NPWL episode 2

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well it's finally here see all the action and give your review NPWL is always here to entertain you!
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really would love some feedback on this sequel

[derekbrazen]

hey man, i didn't actually read the show, it's long and i didn't have the time to really read it. Since your not using established wrestlers, with personalities I already know, I gotta really sit down read it.
So my comments are general and won't go into your story, I like your pics and poses. You use sting and don't blurr or photoshop them out, nor do I, but I think it's frowned upon here.

I like the over all look of your show, only problem I have is your bedroom as your backdrop. If you continue doing these you should change your backdrop.

You said you had fun doing these, that's good, keep doing these because the first one was entertaining.
How long does it take you to do these?

I'll try to read this soon and give your more in depth feed back.

[WCM's Izzy]

Hey, masspick, neat second episode. It was good overall, I just get tremors when I see the TTL figures (I love TTLs, but their poseability is a bit awkward and those arms and legs look so odd at times). I don't know if you don't resize the images because you don't have the proper software or you just like them big (that's what she said), and the lack of backdrop does take a little bit away from it all, still good, still good.

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Derek & WCM: I have been looking throughout my house for a part that looks basementy but I still can't seem to get any luck but the search continues in my apartment and I'm hoping maybe I can clear a space in my hallway where I feel it'd look better

@ Derek: the shows take me about 4 hours to film and 5 or 6 hours to upload and make all of the dialog

@ WCM: yeah they are also hard to work with I am trying to find a Zack Ryder body to put Jeff Kings head on and a new Shelton Benjamin body for Funky Junk cause it was really frustrating getting them stringed up

[derekbrazen]

I want to see what’s next for prince charming, everyone got into the npwl based on talent, so im thinking he’s really high flying?
I like tag-teams, too bad the Wild Wests couldn’t stop the GIANT Sirgie Slovak. Maybe they’ll do better next time? 
Funky Junk Jack Jones is a fun character, in this match we saw a lot of high flying action. Very happy he beat Jeff King, I don’t like him. Maybe its bc he’s a s.o.b. that sneezes snot on fans, maybe its bc he looks like matt hardy, either way I’m glad he lost. How do you say loser in Funkanese?
Enjoyed the continuation of the stable’s storyline, will title gold be in their future??
Syko is my fav character, he destroys people and inflects pain on people to stop the voices in his head. So I can’t really blame him, right?
Now that I actually sat down n read it, I like the way your fed is progressing. I think you have to check your grammar better, there’s a few points where the wording isn’t correct, and it ruins the flow of the show. Try you use periods, commas, it will make it much easier to read.
Keep it up! You’re putting these out fast, so I hope to see the next episode soon.

[Deleted]

I can tell your having fun with this and it shows, but I havent seen any progression from the last time you were fedding early last year. You could REALLY benefit from a better setup (I.E background, use those turnbuckles I sent you etc...) and work on your poses. Your are showing some creativity with your made up roster and it shows so keep that up you just need to tweak your poses and setup and you''ll have a good solid fed to build on. Also if at all possible move your setup to a table maybe? If not possible than no biggie. Keep up the good work and let me know if you need any help again, I'm here if you need me.