PPPV Animation & Swanton

[Tylor]

I started the first half when the card was first annoounced, but I finally got around to finish it.

I think I'm still a cruserweight at heart.

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PPPV Animation: Smooth, OK Spacing, Kinda fast on the kick, good rope bounce, not a great reaction but overall very good animation.

Swanton: There was no jump, he kinda just fell but it was smooth. Reaction was weak. Stiff.

[Tylor]

Aug 3, 2011 21:37:08 GMT -5 @dtanimations said:

PPPV Animation: Smooth, OK Spacing, Kinda fast on the kick, good rope bounce, not a great reaction but overall very good animation.

Swanton: There was no jump, he kinda just fell but it was smooth. Reaction was weak. Stiff.

Thanks for my only reply. Yeah, the fall wa kinda on purpose. Still working on those reactions.

[picfedguy]

PPPV ani; This is looking real good man, the kick to start it off was nice and it's good that you moved all the joints instead of just the legs though the arms did look a bit stiff, the reaction to the kick was good but looked a bit fast and should have been spaced out more - joint movement was all good though. There was a fridget or two in the arms around thee transition from the kick to the DDT, the move itself was nice, but the Blue stick looked a bit weird because it kind of just went into the air with no jump at all, it was the same with the Green stick but that's not so much a problem because the stick in only falling in a downward angle. Anywho also during the DDT the Blue stick also looked to have a small fridget or two in the back and the arms and legs could have used some more movement. The Green stick was good though, it could have used a little more movement too but isn't too big a problem. reactions were kind of there but were lacking in effort.
Swanton; I'm not sure weather I love or hate the jump going into the move, on one hand I would have liked to have seen a proper jump upwards but at the same time it's not entirely unrealistic to have the stick just jump downwards, maybe go for a mix of the two - I'm not sure really. The jump was well animated though, but the arms were kind of stiff and the back could have used some more movement. Ok so the airtime was alright though it looked unspaced at that would have been the perfect time to really incorporate some spacing with the stick picking up speed as it got closer to the table. Anyway, the arms looked stiff but the rest of the joints were well moved and it was nice and smooth. Reaction again was sort of there but just lacking. overall two good animations, good job.