really easy to visualize everything that's happening. You're developing the character really well, and you're making yourself connect to an audience, which is the main goal.
Kudos, Mr. Original.
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Post by stevereno159 on Aug 24, 2008 1:27:05 GMT -5
dood this is awesome!!! i'll definantly read this regularly
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Post by mattoriginal on Aug 24, 2008 2:09:59 GMT -5
Well I've found out the hard way that you don't really feel pain in the ring..but backstage. I hadn't felt a thing in the ring. But backstage, I was in a world of pain. Chris graciously grabbed me an ice pack, and Brittney massaged my shoulders(I's is a pimp). Sleaze Bahl came up to me, just like last week, but inside the envelope were no balled up tissues...thankfully. So I told Chris and Brit they needed to get the away or I'd pop a cap in dey ass......ok I keed. I told them politely I need to go to my locker room and lie down. So I went to my(well the company...)locker room and laid down on a bench, and threw a shirt over my face. Not long after I laid down, I felt on nudge. I sat up, and the shirt fell in my lap, as I gazed up...at...who is that....WAIT A MINUTE....That's The Guy that was The Red Rooster! So like they idiot I am I clucked like a chicken, to which he rolled his eyes. He told me that TNA need a job guy for the next edition of iMPACT!(didja hear that, Original said that Terry Taylor said they needed a jobber, TO THE BACK!), and they were interested in using me. Now any other person would have just have said yes or no...but not me..I asked if I could be the blue rooster. Power, who was changing in the corner opposite, laughed. Taylor shot me a look, and told me point blank, that anyone else could be used, and I'm skating on thin ice. I told I'd be up for, I guessed. He told me, be in Orlando in two weeks, and depending on my performance I might get a contract. Wow..One of my first ten matches will be televised. I can't wait.
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Post by †hê Jå§ðñ Wïllïåm§ on Aug 24, 2008 2:13:26 GMT -5
Matt Orignal a Pimp Pop a cop in dey asses, oh ur just kidding. Red Rooster was a shocking moment. Didnt expect him. I guess hes scouting. Matt Orignal is going to Job on TNA, Matt should make himself win by breaking kayfabe. Why, I dont really know.
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Post by Red Dragon on Aug 24, 2008 2:21:44 GMT -5
All going abit too fast as long as this is a one off job match i'll be happy, I would laught if you think it is a big powerhouse and they say your jobing on a dark match against Sharkboy lol, Red Rooster? why would he ask you? is he like a offical or something? good luck hope you carry this on for longer, (TO THE BACK!)
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Post by mattoriginal on Aug 24, 2008 2:27:51 GMT -5
All going abit too fast as long as this is a one off job match i'll be happy, I would laught if you think it is a big powerhouse and they say your jobing on a dark match against Sharkboy lol, Red Rooster? why would he ask you? is he like a offical or something? good luck hope you carry this on for longer, (TO THE BACK!) Yeah, he's talent relations. And yes this is just one off. You can rest assured, that before I'm in a 'Global' company, I'll be traveling to a foreign countries.
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Post by †hê Jå§ðñ Wïllïåm§ on Aug 24, 2008 2:33:24 GMT -5
Matt Orignal VS Kenta Kobashi
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Post by mattoriginal on Aug 24, 2008 2:39:31 GMT -5
Matt Orignal VS Kenta Kobashi more like Matt Original vs. *Insert Japanese Jobber Here*
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Post by †hê Jå§ðñ Wïllïåm§ on Aug 24, 2008 2:44:36 GMT -5
Matt Orignal VS Sho Funaki
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Post by Stuffs "Thunder" Liger on Aug 24, 2008 3:57:09 GMT -5
Matt, to be honest, that really, really seems like a misstep in what's otherwise been a good diary.
(a) Taylor probably would've beat your ass, or after the comment, pretty much told you you'd never, ever work in TNA. (b) The idea of someone getting a nationally aired match out of their first, regardless of who it is, is really ridiculous. Even if this indy's in Orlando, they'd still go to someone who has shown he's dependable over someone greener than baby crap.
