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Post by dustinpwi on Sept 29, 2011 17:58:38 GMT -5
So far next is my other match ani with secret which I haven't been arsed to start yet. Credits: none all made by me including the sticks and ring and bg
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Post by Deleted on Sept 29, 2011 22:34:53 GMT -5
the guy on top of the other guys arms are stiff other then that its nice smooth but in the end it gets a little choppy
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Post by dustinpwi on Sept 30, 2011 17:37:16 GMT -5
thats the only reply I get? wow thanks wfigs I will be sure to post my animations next timee : |
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Post by Tylor on Sept 30, 2011 19:07:39 GMT -5
Don't go all anti-WF on us. The animation is stiff. So... work on that. Nice walking, the ani is really smooth.
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Post by picfedguy on Sept 30, 2011 22:13:37 GMT -5
This is an alright animation though there are a fair few problems with it. First off the walking at the start looked really stiff in the back and arms and looked a bit fast, you should have thrown in a few more frames just to slow it down a bit. I didn't really like how the Green stick kind of just went up during the lift, like I think that a few frames before it you should start bending the legs a bit so that it's looks more realistic. As the whole I think that's a problem too like with the grapple part anyway the movements look too forceful and aren't really all that natural or realistic and look very effortless and it seems like you don't really move the joints unless completely needed, like when the Orange stick was walking with the Green stick on it's shoulders you didn't really move the back joint of either stick at all. the Blue stick was nice though, maybe a few more frames at the start of the jump with it being spaced a bit heavier would have made it look better but it was smooth and didn't look too stiff. But yeah overall I'd say just take your time and really make sure that it looks realistic and natural as apposed to robotic like. Hope to see some more from you though.
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