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Post by Deleted on Dec 27, 2015 15:51:13 GMT -5
Yes I'm finally getting my hands dirty in the water that is known as Pic feding now I want you to look at one I just recently created, it's 10 seconds long, and I want you guys to be critical with me, tell me what I did right or wrong, if it's blurry, if it's too slow I would just love to get your opinions.
Reminder this was off a Galaxy Note.
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Post by attitudesback on Dec 27, 2015 16:04:51 GMT -5
Always awesome to see new guys give it a go! I've moved it into the discussion board because it's not a full show, but you'll still get plenty of opinions/help as we're all really great guys.
Personally, for a first go it wasn't bad. I've definitely seen worse. The poses are a little stiff (Really try and bend/move all joints) and there was a shot at the start that was a little blurry. The speed was fine, I'd definitely like to see some more as it's hard to go off 10 seconds but I think there's potential here. I haven't been seriously fedding for that long (got back into it in January) but I'm sure some others have some more ideas. Watch the other shows to get an example of what some of us do too. Awesome stuff!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 27, 2015 23:50:47 GMT -5
Here's a 2nd attempt to broden a better point of view.
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Post by Stuart? on Dec 28, 2015 3:31:40 GMT -5
Always awesome to see new guys give it a go! I've moved it into the discussion board because it's not a full show, but you'll still get plenty of opinions/help as we're all really great guys. Personally, for a first go it wasn't bad. I've definitely seen worse. The poses are a little stiff (Really try and bend/move all joints) and there was a shot at the start that was a little blurry. The speed was fine, I'd definitely like to see some more as it's hard to go off 10 seconds but I think there's potential here. I haven't been seriously fedding for that long (got back into it in January) but I'm sure some others have some more ideas. Watch the other shows to get an example of what some of us do too. Awesome stuff! Dude! You moved this post right as I was posting my reply haha. Without reiterating what attitudesback said (stiff poses and blurry shots), the only other things I can see that could be improved upon are the camera angles. Not bad for a first go! Well done
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