Ethan
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Joined on: Apr 28, 2010 12:04:49 GMT -5
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Post by Ethan on Apr 17, 2012 17:21:12 GMT -5
was gonna be for PPPV but meh I'll re-do  |
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Apr 17, 2012 19:57:23 GMT -5
Wow great job Ethan, the running at the beginning was great, the movements flowed well and it was rather smooth for the most part. The jump into the whisper in the wind could have had his legs spread out a bit more because it looked a little stiff and the red stick seemed a bit to far, but there was nice impact and I somewhat
like red's reaction.
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Post by skrillex on Apr 19, 2012 9:57:59 GMT -5
it had a frame pause, but its really nice and has good movements.
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Ethan
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Joined on: Apr 28, 2010 12:04:49 GMT -5
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Post by Ethan on Apr 19, 2012 15:51:10 GMT -5
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Deadly
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SFBL Record: 13 - 3 - 0
Joined on: Jun 30, 2010 0:04:05 GMT -5
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Post by Deadly on Apr 22, 2012 10:48:10 GMT -5
This was nice...it was smooth yes but a bit slow.The whisper in the wind itself was very floaty.The spacing there was a bit off.There was quite a bit of stiffness here and there so I wouldnt say that it flowed all very well.The reaction now was nice but again it was slow so it lacked impact.
Other than that....great job
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