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Post by Ben - #6 Munchie on Jan 20, 2012 14:19:48 GMT -5
I realise there is no rope bounce but meh. |
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Tylor
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Post by Tylor on Jan 20, 2012 14:56:39 GMT -5
I realise there is no rope bounce but meh. That's alright. You are still a beginner with Pivot, so I wouldn't worry about rope bounces until you are better. There appears to be a frame that you have twice, during the impact, which is what could cause that pause. Stiff with Victim. Choppy at the end. Looks like you tried a jump, and didn't do too bad. Maybe a tad floaty. Good beginner animation here Ben. |
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Copey666
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Post by Copey666 on Jan 20, 2012 17:05:17 GMT -5
There's no real reaction during the impact, you should try making the two sticks bounce a little to give the illusion of impact, but the guy on the floor's personal reaction was pretty good. Also when the guy jumped he sort of elevated in the same spot before his body flipped and moved forwards, whereas he should move with the flip. A bit floaty and very slightly choppy where he comes to land. But aside from that I think it's rather good considering you're a beginner. Well done ;D
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Post by alexgg on Jan 20, 2012 18:21:26 GMT -5
For the jump, the legs need to bend more with the butt going down...  The the leg should extend out as the body goes into the SSP. Turn in the air, then space the stick out further from its last point in each frame to make it appear to drop faster. Then bounce the sticks in the reaction if you cba to do one... |
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