HS 50 RP

[bigshad]

*Camera fades to a rich neighborhood where Chris Sanchez and his friends are playing basketball in his driveway*

"So...you think that I'm a minor stepping stone on your path to greatness? I know that this is my time...my time to shine, This is my first match so I know that people are going to put me down and think that i am the so called "Underdog" of this contest. Well I have got news for all of you, I am in the best shape of my life, I have been training for this match-up 5 hours a day for weeks now...You see Vinson, just because you have a background of being a good fighter and being raised on the streets, I don't care about that because i myself have a background as being a badass...People think because of I was raised into a rich family and because i had everything handed to me, that I am a slouch and I can't hold my own inside of the storied ring. Well my friend I consider you a minor stepping stone, and in the end you will just be a name, the name that becomes the first of a long list of names to be put into the "Fallen Victim" list of Chris "Lights Out" Sanchez.

*Video fades away as Sanchez shows his athleticism and dunks the basketball into the hoop, and he looks at the camera and smiles*

[bigshad]

So...yeah I kinda lost myself halfway through this but its the thought of roleplaying that counts I guess eh?

[bad guy™]

First and foremost...you really have to watch your mechanics (i.e: Grammar, Spelling, Punctuation, etc.) Most people get better with that in time, but just wantd to throw that out there.

Secondly, never mention the camera. That is kinda a pet-peeve of the guys here. Its like, we know we are 'watching' you, why do you have to tell us?

This is a very cliche RP, but then again, most debut RP's are. Read some of the seasoned guys RPs like sonstuds, Thunder, Obo, Revvie etc.

I see some potential dude. Hope you stick with us.

[sonstuds]

Correct me if I'm wrong but is this your first time getting booked? Cause didn't you sign up like two months ago?

[Calvin]

hahahahahhaha, more participation rps. Didnt' the deadline already pass, again?