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Post by SouthAmerican WF'er on Apr 14, 2006 21:42:25 GMT -5
Entry: Be sure to get an exciting variation of a snapshot, done to the extreme.  Or you could also have an Arab Finishing maneuver..  For your main dish, the chef highly recommends... A nice, Fisherman's Suplex, with some spinning action:  Or an always good, Ess Ess Pee:  Dessert is one of the most important things, and you can't miss a nice extreme sequence featuring Bob Holly, Muhammed Hassan, Daivari, and the ref:          
Ok, I am not too fond of the entry poses, but I didn't want them to go to waste. So yeah, a reply is always welcome. |
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Post by Cole on Apr 14, 2006 21:58:42 GMT -5
I like them...
All very well done, you've got great skills when it comes to mid move shots.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2006 23:58:09 GMT -5
ddt thing-looks really good i like it.Some of the things i don't like is that london is holding hollys leg and it kind looks like hollys knee is bent the wrong way abit.Other than that it is a really nice pose.
arab finisher-i really like this pose again.The one thing i would change on this is maybe make the pose kinda closer to impact i think that would make it more realistic i don't knwo if that makes sense though so what i meand is make the lower and have the clsoer to wehn they aer about to hit the table.
fisherman suplex-it looks good again but there are a couple of things i don't like.One of the things that i don't like is how the ladder is set up it just looks kinda pointless to me and something they would never do in a real match and the other thing i don't like is how londons legs are all split out it makes it look like a really sloppy suplex but maybe thats what you were going for.
ssp-it looks alright not one of my favourites.This is a hard move to capture in one pic i think but you did it alright some things i don't like are that it looks like london will not make it all the way to holly without hitting his head on the table or somehint and holly has a very boring reaction.
Extreme sequence.
pic 1-nice and simple but looks really good i like the fact that you have holly pulling hassan up it looks nice.
pic 2-simple and it looks pretty good nothing special though.
pic 3-looks great i relaly like this picture overall everything is nice i love how hassan looks just something about his postioning is great good job here.
pic 4-looks great again there are only a couple of things i think i would change.First of all i think i would try to make hassan look like he is looking at the ladder abit more but that might be tough and second i i would make it so it did not look like davari was doing a spinaroni.
pic 5-this pic is pretty good but i really kinda don't like how hassan has turned abit from the last picture i just don't think it looks very good.
pic 6-man i hate this picture i can not stand it for me it just about ruins the pose for me it just does not look good hassan is kinda stiff and he has completely turned from the oringinal way he was falling i like the idea of how he turns i just don't think it was done as good as it could have been.
pic 7-nothing really to say it looks alright its pretty somple though.
pic 8-its a nice pic i like how the table is tipping abit it looks nice a mid air table break would have really looked great in this situsation i think.
pic 9-hassans reaction is not very good imo he is just kindal lying there.
pic 10-wraps it up nice.
overall they are good poses but certanly not your best.
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Post by PhoeniX™: Valoween on Apr 15, 2006 6:53:45 GMT -5
Wow, I am blown away by the second one. The angle and positionings are phenominal...
Some nice shots here. I love how you pay attention to detail, like Noble looking downwards, how it looks like Holly is grabbing London's pants in the superplex, how Holly looks down before throwing Hassan down.
You pay attention to detail, and it really pays off in your poses. These are some of my favourites from you. Nice Work.
