NPWL episode 4

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it's here episode 4 of NPWL is here
new arena (still needs adjustments)
and other awesome stuff
check it out and leave feedback guys

[WCM's Izzy]

Super busy with a crap load of stuff, but wanted to let you know anyhow that I checked out your show, cool as usual. Nice to see you are tweaking stuff here and there. Little by little your made up characters grow into me and I go having my favorites and most hated. Loved that Nash MnManus promo, very cool and fun to read. Keep it up!

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Nice to see you tweaking the arena some. Pictures are a lot more crisp this time around. Comic book arena! Moon Knight in the background, hells yeah!

Titan Giant George gave it his all, but got outsmarted. Really good big man versus little man match there. No complaints at all.

Enjoyed the follow up from last time with Syko coming out and demanding his way.

Some great posing and high impact spots in Chris Thorn vs Shawn Torres. If I could offer one piece of advice... Wipe out your ring. All that dust, it really shows up on camera. That's something you could do without having to buy anything. Just use a paper towel or an old sock!

Impressive debut by Thorn. Also, you don't get enough credit, but you have some GREAT camera angles.

Nash McManus may be my new favorite NPWL character!

Violent stuff in the Sal Brute/Logan match! It was a quick match, but it SHOULD have been. I'm glad you resisted the urge that so many pic fedders have, which is to do 500 big spots and yet nobody is finished from it. It was much more realistic your way.

Fun show and not too long to read. I also appreciate you putting in some work with the commentary, as far too many guys just phone that in.

[derekbrazen]

I liked this show, you are showing improvements with your poses, uses of string, and camera angles. I like your new setup and I think being on a desk is alot better than the corner of the floor you were using. Now you can get better camera angles and you did.

Didn't know what to make of the opening segment. I like Mark Mutt because I tend to like heels and wrestling stables, but when George Hennig interrupted him he came off as a jerk, so I hope Mark Mutt beats him down and takes his title.

I like Eaglehart Johnson and glad to see he got the win over Titan Giant George. Bit too dark for some of the pics. But a good match with good poses. Kind of upsetting that Eaglehart Johnson is a DA figure and not a DI, since he's limited in his posing and you won't be able to get as good of a match out of him like you can Chris Thorn, but we'll get back to C.T. later...

I Like how Syko is changing. Before he was tormented by voices that only went away if he beat people up, but now when he talks he says "we" instead of "I". I'm guessing he's embraced the voices, reminds me of Eddy Brock/Venom kind of thing. Can't wait to see what happens with him.

Chris Thorn had an impressive win against "Super Hustler" Shawn Torres". This was my favorite match because it had the best poses, uses of string, camera angles and consistent lighting. This was my favorite shot of the match.

Though, I think you should resize your pics to a smaller size. I think it would read better if a whole pic and your dialog fit on a screen.

Great promo for Nash McManus! I hope we get one or two more before his debut.

Logan Brooks said he would make quick work of Sal Brute, and he sure did. He had him pinned before the Wrestling Mob could even come out and help Sal. But for a main event, it didn't feel special and this was my least favorite match. You should have had the announcers say something like "This is an extreme rules match for the NPWL Heavyweight Championship!" "Anything goes!" The match felt rushed as if they had to get the match in before their tv-time ended.
And my other nit-pick is the idea that in a no-DQ match for the NPWL Heavyweight Championship, I don't get why the Wrestling Mafia didn't all come out with Sal. The more men they have, the better their odds, no?

But Masspick, I think this was a really good show. And I like your fed. The new setup is better, but could be even more-better-er? if you took down the posters and monitor. They're a distraction that can easily be fixed that would really make NPWL look better. The stacks of comics could go too, but aren't as distracting since they serve like a crowd area.

You should clean the dust off the ring, like Fandan said. But I just assumed it was part of the "underground" theme you're going for. But why would any wrestler agree to wrestle in a dust filled ring? I don't know. But then again, I still don't get why NPWL doesn't have turnbuckle pads either.

I can't wait to see what you got for episode 5!