Odium RP: Final Preparations

[ZMaster]

Momentum may have changed for one night but this is still a test. I only have so much time left before it’s time to go and I must finish out the right way. A match is coming up against a man I had faced before on a few occasions. I remember teaming up with one match and that was it with him. He was one of the men I had to face to claim my only WFWF World Heavyweight Title in my 1st attempt. I know he’s been there for years and is making a minor comeback. His war is with The Anointed and I won’t stop him on that. I will however stop him from claiming victory over me. I’ve had my share of bad luck over the weeks but it must come to an end. I may have gotten the pin fall victory in the tag team match but that doesn’t mean I’ve proven anything just yet. This Odium is the final one until I begin preparation for battle at Superbrawl IV against CBT. Right now, my focus is you M.O.D. so you best be warned that I’m not here to play games or let you use me as your stepping stone.
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The time has moved on and the area has become an open field. The sand is smooth and it has the feel of a dessert. The sky itself is cloudy with a very heavy heat in the 90s. It’s humidity has given it a feel of a temperature in the 100s. ZMaster has been here on his own quest to find himself in another test of mental stability. For some time, he’s questioned whether or not he has anything left to offer or that he’s done all that he could. Just last edition of Odium, he was a winner picking up the victory in the tag team match. Now he has to come to the “go home” edition where he squares off against Master of Destruction. He begins to think clearly of what happened and then moves on.

ZMaster: Last Odium, I scored a pin fall victory. It was a tag match in preparation for the next big battle for Superbrawl IV pinning Tha CBT. This just isn’t good enough. I did that in a tag match but until I claim victory in a 1 on 1 situation, it just doesn’t matter and nothing has been proven. It seems that my own Hour Glass seems to be getting close to empty. There is still time left right now and it’s not time to end. CBT, I gave you another piece but when it comes to 1 on 1 at Superbrawl IV, you’ll get me at full strength whether you like it or not. I’ll have more for you later on when the time comes.

When ZMaster stopped talking for a minute, an image on the sky has formed with some of the clouds. They form into a person’s face and it looks to be that of a man that has the same look as ZMaster himself. Could that be a mirage?

Retro ZMaster: So you got one victory so far. Keep in mind that you have Master of Destruction and he has never been an easy opponent. I know because I remember facing off and claiming that title in the past when you were once me. Don’t keep going with this down talk that you seem to be doing as of late.

The face changed and no longer was seen. ZMaster had looked up there and thought he was seeing things. He does have that match with Master of Destruction on his mind. Those two have faced off a few times. He begins walking and thinking about what was said and what he has to do for the next match.

ZMaster: So I must be in the ring with Master of Destruction. It seems fitting as he was one of the men that was defeated in my quest to be WFWF Champion. Perhaps I could say that was the peak but it doesn’t begin there. The history between us began at my earliest stages but was thought of as nothing. I had teamed with him just one time before a major decision to move down to WFDC to develop myself even further. We came out on as victorious against two men I believe were Robby Wreckless and Larry the Locksmith.

I had then done a split deal between WFDC and WFWF and I faced Master of Destruction and I beat him. Though I was still in development, the question would be what would happen in a big match situation? Well, that fateful day at Apocalypse Day, I was scheduled in a triple threat match for the vacant WFWF Championship. It was myself, Total Apocalypse and Master of Destruction all going for the gold, the ending was clear and I was the victor. But that’s not all, it would seem that a special event I would face Master of Destruction and would claim victory once again.

Now we face off again this time at Odium. You have The Anointed to deal with whilst I have Tha CBT to deal with. M.O.D. I have no beef with you at this time though our history may say otherwise. The only thing I want is victory and nothing more. I don’t care about your war with them whilst I could say the same about you not caring about what I have to deal with. I want you by yourself and not TA involved one bit. If you are the man that has taken me to limits in the past, you’ll fight me alone and that’s about it.

ZMaster pauses for a second but then continues.

ZMaster: Master of Destruction, come Odium, we will see your Destruction. You’ve been broken down before and crack under pressure, and I’m sure to capitalize on that. You know how tough I am and I know how tough you are. In the end, there will be only one victor and that is me.

With all that said and done, there are still questions that come to past? Is ZMaster going to be able to survive at Odium and lead to Superbrawl IV? What does he mean by the Hour Glass has become near empty on him? Will Tha CBT get involved in the match? The same could be said for Alex Sean or EBR for that matter? What will happen in the next round between these 2? All this and more on the next exciting edition of Odium, fade out.

[ZMaster]

I'm done and I still can't seem to get myself going for some reason. Yeah they come out decent, but something is missing. I think after Superbrawl IV, I'll probably need to regroup and see where I'm at. All in all, it was ok. Feedback isn't required but is appreciated.

On to writing my Superbrawl IV rp and getting it started before I forget about it.

[Master of Destruction]

I thought this was a good RP...not your best but still a good one never the less. I think me and you are at similar RP'ing stages at the minute. You say you cannot get yourself going and I am still trying to get myself going.

Should be a good match.

Good Luck.

[Yukio Blaze]

I thought this rp flowed were well with the setting and description. I am also loving the "Retro ZMaster" split personality ordeal.


Good luck to you against MOD.

[Deleted]

As usual ZMaster there was no real flaw to the RP but there was nothing that made it stand out as a good RP if that makes sense? It seemed so generic I did like the old ZM talking to the current one though I think you should run with that idea. Conversations with mirrors that talk back etc maybe? Good luck against MOD man

[Calvin]

I think this rp are ok, but you are right, something is missing. As Drakz kind of mentioned, it kind of sounds generic. I think what you gotta to is try new stuff, and see if you can find anything new to add into your rps to spice them up. I kind of liked last week when you had zmaster talking to retro Zmaster, but I dunno, it seems kind of in my opinion, kind of repeative if you were to keep doing it....but thats my opinion.

Destription was pretty good, nothing wrong with it at all.

Speech was pretty good too, bringing up the past does give something in the rp. Although Zmaster's speech I think is what is lacking. I tihnk it's in your speech that there is something missing. It's hard to explain, but he sounds like he's talking in one tone. Some people might not agree with me on this one, but I think you gotta spice up your speech a little, see if a new attitude works for Zmaster.

[Revvie®]

Solid but like Drakz said there is really nothing amazing about it. I think this rp will work and it doesn't really have anything wrong with it so to speak. Well good luck and solid rp man. Also I'm still liking the talking to the old you thing but I think you could have done more with it...ok thats all...

Reverend Shadow

[CBT]

Interesting. I'm probably one of the few to not like the Retro ZMaster. Not for the given reasons either.
I understand its you looking into your past, and sort of like a mid-career crisis. But its still hokey to me. But I will say this, what ever builds a fire, keeps you warm. So I'll watch to see what kind of heat you get out of this direction.
Speech was tight, you always have delivered on speech. Its always great to relate to your history in wfwf. knowing what you've accomplished can help you in a slump.. or to break the 3rd wall, writer's block.

Description was interesting, how you move from a dream to illusions(if that works?), makes it go from a scene/scenario into part of your character. I just hope with each RP you figure out what you want to do with Retro ZMaster.
I personally found no flaws, but thats only because I'm not sure the relevance of the Retro ZMaster. Other then that, another great rp, good luck against MOD.

[B-Radimus Prime]

This was a nice read. The description and speech were both really solid and nothing seemed wrong with it at all. Nice job, Zmaster and Good Luck!