TBWE! Fire Promo show

[foshizzle]

Click, Click, BOOM! hits as the crowd gos crazy for the first full episode of FIRE!
OH YEAH HITS
Matt Hardy walks out and does not look happy!
MH: SENSHI, last week you pinned my brother Jeff. 1-2-3. I dont have a problem with that BUT I have a problem with the fact that you broke my brothers arm!!! So at ep.1 I want you in a Match. Senshi you get out here!
Senshi comes out and they start brawling. They brawl threw the crowd untill secerete breaks them up.

Alex Shelly is shown talking to Sabin:
Sabin: I dont know.....
Alex: Come on man.. we arew awesome when we had it going....
Sabin: Well I tell you the answer later..... On episode 1!
Alex: Alright man but you know its in your heart!!!

: Rhino!!!
Rhino: Hey Adam wat up.
Adam: Nutin but I just Wanted to tell you that Your in the TV Title Battle Royal on episode 1.
Rhino: whos the opponents....
Reads from paper......
Adam: You, Jerry Lynn, Vito, Haas, Romeo,Raven, AMW,and Mysterio!!!
Adam: Good Luck.

Updated card for episode 1.....

World Title
HHH vs Chris Jericho

Battle Royal for TV belt

Steel Cage Match

Senshi Vs Matt Hardy in a Street Fight

Somoa Joe Vs AJ Styles

Womens Title Match
Trish Stratus VS Lita VS Mickey James

Sabin answers.........

SHOW ENDS!!!

[cureforthesickness]

I can't say I quite understand this. there were no matches at all. Very poorly spaced out. Lots of typos, and way too short. if you are going to do an all-promo show, which I'd highly suggest against, make the promos longer and more in depth.

Try reading other shows around. WCWA, ICW, and whatever the hell Real Real's current fed is are all good starts.

[foshizzle]

I already have done a show with matches, and this was to hype up the first show!

[cureforthesickness]

foshizzle said:

I already have done a show with matches, and this was to hype up the first show!

still. it puts out a poor representation for your federation for first time viewers like myself

[foshizzle]

This was only a HYPE show. Kinda like Sunday Night Heat before a PPV. There are sometimes NO Matches.

[ICW]

Well sorry for the late replies but here it goes:

When reading this, I thought it was very poor. I think the format wasn't great and please don't use the smilies. There wasn't much hype about it. Your card for your first show is interesting but we will see how that goes. Try better next time.