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Post by clarkebars4 on Jun 17, 2006 22:38:41 GMT -5
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Post by cureforthesickness on Jun 17, 2006 22:55:08 GMT -5
Okay, random rant time. No review, because I don't feel like it.
- The videos. Videos are bad. Videos are very, very bad. Kills computers. Not needed in any way for a fantasy booking federation. Instead of using videos, describe what you are using the video for. Describe Maria's cooch pounding in and out for a Bronco Buster and explain Melina entering through the bottom ropes. Explain all the girls attires and explain what they are doing. That's the whole point of the fantasy booking federation. Videos are laziness.
- Your matches, make them longer. You have like, one sentence per match. No where near enough to even summarize the match, more less really get into a match. Even in a small summary, some of your description was bad. Like, describing the ten punch combo and fall to the mat in depth but not describing the force of the punches. Bad.
- Random Pepsi graphic. VERY BAD. No reason for commercials at all in fantasy booking, considering I fast forward through real commercials. Can't fast forward through a fantasy booking show, sadly. The random graphic kills any presentation that you had left in your federation. Graphics, unless directly related to the fed (like match graphics) are bad.
- The Kiss Cam? Was this really needed? It's WRESTLING! While I normally am a firm supporter of random lesbianism, this was just stupid. It would have been decent if it was actually, ya know, text, but it's just a random lesbian kiss. That's what I have porn for, my friend.
- All diva fed. Bad. I've seen a ton of all diva feds fail. They just don't work. Divas, for the most part, are a side show in wrestling, not the entire show. I've seen one "all divas" fed succeed, and even though the females are the main focus, it has men in a supporting role. This has none. No really good storyline can come out of all females, considering the severe lack of possibilities. And I'm pretty sure you can't do a Molly/Hazel type storyline on here..
- I would continue this review, but your videos have caused my internet to no longer load any pages other than this one.
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Post by clarkebars4 on Jun 17, 2006 23:06:03 GMT -5
Funny you talk about videos with your avatar, anyway I see your point there. I wasnt looking to be lazy with the videos I was actually looking to make it look tidier. I do think I very much need to add more things to the matches but honestly theres no point in going balls to the walls when not that many people read Diva feds anyhow. I know I could have a fed with no men will it be that great no, but still like I said not many people read anyhow. I appreciate your input and will use your critism to help me next time.
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Post by ICW on Jun 17, 2006 23:06:16 GMT -5
Well I will do a rant/review. -All Diva fed? *Bangs head* They never work. You can't do to much with divas. Omg puppies! No. I really don't like diva feds. -Why are their videos? NOBODY and the board has videos. Hell I enjoy seeing women doing Bronco Buster's on other women, but not in a  ing Fanstay Booking federation. They take a while to load. Just write the text. It's not hard. I mean the whole ing point is to describe the surrondings. -I won't comment on the sentence long matches. K? -Random picutres. The pepsi one made me gigle though. -Normally, I love to see two women sucking their faces off together, but not so much in a F.B fed. The Kiss Cam is random. Well that's my opinion. You need a lot of work. I mean the sentence long matches made me  Please work harder next time. |
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Post by clarkebars4 on Jun 17, 2006 23:08:13 GMT -5
Well I suggest you get higher internet connections if the videos dont work (just kidding). Alright well it seems I have much work to do.
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Post by goatlord on Jun 18, 2006 4:43:00 GMT -5
Eek.
I don't have any real interest in reading your text fed but you really need feedback on your feedback. You're being really catty with tour responses and its just not a smart thing to do.
NEVER EVER EVER EVER piss off the regulars.
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Post by clarkebars4 on Jun 18, 2006 10:05:13 GMT -5
Eek. I don't have any real interest in reading your text fed but you really need feedback on your feedback. You're being really catty with tour responses and its just not a smart thing to do. NEVER EVER EVER EVER piss off the regulars. I wasnt pissing off regulars, I said I was just kidding and also telling the guy that he had a video himself as an avy.  |
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Post by cureforthesickness on Jun 18, 2006 12:03:44 GMT -5
Eek. I don't have any real interest in reading your text fed but you really need feedback on your feedback. You're being really catty with tour responses and its just not a smart thing to do. NEVER EVER EVER EVER piss off the regulars. I wasnt pissing off regulars, I said I was just kidding and also telling the guy that he had a video himself as an avy. there's a difference between having a two frame avatar on the forums and having a ton of long videos in the middle of your show. |
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. Id appreciate some feedback. Its the first Ive done since May.
