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ANJWO 8
May 4, 2006 14:00:36 GMT -5
Post by Matt on May 4, 2006 14:00:36 GMT -5
Click here to see the showI like the show, I think it came out great. I tried a new writing style, and I changed some stuff, hope you like it. ------- If you are wondering why it is already show 8, I used to have my ANJWO wrestling brand on the other board, but I never used figures and everyone complained and made me move here, so here it is.
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ANJWO 8
May 5, 2006 18:35:50 GMT -5
Post by therealdealbookr on May 5, 2006 18:35:50 GMT -5
I don't like how you used The N word...I skimmed some parts but the parts I did read were pretty entertaining. I like the storylines you have they're getting built well and Sting, Vader and Cactus Jack are good people to have coming. Not much advice since it seems that you have everything down pat except some of the grammer and spelling was bad. Overall a pretty good show man...8.6 and a 1/2 outta ten on this one.
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Post by Matt on May 6, 2006 9:56:30 GMT -5
Thanks for the reply, yeah my grammar and spelling gets pretty bad at times, and sorry if any one got offended by the use of the n word.
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ANJWO 8
May 6, 2006 15:47:28 GMT -5
Post by ICW on May 6, 2006 15:47:28 GMT -5
I liked the show man. I had a great feel to it and the storylines are great. Now the spelling and grammar were not good but you can always improve on that. Not much advice to give you because it seems that you have everything under control. Just work on your spelling and grammar. Welcome to The Fantasy Booking Boards bro.
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ANJWO 8
May 8, 2006 18:45:39 GMT -5
Post by Matt on May 8, 2006 18:45:39 GMT -5
bump 2
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