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Post by sean™ on Dec 17, 2006 19:31:40 GMT -5
me and my brushes got bored i might "redo" both cd's cover, spine, and back depends on how bored i am not too fond of some of the text but yea
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Post by waylon on Dec 17, 2006 23:24:35 GMT -5
I really like the cityscape and the brushing, however, I dont like the text. In my opinion, you overuse that font. Try finding a different font as I really feel that could help the graphic as a whole. Other than the text, I like it. The brushing and color scheme look great.
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Post by becca on Dec 18, 2006 2:23:29 GMT -5
so I really like the colors, the background and the buildings, but the text isn't working for me particularly. I don't mind the font, but I don't get why the shadow under the word city is a different shadow than the rest of the text. Also, "I am the movie" isn't lined up with anything, it would look better, imo, if it were lined up either on the right or the left. Finally, I don't think the positioning of the picture/text is really doing anything for this, it just seems placed in the center, it might be more interesting off to one side or cut off the page.
but obviously its better than basically everything else on this board.
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Post by Archibald on Dec 18, 2006 18:45:55 GMT -5
Here comes the pattern: I come back for graphics like this.
The absolute grunge feel comes through in every aspect of this graphic. I feel urban and dirty just looking at it! The angle is great and the text work is fantastic (I wouldn't know if you use it too much). The cityscape is brilliant and a really nice 'human' touch to the simple text.
I think there are only two dangers in this graphic. The 'soundtrack' red might get it lost in the background a bit. That's only a slight tone difference though. I also feel like the placement of the text is original, but it's creeping off the page. It feels like the whole thing is going to fall right off the right hand edge.
Obviously a brilliant graphic that has great practical use. It would be awesome to see what other kind of promotional material you could create using this same aesthetic design.
Awesome.
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Post by sickchrismondo on Dec 19, 2006 9:42:42 GMT -5
That's really nice. The colours are pretty vibrant but it kinda works here. I'm also really fond of the font. I haven't seen tons of your stuff so it doesn't seem overused to me. But either way it works well for the graphic. The skyscrapers all look really nice and really well done too. A very cool piece of work.
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