APW Border-Line TV #1 DEBUT!

[HUNTER]

I dont have enough time to do very detailed matches, and this is the first show I've wrote in atleast a year, so please cut me some slack...

Annihilation Pro Wrestling presents...
Border Line -TV
June 23, 2006
Elks Lodge
" The Best Indy Wrestling In The Nation! "
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* " More Human Than Human " by White Zombie plays as an APW video package airs... it features the most hardcore, and awe-inspiring moments that have happended so far. *

The camera fades in to the announce table, were Joel Gertner sits.

Joel- " Hello fans, it's the sexual intellectual, Joel Gertner. I am here at APW first show, and I am EXTREMELY excited! We have so many surprises in store for you tonight, guaranteed to raise the hairs on the back of your neck, drop your jaw, and leave you on the edge of that steel chair... if it hasn't been taken from you by The Sandman of course! Ha ha ha! Let's get going! "

1.) Colt Cabana vs. Jason Cross[/b][/u]
Jason Cross def. Colt Cabana in 4:37, with a Crossfire from the top-rope ( Shooting Star Press ).

2.) Tryouts Match- Psichosis vs. Yoshiro Tajiri[/u]
Tajiri def. Psichosis in 5:12, with a tarantula. Finishing it off with the Green Mist.

Backstage[/u]
Backstage we see Homicide taping up his hands for his match with Bad Boy Hido. Homicide is staring at a poster of Hido that has been taped to the wall.

4.) Homicide vs. Bad Boy Hido
Homicide def. Bad Boy Hido in 7:47 with the Cop Killa Vertebreaker onto a pile of tacks.

5.) Commercial for Willis Local GMC used car dealership.

6.) Chris Hero vs. Excalibur[/u]
Excalibur def. Chris Hero in 9:59, with his new finishing move, the ExBreaker ( a 450 with a 180 twist. Chris Hero challenges Excalibur to a rematch at the next show.

7.) APW High Flying Title Match- Jeff Hardy vs. AJ Styles[/u]
AJ Styles def. Jeff Hardy in 15:20 with a Spiral Tap through a table, off a ladder.

8.) Tommy Dreamer promo for upcoming title match[/u]

9.) Television Title Match- Terry Funk vs. Dusty Rhodes
Terry Funk def. Dusty Rhodes in 14:22 with a Funsault off a ladder trhough a table, to Dusty who is on the outside. A very bloody match. The fan favorite of the night.

10.) APW Title Match- Tommy Dreamer vs. The Sandman
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Tommy Dreamer def. The Sandman in this No Ropes Barbed-Wire match in 20:44 with a Dreamer Driver on a flaming barbedwire board. TOMMY IS THE FIRST APW CHAMP!!!

Tommy's Post Match Commentary[/u]
Tommy- " I want to thank each and every one of the fans that came out tonight! We had 660 people here, and that is excellent for our first show! Merchandise tables will stay open for another 30 minutes, and those of you with backstage passes may head to the back now. Me and Sandman need to get cleaned off. Thank you all, and God Bless! "
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Thank you all for reading this!

[cureforthesickness]

you've got a base, but that's about it. With little more than a base, you can't be judged, match depth is non-exsistant, and you can't really have a good match. Instead of rushing out and having quick, and rather uninteresting results, you should instead put your time into doing a good show. Don't write the entire show in one sitting. Take a week, a month, or in Tennessee's case, a year, to write the show to make it the very best you can.

[HUNTER]

Just curious if you knew I lived in TN??

[cureforthesickness]

leatherface2 said:

Just curious if you knew I lived in TN??

I wasn't saying Tennessee as in the state, I was saying Tennessee as in, the booker. He writes CWF.

[dcw1]

cureforthesickness said:

you've got a base, but that's about it. With little more than a base, you can't be judged, match depth is non-exsistant, and you can't really have a good match. Instead of rushing out and having quick, and rather uninteresting results, you should instead put your time into doing a good show. Don't write the entire show in one sitting. Take a week, a month, or in Tennessee's case, a year, to write the show to make it the very best you can.

Yep I totally agree with J here. Trust me, it takes me ages to get through a show ask anyone on this board and they will tell you the best shows take months to write. I thought this show was lacking in detail, maybe you should take longer and try again. Good attempt but at least 5 lines for a match I think will do.