WAP presents: Birth of a new era

[mitch]

Yep, debut show. It's like, 5 months in the making, and I have kinda been pissing Eyce and Goalie off, since I always quit halfway through filming. But I finally produced a show! Please ignore KENTA's attire, my net was off when I customed him, so he has the wrong attire. It will be fixed in the next show though.

Thanks, and, well, heres the show:

www.freewebs.com/birth_of_a_new_era/

Enjoy ;D

[Deleted]

It’s about time you finished a show now I will reply. Hmm, AJ Styles custom looking interesting, I will have to see the painting and such to judge it more. Jimmy Jacobs and Delirious look great, very nice name plates to. Oh one thing, I would change your font colour, it is slightly hard to read because of it being red on red. Super Dragon and Kenta both look fairly good, little bit sloppy but whatever. Daniels looks amazing, Punks skin tones don't match all to well but that might be flash. Seems to be a nice card, I shall see.

The lighting effects look great on Aj's entrance; though I don't think you needed them in as many pics as you had them. Nice arena by the way, everything looks good, except I can't say I overly like the entrance ramp right to the ring. Nice pyro for London though doesn't really give the indyish feel I think you wanted. Decent looking lockup, it looked like London got the better of it by quite abit. The arm drag was rather strange looking, arm drags are really tough to pull off with figures but I still think it could have been done better. The running of Styles is pretty stiff, if possible I would prefer to see you use string though that is a pain. The flying clothesline looked good, nice reaction from London, and it had good flow. The reverse DDT could have used a mid air pic though not a big deal. Aj's running was much better this time. Nice fist drop by London though from the first pic it looked as if he might overshoot London....again not a big deal. London’s suplex looked like more of a bridge over pic type thing rather than a suplex to me, but still looked nice regardless. AJ lifting up out of the bridge looked quite nice simple but pulled off well. You could have defiantly gone with another pic before Styles gets into the power bomb pickup position, just to help it flow nicer and be a bit clearer. Hmm the counter to the dominator took me a while to understand completely but once I did I really loved the innovativeness of it, again though it could have used a couple of more pics to help along the flow. Did London do a 450 splash or SSP, either way it needed some more pics in my opinion. A somewhat short match but it was a opener so it’s okay, while the match was going on it had great points and really good action.

Delirious promo, short and some what pointless but whatever. I rather like your commentating, it’s quite humorous. Delirious sliding around the ring and such looked good. Pretty nice looking cross body by Jacobs though again I think you could make it flow nicer. The spinning back elbow was nice, the running looked great. Nice forearm shot, though it seemed like the figures moved forward during the actual contact shot. For the starting picture of the suplex you have Jacobs arm in a really awkward position, it was all twisted and such, but what can you do with RA's. I really liked the counter of the suplex into the Diamond cutter neck breaker type thing, it looked great. You have a pic down. The starting pic of the Irish whip to be exact. Heh, Jacobs SSP body press was nice, but again you needed a pic to help the flow of it...Jacobs’s wins, a rather short match if you ask me, it was great while it lasted though.

Super Dragon vs. Kenta....should be good. I really loved the angle through the chain link fence thing. Kenta's knee was shaky, I couldn't really tell what was going on, but heck that’s what commentating is for. The half nelson disappointed me you not adding a mid air pic and such, though it still looked pretty good. Dragons elbow looked well enough. Amazing looking dragon suplex, I loved it pose of the show if you ask me. Missing another pic right after the dragon suplex. The face buster into the turnbuckle was slightly confusing but looked nice still. Again you need to add more pics to your mid air moves, I can't stress that enough, though at least you make a effort and use string, it really helps. Nice counter to the physco driver. Awesome looking go to sleep, another great pose. One more missing pic. Dragon kicks out! Somewhat pointless having people kicking out of finishers that has always bothered me. Missing pic for the physco driver, sorda messed up the flow. Another kick out after a finished.....this is disappointing me. Awesome looking suplex by Dragon, it looked really nice. When the commentating said right hand....it was really Kenta's left : X not a big deal a simple mistake. Nice knee kick thing it really looked nice. The curb stomp sequence wasn't great but it did the job well enough. Great match, the only real thing I didn't like was the kicking out of signature moves.

I love your Daniels custom, Punk is nice to. This should be a good match. Nice looking lockup. The headlock by Punk was a little meh, but still not bad. Nice arm wrenches by Punk, and the suplex looked nice as well. Ahh got to love the neck bump age. The sleeper hold looks nice, bout the best you can do with RA's. Daniels counter was great, it was simple but pulled off with perfection, really great flow. The half Boston crab looked pretty good, nothing wrong with it. The angel’s wings counter was a little confusing but I liked the creativity of it. Punk throwing Daniels back into the ring looked nice, good flow and just worked. The back breaker was shaky, the pickup looked like he was going for a tiger driver but ended up with the back breaker, just a little out of place I guess. Nice looking crossbow I suppose. You pulled the last rites of really nice, I was impressed to say the least. The jump up or multiple jump up's to the BME were a little bit ehh not so great looking, but still you will get better at stuff like this as you practice. Punk seemed to get up awfully fast from the last rites. Nice Pepsi plunge, it looked great in all honesty one of the better poses of the show I really liked it. Punk wins! Good match a little bit short but that’s to be expected for a newer fed. Great action throughout it.

[mitch]

Thank you so much dude, and thanks for the tips. I'll look to improve next show.

