450 Splash

[Adam]

450 Splash threw Wood and Lightubes

just wanted to test the light tubes but it actually turned out one of my best i rekon
credit to Jesseversion1 (sorry forgot to add that

[Tylor]

It's pretty slow and stiff. There wasn't any reactions, and the lightubes look like you didn't use all of the breaking sticks. Speed up the spin and that would be good.

[Adam]

thats the fastest it goes, its only 61 frames is that to many?

[Tylor]

It needs spaced out. Don't move the stick the same amount each frame.

[Ethan]

use less frames, life doesnt go in slow motion why should stick figures, it is a bit choppy and the movements need work but your improving, dont use light tubes until you get better!

[Hoboturtle]

WAY to many frames. It also needs to be spaced, if you need help with spacing think of a ball that you've dropped. It gets faster as it goes towards the ground, need more help? Look in the first aid thread, page 3 its at the end of the post about easing. Anyway its also stiff, lacks in reactions from both the reciever and attacker, the lightubes break slowly and the table breaks weirdly. If you spaced it, it would be 10 times better even if you dint change anything else. I'll give it a 4/10 or 2/5. Reply to my animation? Its called Han(gtime swanton bomb) shot first, should be on the frot page.

[thepedigree22]

Like many people r saying IT IS SLOW!! It is very stiff and u need to work more b4 u start using weapons... U need to give it at least a small reaction to make it look a bit better
4/10 You'll get better just watch

[Tylor]

Oh, forgot to add something. Checkers (also to anybody out there that isn't great), don't take these comments the wrong way and assume that your animations are shit; because they're not. If we say something is wrong, fix it and remember what we say when creating your next animations. Practice makes perfect.

[Jesseversion1]

Not bad, need to work on spacing. And moving the joints better. The back of the stick looks really weird.

And please credit me if you use my styles.

[picfedguy]

Yeah this one is certainly on the slow side, it's smooth but just too slow - you need take out a bunch of frames until you get that good mix of it being smooth and at a good speed. Besides that you've certainly fixed the stiffness a lot but there is still some work to be done like if you look at the legs of the attacker towards the end you moved the knee around but didn't extend the leg or bring it inwards. There were a few movement problems too like the jump at the start looked off, instead of doing it the way you did you should have kept the back reasonably straight or inverted it a bit and have the stick bend slightly over so that it looks realistic and there's a natural looking momentum going into the spin. the arms during the jump was wrong too. Yeah so overall at the moment I think that you should mainly work on getting getting the good mix of the animation being smooth and at a good speed, keep at it though and I'm sure you'll really start to see improvement.