Shooting Star Press (one of my firsts)

[jake4698]

Hi, i'm a beginner at making stick animations.
I started like a week ago, and I still need to practice.
I just made a shooting star press, and I would like to have your toughts about it.
*I didn't make anything in it. One of the stick figures is made by Tylor, the BG is made by Tylor too (and edited a tiny bit by me), and the ring, I don't remember. I tooked it from the first aid thread.*


www.easy-upload.net/fichiers/SSP_%28pivot%29.201211414444.gif

I hope you'll comment on this, and tell me what to do to improve.
& Also, I don't know how to make a reaction from the victim
Any helps please?

[alexgg]

For the reaction, its better to use a laying stick, its just a head and arms. But looks like hes lying down in the 2d perspective.
Also I didn't make that background.

Anyway, not a bad animation it has a good amount of frames and such.
Needs more of a jump though, the legs need more bending

[Deleted]

I wouldn't suggest using a black stick with that BG', it's kinda hard to see what's going in 'cause he blends in.
Decent for a beginner.
Most of the basic problems, stiff, a bit choppy in places and fidgety in some points. Work on making it smoother, and keeping an even ammount of frames instead of having speed up and slow down at random points.
Pretty good try, nice work.