[unprettier]

Wow...that was pretty awesome

[lightsout]

I never heard of you. But I'll watch this show

AJ vs London: Great Styles custom and it was some great action in this match

EDIT: My bad I accidently hit post

Jimmy Jacobs vs Deliorus: I don't watch ROH or Indys and don't know who these guys are. But good match, I like Jacobs finsiher

KENTA vs Super Dragon: Good action I like the Physco driver reversal to a go to sleep. T finsih the match with a curbstomp was good. So thats was that move on of these guys avis

Edit again: I hit post again

CM Punk vs The Fallen Angel: Thats a pretty good Punk custom. Man this is a good match, preety much like if they faced each other. A BME that was stoped and tunred into a PEPSI PLUNGE

Pretty cool show, I liked how you did it. I hope to see more from you in the future

[alex123ecw]

BofNE was great!

[ami8]

That show was incredible. I loved the fact you went totally indy with it, and I assume all of those great customs were by you?

Anyway, you didn't do the Delirious mad breakout at the ring bell, therefore you lose ¬_¬.

I enjoyed Kenta vs. Dragon, but I hope Kenta isn't on all the shows, as he does have prior commitments to NOAH

The one flaw with this show is that there was no progression of anything, and it was very short.

Apart from that, Daniels vs. Punk was great, and that Pepsi Plunge looked incredible. Again though, I was expecting something to go down post match, and nothing did.

Overall however, it was a good show, so I'd give it a 8/10, with you losing marks on:

- No progression atall, which is a shame considering the vast amounts of indy storylines available.

- A very short card, 4 matches doesn't cut it in Indy. If you have to, customize tag teams and bunk matches with them on the card.

[dmallett4]

Great Zach, wanted to see this in ages now.
Sweet layout, i <3 that delirious custom, not too mad on the AJ mind. Kenta doesnt look too good either tbh, i will decide when i get some bigger pics.

London V AJ - I really like your arena right now, looks sweet. Cool entrance effects. I really like that fist, for some reason the bluriness maks it look sweet. You really need a ref, how about customizing one or something? Quite a short match

Delirious V Jacobs - I <3 delirious, as long as he goes uber mad right now, i will mark big time. Booooo. Your ring looks really big. for some reason, is it a custom? Wow i like that neckbreaker. Holy crap, what the was that! What the hell was it? a shooting star tpye thing?

Dragon V Kenta - What a hard hitting match already, i loved that tiger suplex. Sweet G2S early on, awesome! Yeah saw a kickout there, not surprised tbh, now a psycho drivah! Awesome, and another kick out! No way, dragon shouldnt of won with the stomp

Punk V Daniels - I love AFI, so cant help but wait for the entrance to finish. Not to keen on the punk really, jericho head? I do like that Daniels on the other hand. I love the look of the plunge. Nooo, youre matches are way too short.

Please make your shows longer, you have a lot of plusses, like the poses, the entrances he match work is good, just too short.

Keep up the good work though Zach, just make the matches longer, and your fed is a killer.

[Eyce]

I'd watch the show and all, but my Net has been capped.

[Snitch]

First of all, i really like the setup and the lights during the entrance are great.

Styles V London

Great reversal into the DDT. surprisingly short, would have liked to see more high flying stuff.

Delirious V Jimmy Jacobs

Again, pretty short but the finisher was great.

KENTA V Super Dragon

Great lighting effects with Dragons entrance. Dragon Suplex onto the turnbuckle, awesome. When KENTA was serving up right hands, he hit him with his left hand Great match, longer than the others which was nice.

CM Punk V Christopher Daniels

Pretty sweet match, rather short but the ending was awesome.


Really nice show, setup was great but the matches where rather short.

[Deleted]

Nice 1, ANOTHER indy fed.

Just Kidding.

Your production is very original. Like the music and fireworks..
AJ vs London was cool! Your poses are very good. <3'd the 450! Didnt see London winning, meh.
Delirious! Nice 1!!
JJ! Nice! Great match.. Jacobs won, meh, im 0-2 down on my predictions thus far.
KENTA vs Dragon, nice! Good match the poses were very good.
Psycho driver kicked ass! Curb stomp!!!
Dragon wins and yes, you guessed it, im 0-3 down on my predictions!
Ill go out on a bit of a limb and say you wont follow the 'thall shall love punk' phase some of the noobs are experiencing... and Daniels will win..
Nice BME counter, Pespi Plunge!! Kickout... plz... Nevermind. Great win for punk!

Absolutly excellent show! Your poses are fantastic dude. That is the best INDY fed ive seen on this board since ROP... Matches were a nice length aswell. Great job.

[kametsou]

I WANT YOUR SUPER DRAGON CUSTOM!

Anyways, great show... 8/10.

[mitch]

Thanks guys. The reason why London vs AJ was so short, is because it was supposed to be the main event. I was aiming for over 400 pics in t hat match. But while doing the SSP, my custom ring snapped. So yeah, Im looking at getting the Cell ring.

The next show will definately be longer, you can count on that.

[cradleshock]

Indy Wrestling>WWE Crap...
Love the style, extremly awesome customs, esspecialy Jacobs. Did you made them? BTW a reminder- mine suck... don't laugh when you see them when my first 'event' will 'air'. 'ok'?
Styles vs. London was kinda short, but very great.
Delirious! Bararara!
Awesome faced paced begining.
"Jack Benton: Oh, let me guess, if Jacobs doesn't win, will he go and cut himself?" GOLD!
Kinda short match, but still great.
I gotta tell you, your KENTA custom is effing sweet!
Go 2 Sleep!
Psycho Drivahh!
Busaiku Knee Kick!
Curb Stomp!
Awesome match!
The main event was super sweet.
The indie spirit will ever live!

[Strike]

Really great show, Zach. WAP should get more intresting when storylines develop and such, but this show was just amazing. Pretty decent customs for this fed. Im really liking the Delirious Promo. Music choice for wrestlers matched up really nicely. Overall, really great matches, and fed, cant wait to see more!

[dmallett4]

corleone said:

I thought that your show was horrible. How can you have a pic fed with no pics. It sucked dude.

haha