Calvin Lee: The search begins Dec 12/06

[Calvin]

Echoing all around. The speaking of a man, echoes all around this gigantic room. It’s extremely bright, with the ceiling full of florescent lights. Looking to the left, to see cement walls. They have to be about, at least twenty feet high. If not, more. On the walls, are a bunch of these red mats. They go all the around the perimeter of the cement walls. Following the walls all around, to see that these walls surround the whole room. On the right side of the walls, it is possible to see a bunch of banners. These banners read varies rewards, all that seem to do with the idea of fighting. Obviously by now, it clues in that this is a gym of some sort. The echoing is heard again, and with one look, it is noticed that there is a bunch of people in the gym. All ages twenty to thirty years old. There is about, fifteen of them all here. There are two more standing up, and are seemingly the leaders of the group. Both are wearing pure white suits, seeming karate suits. It is noticed that these two are Calvin Lee, and EBR. Calvin Lee looks at the group of kids, and starts to give his speech.[/size]


Calvin Lee: I look at this amazing group of students here. You all look like you have the potential to be a very successful body guard. But looks can be deceiving, I am going to run a couple drills to see which of you is the perfect body guard.


So Reverend Shadow goes out and gets himself a body guard. What a smart idea. I think I am going to do the same. I mean, you never know when someone comes up on your back, and takes you out. Plus, I could use someone, as EBR is going to be leaving WFWF soon. I want someone to be on my side, since this whole place seems to hate me. I just want to make sure, I get someone who is so much better then K.C. Mcgrath.


Calvin Lee: One of you will be with me at all times. Watching my back, making sure no one tries to get a cheap shot on me, Calvin Lee. Because everyone wants me to go down. I am the one here everyone hates because they all can’t seem to realize the greatness that Calvin Lee holes inside him. I hope everyone here warmed up, because this is no easy task. You will be dragged down, then back up. And Dragged down once more. I hope you all are ready for a work out you’ll never forget.


This guy is like, brand new to the WFWF. Why am I facing a new guy? In all honesty, I can only think of one real reason. Reverend Shadow is afraid of Calvin Lee. He doesn’t want Calvin Lee to be in the championship hunt. So he sends this nobody jobbing body guard against me. Smart move there. I may have lost last week, but look at I had on my team. I had some Spanish freak who thinks he can do something here, and he can’t even get off the midcard level. And he’s been here for like, ever. And then I have this rookie FEMALE. Of course she’s going to do nothing, she’s a female. Females can’t do anything, but distract males. And she couldn’t even do that! My team was useless. Of course I was going to lose. They will learn though, Calvin Lee will get what he wants.[/size]


Calvin Lee: Lets start off with some simple drills. Pair up, and show me what you all got.


All the men start to pair up, and they show Calvin Lee and EBR everything they have. EBR walks up to Lee, and nudges him. Calvin Lee looks at EBR, he seems to have something on his mind. Calvin Lee looks at him.


Calvin Lee: So, which one do you like?


EBR: To be honest, these guys I wouldn’t even trust as my body guard. They suck. They remind me of those high school bullies.


Calvin Lee: That’s good or bad?


EBR: Well, considering most are pussies, that’s bad.


So basically, these kids suck. I don’t even know what the hell they are wanting out of this. I hope K.C. isn’t as bad as these guys. I mean, they can’t even stay up for two seconds. They try a leg sweep, and they are already down and out. Wow. Plain sadness there. K.C. should be better then this. I mean, Rev Shadow did pick him. He’s smarter then this, I think. None of these guys would make it as my body guard. Hell, they probably won’t last against K.C. And that’s saying a lot. This match will be short if K.C. is as bad as these guys. Really short.


Calvin Lee: OK! BRING IT IN!


All the guys stop, most are on their backs, breathless. Calvin Lee looks at them, and shakes his head in shame. He paces back and forth, with an extremely annoyed look on his face.


Calvin Lee: What the hell? I thought you guys said you were good! You liars! I guess I have to pick someone.


Although all of them wouldn’t even do. Why am I even doing this anyways? A body guard shows weakness. I am not weak. I am strong. I am Calvin Lee. Calvin Lee doesn’t need any body guard. Calvin Lee needs a title opportunity. And Calvin Lee is going to get one.


Calvin Lee: This was pointless. Screw you all! What a bad idea.


EBR: You always have bad ideas.


Calvin Lee: Yeah, I guess that’s true. I don’t need any of you guys. Get out of here. You want to be a body guard? You won’t be mine. Go be like, someone else’s body guard. Apparently you don’t need to do anything to be Reverend’s. Go be his. He’s going to need one anyways, after this week.


EBR: Calvin, you really gotta start rethinking your plans.


Calvin Lee: What do you mean?


EBR: First you steal a mailbox, and now this. Where’s your brains?


Calvin Lee: Well, yours isn’t any better you know.


EBR: How so?


Calvin Lee: Dude, we bet wrong last week.


EBR: No you couldn’t finish the deal.