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Post by blade on Apr 15, 2006 18:14:32 GMT -5
snap shot - its good but the positionings need a little work, london looks great but i feel you could of done better with holly and noble as they look a little stiff. i think their legs need a little work and then it would be cool imo. nice shot overall. arabian facebuster? - awesome shot with a nice angle, the reaction from london is great and the positioning of hassan is perfect aswell. not much else to say other then its flawless. superplex - very good, flawless positionings by both holly and london in this and it looks lifelike, i like the height aswell with holly's feet just about on the ladder which is nice detail. overall pretty impressed with this jose. ssp - not much to say, its my least favourite tbh, holly's reaction isnt good and london seems lifeless. sorry jose but im not a fan  sequence - really nice, the detail in this is cool. hassan looks pretty sweet all through this pose and his reactions aswell are flawless and lifelike. holly again is  ing awesome aswell and looks ifelike with some great positionings. i like the end table break where hassan hits his head and just collapses the table with a little break as it just adds realism to the pose imo. overall im liking em jose, not your best but yeah they were cool. |
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Post by spender on Apr 15, 2006 21:16:38 GMT -5
Lmao at the Tie Fighter wing  |
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Post by Sound888 on Apr 16, 2006 3:15:04 GMT -5
the frist two arent that good imo. the snapshot is... how do u say it.. umm.. unrealistic.. the positions that is... gibson isnt the best choice for the snapshot.. legwise. he looks extremly stiff.. his legs at is... londons position is pretty bad too, his legs seem slacked-off. not a very good pose.. i suggest not to use it for posemania..
i suggest you not to use this pose for posemania either.. it looks.. weird (to say the last) to me. it looks like a top rope jeff jarrett stroke, but then again, it looks like a top rope backbreaker.. i dont see what youre looking to do here.. and also.. i think the table is bending foward...
the fisherman suplex is great. one of your better one-pic poses.. the only thing that distracts me is the "positioning" of holly's right foot, most people dont care much about the tiny placements of the foots or hands, but its still part of the pose and its one of the tiny things that make the pose look 10x better. also, you can almost never get a correct fisherman suplex with ra's, i think that pose looks like a hook'ed suplex, nothign special.
the shootin stah press is the best of the bunch imo, which is.. pretty bad.. well, not really.. ithink the suplex is better than this one. but i know you can do better... this one is a pretty average pose. london's spot in the rotation captures the move very well. and i can see string ;] and btw, is holly lying on a table that is mid-breaking when london is in air?.. pretty weird, but i see a crack in the middle of the table, and i see editing on the table legs, plus it's breaking apart.
the sequence i like. it flows very well. i love that you included a table scratch in it. the only prolbmes i have with the whole sequence is the third pic and the forth pic whhen hassans in mid air. the third pic just seems weird to me.. hassan's positioning is slopsided and is tilted.. imo, it doesnt fit the rest of the sequence.. the forth pic, when hes falling, is the only pic that bothers me quite a bit. he looks like he's just gunna tumble down the cd case, but in the next pic, he hits the ladder at a perfect straight angle, and it doesnt flow well at all if you ask me. the forth pic should have hassan horizontal, instead of head-down. i really like the rest of the pics though, especially the table scratch. t6he table is positioned very well, tipping on the edge, very professional. no comment on reactions
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Post by TheBigThing on Apr 16, 2006 23:36:48 GMT -5
Hardcore Holly/Muhammad Hassan sequence:
-Cool looking set-up for the first two shots
-I love the toss/grasp Holly has on Hassan in pic three
-Awkward angle on pic four
-I love the shot where Hassan hits the ladder, and the reaction from Daivari is great as well
-Hassan starting to fly over the top rope, as he glides with the motion of the ladder was creative, because it's probably a shot most would have not added
-Hassan could have a little more movement in this shot (frame right before hitting the table) his legs seem a bit lazy
-Love the impact shot. Having him hit the edge of the table, and not the entire thing was cool in this case
-The table break looks realistic, yet weak in a good way because it follows up from the last few shots
-The trademark 'assistance' at the end was a nice touch
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Post by hughgrection on Apr 23, 2007 13:02:19 GMT -5
Top Plz
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Post by ll ALASKA ll on Apr 23, 2007 14:09:45 GMT -5
Not the best sawf work out there, but pretty damn good. Was refreshing to see a pose by you.
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Post by bm4r on Apr 23, 2007 14:28:28 GMT -5
Not the best sawf work out there, but pretty damn good. Was refreshing to see a pose by you. sry razor but some one toped this it is old |
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Post by longhorn513 on Apr 23, 2007 15:03:00 GMT -5
i can hardly tell who each ones are doing like i mean are those single poses or are they like a whole move couldnt tell
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