sleepy
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Post by sleepy on Sept 16, 2015 18:10:32 GMT -5
After viewing the boards the past day or so, I stumbled upon this board. I'm not sure if you guys are open to first time animators or not so I decided to try my hand at it. I guess it's a double underhook piledriver? Well, that's what I intended it to be. Please feel free to leave any criticisms as well as advice so I can further improve my animations.
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Lord Bishop
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Post by Lord Bishop on Sept 17, 2015 2:00:33 GMT -5
This board is pretty much dead but its nice to see new people.
The animation is pretty standard for a beginner stiff, floaty, fidgety. You movements seem alright. The move is complex for newbie to animate. Try moves like swanton bomb or flying legdrop.
You also need to learn the concept of spacing which should be in the first aid thread if not I'll give you a folder.
Welcome to the board this will most likely be the only post.
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Post by sleepy on Sept 17, 2015 6:04:59 GMT -5
This board is pretty much dead but its nice to see new people. The animation is pretty standard for a beginner stiff, floaty, fidgety. You movements seem alright. The move is complex for newbie to animate. Try moves like swanton bomb or flying legdrop. You also need to learn the concept of spacing which should be in the first aid thread if not I'll give you a folder. Welcome to the board this will most likely be the only post. Thanks for the feedback. I tried out two different styles of swanton bomb based on your feedback. Would you be able to drop me a guide on spacing? After checking the first aid thread for it there wasn't a guide in there (at least not that I could see.) Both of them are very floaty towards the end, apologies for that but I couldn't see a way of fixing it. Edit: After a tremendous amount of boredom, I decided to create this. It was originally going to be a superplex but in my habit of overcomplicating things it became a superplex botched into an avalanche brainbuster.
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Post by Slim on Sept 17, 2015 15:14:38 GMT -5
I don't really know anything about stick animations.. I'm a stopmotion animator lol But first, this was very slow.. The swantons are floaty, maybe because it's slow and near the end, it was stiff. Try to fix the fidgetyness, stiffness and slow thing
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Post by Lord Bishop on Sept 17, 2015 16:41:43 GMT -5
This has a piv with jump tutorials for a swanton, 450, moonsault and ssp. www.filedropper.com/jumptutorialI'll also give you a piv of my Swantonbomb it will show you how to space your animations. Also it has lying down reactions but I don't think they are very good. www.filedropper.com/swanHope this helps.
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Post by sleepy on Sept 17, 2015 17:31:32 GMT -5
Thank you for the feedback KOidM As for what you've provided, thank you very much Bishop. I decided to work on my swantons a little bit and I get the feeling i'll be doing a whole lot more to try and get it down. I feel like this has improved slightly (especially the jump, thank you for that tutorial.) I kind of messed up on the length of the jump so I changed it in to a front flip leg drop, although it still looks pretty bad.
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Post by SE4NY on Sept 18, 2015 7:52:21 GMT -5
You take way too many frames, it isn't bad but there's a thing called easing which is basically momentum between frames, starting off slowly then fast then slow i771.photobucket.com/albums/xx353/Zed31415/Easing-perfect.giflike this, try to ease your movements and move all the joints, but it doesn't look bad.
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