Calvin Lee: Hell no, it was not my fault!


EBR: Calm down dude…you sound like you lost a million dollars.


Calvin Lee: What the hell?


EBR: What?


Calvin Lee: I’m just pissed. I swear I am being held back, more then I was when FLAPS ran this place. I hate it when I am held back. I deserve more then this. I deserve a chance at that title. I want to show this place what Calvin Lee can do. And facing these no name rookies like I have been these past couple weeks, is not helping. If this keeps up, Calvin Lee is going to have to just find another way to get a shot at this title. And now that you are leaving, I have to do it on my own.


EBR: You don’t need me Calvin. You’ll do just as great without me or Al by your side. We have taught you well, and you pass.


Calvin Lee: Pass what?


EBR: I’m not sure, I just figured that’s what you wanted to hear.


Calvin Lee: Okay…whatever. I know I can win. I mean, especially when I’m against rookies. Dude, they gotta stop doing this to me.


EBR: It’s because these owners can do what they want, and they can book you how they want. And they can get away with it, because they are the owners.


Calvin Lee: Atleast CBT went on hiatus. What an ass. He puts Reverend Shadow into the tourney. Out of all people, him.


Yeah, these god damn owners piss me off. Why can’t the WFWF ever get these owners right. They just keep naming owners who put themselves in title opportunities. I guess this place isn’t as good as I thought. I guess I’m on my own in changing the WFWF for the better.


Calvin Lee: Ok I’ve had it. This is the last draw. I’m going to show Reverend and CBT just why Calvin Lee is in the WFWF. Not to lose, not to please. Not to be against rookies, teamed with females, or be on the lower part of the card. Calvin Lee is here to win, and become champion. Calvin Lee is going to show the world that he will be the next WFWF world Champion. And it starts, with this week. Reverend shadow thinks he can put this “bodyguard” of his against me? Hah! What a coward. Why don’t you just put me up against Kurt Burton, he’d be a better opponent then this guy. I’d still win, but at least I’ve maybe have a match out of it.


EBR: And anoth…


Calvin Lee: Shut up, I’m on a roll! I’ll take out K.C. McGrath this week, and next week, my quest to become champion begins. Whoever gets in my way, will be taken out. Whoever I have to beat, whatever needs to be proved. No matter how long it takes. Calvin Lee WILL be champion.


EBR: YOU GO GIRL!


Calvin Lee: Huh??


EBR: What?


Calvin Lee: What just you just call me???


Awkward silence arises.


Calvin Lee: WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL ME?


EBR: Oh nothing…


Calvin Lee: Good. KC. I’m sorry, but you have been placed in the wrong spot. It’s a shame you’re career is going to be so short here in the WFWF. But hey, it isn’t my fault. Blame your boss. Calvin Lee has had it. I want to be champion. And not a thing is going to stop me. Watch up WFWF, here comes Calvin Lee!


Calvin Lee and EBR turn, and walk out, while negating in casual conversation.

[Calvin]

Ok, so new style here. Incase anyone hasn't figured it out, the blue bolding, is kinda like the mologue part. Basically, the part no one can hear. His thoughts so to speak. Tell me what you think. I truly want to hear your comments on this, because I want to know, if this style works or not. And I don't want to go a way that well, sucks ass. So please, tell me what you think.

[CBT]

Alright, here's the deal.
Karate suit in narration, sounds border-line intellectually- disabled, Its a Gi. Learn it, live it, love it.. or i'll choke you out with one.

As for the RP, I'm very impressed. This RP delivered in what you attempted to express, a whiny Calvin Lee.. but one who believes he is greater then good, and deserves better.
The concept I worried about, but you pulled it off quite well, no swerve or bait and switch. direct to the point, your held down in wfwf, and given the opportunity. you'd show how great Calvin Lee is.

You were bastardized with typos and mistakes in grammar, but the rp was very good. Your monologue is always top notch in putting over exactly what Lee is thinking.
Good job and good luck man

Edit: Oh, and I'm a ass? you no-showing bastard. We will meet again, and I will beat you. Not because I am owner, but because Higher Authority > Anointed ;D

[hurricanehelms2]

I enjoyed this RP. I've always prefered thoughts, dialogue to big discriptions. I'd put the different characters in different colors though. It would just be neater.

[Calvin]

I was going to Tator...but I honestly don't remember what EBR's character colour code is.

[Revvie®]

I actually enjoyed this rp quite a bit, i think i like this humor thing you have been doing lately alot better then some of your stuff that i have read. With you and EBR it jus seems right.

I liked the format for this rp, it helped it a lot. You covered your point in a very humorous fashion and it kind of flattered me how much mention i got

but on a serious note, the only thing i think that would have added to this rp and could have amped it up, is like a lil more scene describing of the ppl wanting to be your body guards, like tripping and funny little things. And maybe one trying to talk to you. But yea.

All in All this was a pretty good rp. Humor in rps can work and in this one it did imo.

Revvie