Odium RP. Return Of The Red, White, And Blue.

[hurricanehelms2]

The green grass, the blue skies, tall trees, god, I missed this place. Used to come here all the time. Just to sit and think. A good old fashion park. Benches everywhere, children play. How could you not love a place like this. Sadly, like most of the things you love, you have to let them go, but not forever. If you really love it, one of you will come back. And that’s what I have done. I have returned to the place I love, WFWF. Mr. WFWF studios man, cue the flashback style effects.....now.

Our scene, your typical semi messy bedroom. Clothes lay on the floor, a couple of cans too, but other than that, it’s a pretty clean place.

A man rolls out of bed, wearing nothing but Superman boxers. He gets up, and walks out into kitchen. He sits down with his girlfriend and stares down at his breakfast. Burnt eggs and toast. He takes a bite of the eggs, and then puts his fork down.

Cold, burnt eggs and toast. Crappy, but lord knows she tries. And that’s all that matters. Doing your best.

Your cooking is getting better, honey.

Really?

She smiles.

Yea, these aren’t half bad. Can you go check the mail?

Lying, sometimes it’s necessary to protect those we love.

He laughs a little, and goes back to eating.

Hey Joe, you got a letter from WFWF.

I stopped eating at once. I couldn’t wait to tear into it, it’d been out of the business for almost half a year now. And opportunities from the top companies don’t come that often. I quickly scanned through it . Basically the letter read,

Mr. Kessen,

OMGZ We NEED you. WFWF is really in need of great stars. Please come work for us. None of our stars are even close to your talent. And that includes us. You’d be champion in weeks. Think about it. Come work for us. Please?

Much love,
Drakz
And your biggest fan,
Michael Kyzer

How could I say no? What? You don’t believe me? Ok, ok, so maybe I’m the one who gave them a call. The point is, I got a letter, and they were offering me a job. And THAT, I could not say no to. I called them back up, and well the rest is history.

Mr. Studio, end your flashback effects.....now. Cut back to the park. That’s right, with the green grass, blue sky, you know the deal.

Ok, so now you know why I’m back. But was it just wanting to come back? Nope. I came back for all of you, my fans. I have love and respect for all of you. Something two other superstars don’t have. And yes, I’m referring to my opponents for my return match.

Thunder, we all know you don’t care about the fans. All you care about is your money. And that is just wrong, being selfish won’t get you anywhere. Let me tell you a story about a selfish man in American history. His name was....well no one knows what his name was. He was selfish and got no where. So no one remembered him. Get the point yet? If you don’t care about the fans, they won’t care about you. And so they won’t remember you.

Whose my other opponent? I’m glad you asked. Mr. Tony The Dragon. Ah, Dragon. How scary. Should I ask where that came from? Class? Oh pick me, pick me. Yes, Joe? He summons a Dragon as his strength for his match! What kind of crap is that? Seriously, I don’t know where it came from. But it better not be

Joe makes quotation marks with his hands.

summoning a dragon. Why? Because during my matches, I summon the American spirit, the eagle. And you know what makes the eagle better? Eagles are real man. Just like my victory tonight will be. I’m the real deal, your career is based on a myth.

Joe stands up and looks to the sky.

America! Tonight the Red, White, And Blue will obtain victory over two opponents. And after the match,

[i]And after the match.........

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The American Dream Will Have Been Realized.

I am the American Dream Joe Kessen, and I will see you tonight. [/center]

[Yukio Blaze]

You said, you was kinda stuck but it came out pretty good. I know your coming off a little break, so that's why the rust is there.

Flashback's were a nice touch and so was Boss #1 and Boss #1 "kissing your ass". That's funny.

So good luck.

[tobeornottobe]

hurricanehelms2 said:

And your biggest fan,
Michael Kyzer

Classic....This rp was actually a very good read, Tater. Even though i have seen better from you, this wasnt too bad....Good luck in your match and once again I am sorry for no showing Scars and Stripes

[Revvie®]

I think its great to see Kessen back and I think you flow alot better with him then you ever did with Xavier. I do think like Yukio your a little rusty with Kessen but this rp wasnt bad really so I hope to keep seeing Kessen...good luck in your match and nice rp

Reverend Shadow

[Calvin]

This seemed like you were telling a story.....I like that....it's like you are speaking your thoughts in storyline form, I dont think I've seen it before. It's an interesting style and I think you should keep with it.

Description was good, the one thing I didn't like is when you said "now go back to the park....with the grass andall that stuff." That's not how you worded it, but I think you could have said it differently....I think it may have worked better if you never mentioned the park until after the letter flashback. And the letter was a great idea. I loved how you made your character really cocky by making Drakz and Kyzer say in letter form they needed you.

Speech was good, as I said before...it was in storyline form, which I liked. I really recommend you keep with it.

[somethingmore]

A good RP.. You may want to make the Thinking and Speaking different colors, it will make it easier to read/understand.. You may want to add some more detail to it too..

Good RP Tater..