All New Chicago Pro Wrestling First Show

[ajf900]

Ok, so I decided I didn't like the direction my old text fed was going in after just 2 shows. I decided to do a completely new text fed from the start. Credit and thanks goes to Kevx for letting me use his show format and to Unprettier(Shefer) for helping me with this.

Here it is and I hope you enjoy it
www.freewebs.com/ajf900/pastshows.htm

And here is the link to CPW site.

www.freewebs.com/ajf900/

Im open to contructive criticism so please tell me what I need, what I'm doing wrong, What I'm doing right, etc....

[therealdealbookr]

Another Indy fed, looks decent.

[therealdealbookr]

Sorry, didn't notice that there was a show. Great Indy show...Loved some of the matches dude! Kevin Steen VS Super Dragon! The main event was good, but didn't like how it ended. All in all a good show.

[Deleted]

Not very familar with some of these guys but the matches were great. The main event was good, I was hoping for AJ to pull out a victory and I enjoyed the tag team title match as well. Keep up the good work.

[Hurricane]

Since you done some nice replies to mine, Ill return the favour.


- Nice look man, Im liking the PWG/ROH feel to it.

- First match was decent, but culd have been in more detail. Maybe do a paragraph for start, a paragraph for middle and one for the end.

- Second match sounded nice, but once again, could have been a tad more detailed. It was alot better than your first match.

- I feel there could have been some backstage segments and Interviews between the matches, because three in a row is a little tiring.

- Tag Match was nice, and the spots sounded great. Nice finish.

- I really feel I segment would have helped the show here.

- Nice match, Im liking the detail in this one. Nigel McGuinness was a nice choice for the winner.

- Very nice showing between Steen and Dragon here. Nice match with a great finish. good work.

- Nice detail and choice of stuff in this match, the finish was decent in my opinion.


Nice show overall, but it got tiring because of the lack of Backstage/interview segments. on the next show, adding some segments in between matches would really help it out.

thanks,

[ajf900]

Thanks to everyone who replied. I'm going to add backstage segments and interviews from now on, but this was just a starter. Also, for the people who liked Kevin Steen/Super Dragon, theres much more to come from these two.