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Post by clarkebars4 on May 2, 2006 15:08:26 GMT -5
www.freewebs.com/newworlddivas/rawresults.htmI read the rules and I dont recall it saying we couldnt post links. anyhow mine is pretty long to do otherwise and it has alot of graphic detail so check it out .. this is my first one eVERR
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Post by clarkebars4 on May 2, 2006 16:26:18 GMT -5
TOP # 1
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Post by ICW on May 2, 2006 16:31:15 GMT -5
Dude why waste a top when your show was like the second show posted?
I'll edit with a review much later.
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Post by clarkebars4 on May 2, 2006 17:04:35 GMT -5
Dude why waste a top when your show was like the second show posted? I'll edit with a review much later. cuz i worked hard on it and i would like a response  my bad |
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Post by cureforthesickness on May 2, 2006 21:00:10 GMT -5
yeah, posting links is fine, as long as you aren't spamming/shilling like mad. when it's a post to an actual show, it's fine.
the graphics were pretty unneeded, basicly killed me old piece of crap computer.
the description was lacking seriously, and your roster has little to no depth. all diva feds very very rarely work. In fact, in 4 years of (regularly) booking, I've seen just one all-female federation work, and that was XWF, and now heb uses many males too. XWF caters to a much different audiance. decent for a first show, but you need much more if you are going to "make it". Detail is key to sucess. not saying that you have to go all out on every match and segment, you just have to make it enjoyable. You have to make it an enjoyable and watchable show.
Understand what I am saying?
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Post by clarkebars4 on May 2, 2006 21:03:09 GMT -5
yeah, posting links is fine, as long as you aren't spamming/shilling like mad. when it's a post to an actual show, it's fine. the graphics were pretty unneeded, basicly killed me old piece of **** computer. the description was lacking seriously, and your roster has little to no depth. all diva feds very very rarely work. In fact, in 4 years of (regularly) booking, I've seen just one all-female federation work, and that was XWF, and now heb uses many males too. XWF caters to a much different audiance. decent for a first show, but you need much more if you are going to "make it". Detail is key to sucess. not saying that you have to go all out on every match and segment, you just have to make it enjoyable. You have to make it an enjoyable and watchable show. Understand what I am saying? yes i totally respect your opinion.. i started this sunday night which wasnt the smartest idea but im really not making an excuse so i respect tht and it was my first show .. thanks a bunch for reviewing |
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Post by clarkebars4 on May 3, 2006 15:58:49 GMT -5
thanks man
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Post by ICW on May 3, 2006 21:32:10 GMT -5
Bascially I agree with what Obo said. I mean descrpition is key to have a great Fantasy Booking fed, and I felt that this fed lacked detail. The roster was very small and I wasn't thrilled to find out this was a all womens federation because they rarely work out. I think you have potential, you just need to make the shows more exciting. I'm not thrilled about an all womens fed.
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Post by therealdealbookr on May 4, 2006 17:20:47 GMT -5
You should have some more matches dude, there was only two. It was a good start into the fed though, but add SOME guys, not a lot, the max 10 and the rest of the roster divas. I do hope this fed continues but there's a lot of room for improvement. The graphics were kick and I loved the commercials also, but you should have went more into what happened with Melina and Nidia, like what was going on. Put a tiny more detail into it, detail isn't EVERYTHING but a little more would be nice. But it was a good start...Welcome.
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Post by clarkebars4 on May 4, 2006 21:41:55 GMT -5
You should have some more matches dude, there was only two. It was a good start into the fed though, but add SOME guys, not a lot, the max 10 and the rest of the roster divas. I do hope this fed continues but there's a lot of room for improvement. The graphics were kick and I loved the commercials also, but you should have went more into what happened with Melina and Nidia, like what was going on. Put a tiny more detail into it, detail isn't EVERYTHING but a little more would be nice. But it was a good start...Welcome. thankyou and karma !! NOT 4 RESPONDINg cuz thats stupid and against the rules but for getting it! thanks man and i used all of your info and input for SD |
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