Andrew
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Post by Andrew on Jun 27, 2007 14:51:35 GMT -5
I love this pose, As in reeeally love this pose, If anyone replys with a post count less than 100 and your in the B-Thread, Dont bother..Well unless its ego filling and what not. Anyway here is the warning, You have been warned. Nick says (20:47): OR GO  YOURSELF |
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mitch
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Post by mitch on Jun 27, 2007 14:57:33 GMT -5
wow timeout wow
edit later
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Post by Deleted on Jun 27, 2007 15:02:33 GMT -5
It's pretty good, now I have to eat me lunch, I'll reply better later >-:0
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Post by SouthAmerican WF'er on Jun 27, 2007 15:11:18 GMT -5
yeah, seems like you're pretty good with one figure in the air poses now. the run was decent and the first jump looked good. I really HATE the transition between pics 10 and 11, it really hurts the pose because there is a frame missing. I also dislike how shelton lands perfectly on orton, ugh. I also don't like frame number seven, kind of gives the pose a slow motion effect and you don't need that here. In frame 7, shelton should have been more tilted. So you're improving, but again, try something harder. Like the spanish fly or something.
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Andrew
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Post by Andrew on Jun 27, 2007 15:13:42 GMT -5
I suppose this is better than noob replys >_>
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Post by noname on Jun 27, 2007 16:34:44 GMT -5
I don't like it. Shelton's arms are in the same spot throughout the whole thing.
He has "action figure-like" movements and not real-life positioning. It looks goofy.
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Post by in utero on Jun 27, 2007 20:19:55 GMT -5
... that looked like a ing circus act. |
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Post by goalie on Jun 27, 2007 23:14:17 GMT -5
... that looked like a ing circus act. That really helps him improve...Anyways its alright, one of your better ones. Pictures one to four all look nice, though Sheltons arms in pic two mess it up slightly. Picture five isn't very good, Benjamin should be crouched down getting ready to jump rather then on his tippy toes. Picture seven needs to go, it doesn't help the flow what so ever. Pic eight is awesome, I love Benjamin's position and the lighting really looks nice. Pic nine is actually very good too, it flowed well and had nice positioning. Pic ten messes up the flow, it appears Benjamin is just going for a splash when really he is turning into a senton, you should have turned his torso more to show the twisting motion was still in effect. Some flow issues here, but not a bad pic. Reactions are alright but a tad boring at the same time, nice picture at the end, very fitting. You're getting better keep at it. |
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