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Post by mattoriginal on Aug 24, 2008 4:10:20 GMT -5
Matt, to be honest, that really, really seems like a misstep in what's otherwise been a good diary. (a) Taylor probably would've beat your ass, or after the comment, pretty much told you you'd never, ever work in TNA. (b) The idea of someone getting a nationally aired match out of their first, regardless of who it is, is really ridiculous. Even if this indy's in Orlando, they'd still go to someone who has shown he's dependable over someone greener than baby ****. I know where your coming from, but don't count me out yet.
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Post by Jason Star on Aug 24, 2008 10:58:41 GMT -5
Wow just read over this whole thing, since I haven't had a chance since it started. This is amazing. The writing of this is really amazing and it really gets me into it. Your doing quite well so far being part of a main event feud in an indy promotion. The TNA thing was a bit out of place since it is quite soon but I can see it being done quite well. Loving this and I really cant wait for the next update. I also hope you can stick with this long enough to actually make it to WWE.
One thing I would suggest, maybe its just me. The layout could use something to make it look better. I just feel that one big writeup can be improved. Maybe center it and use italics or colours or something. Maybe its just me but I thought I would suggest it anyway.
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Post by CF9™ on Aug 24, 2008 21:29:15 GMT -5
Finally fixed my computer, it wasn't letting me reply for a little bit.
And man! The last update was great. I'm excited to see what you do in REW, as well as Mr. Bahl's promotion. Very easily to visualize man, keep it up, I'm really excited for an update.
Edit: Oh, and you jobbing in TNA should be AWESOME. Can't wait to see how he describes the locker room.
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Post by mattoriginal on Aug 28, 2008 23:48:41 GMT -5
Well..you can't win them all. A phrase we all know too well. This week I had a new t-shirt, A Motley Crüe shirt. I walked out to a new song 'Face Down in the Dirt' by Crüe..yes..I have developed a liking for the group. So I came out, with the little kids in the front row marking out. Much like the original ECW, the same fans from last week were in the exact seats from last week. Taylor was backstage. He told me he liked my attitude, but I still needed some work, but by the time the TV Tapings rolls around I should be ready. So I did the walk around the ring a high fiving the crowd. The awfulness that is 'Crank Dat Soulja Boy' hit and Joe Taylor walked out. I was cringing in the ring, as he danced like a dumb monkey. And people call me green. My god. This guy made me look like Chris BenWho? This guy botched a run into a rope. I had to start hitting him legit to make the match look good. The finish eventually came..when he botched a DDT. Everything went dark, and everything seemed a mile away. The only thing I could hear was my heartbeat. The first thing that came into my head was 'Oh crap..I'm dead'. Thankfully not. I started to do what Diamond Dallas Page once said on 'Confidential'..wiggle my toes. Thankfully..I could feel everything. All of a sudden, everything came back. The lights above me, that only five minutes ago seemed dim, became blinding. Chris and Brittney were over me, trying to revive me. I try to look around, and a sharp pain shot through me. They helped me to the locker room as the audience clapped. In the back, Power was chewing out Joe Taylor out. Terry Taylor came up to me and asked me if I was ok. I told him I was and asked how it went. Rooster said that one person looked good, and it was me. I thanked him, and told him it meant a lot. He told me that he would be at the next group training session with my opponent for iMPACT to work on the match. Bahl told me that he was so sorry that I broke my neck..even though my neck was not broken..I hope.
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Post by duan on Aug 29, 2008 0:07:24 GMT -5
haha last line had me laughing.
Oh the ropes of the indy business, botches galore. I hope you face Sharboy on Xplosion or something! haha
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Post by CF9™ on Aug 29, 2008 15:22:27 GMT -5
Haha, awesome update. The last sentence was great.
Cool to see you jobbing on iMPACT!, and I can't wait to see more of your indy work.
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Post by Ace Bennett on Aug 29, 2008 15:37:07 GMT -5
Read the whole thing and it's great. Everything you say is so realistic and I could see happening to someone in real life. I've read books that have entertained me less than this and nothing really entertains me after so few entries that is similar to this. Hope to see you eventually work your way up the totem poll and look forward to reading more. Funny too. KNOCK THE CRAP OUTTA THAT ZEUS GUY!
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Post by CF9™ on Aug 29, 2008 21:23:34 GMT -5
Evan mad. Evan want update.
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