Fave
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Who survived and what was left of them?
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Post by Fave on Jul 30, 2011 15:18:15 GMT -5
I know its quite bad but i wanted to try making one Alright well i decided to make a pivot for the PPPV just for fun to see how i would do and i heard you can post your pivots here early before the PPPV? well anyways here's mine...i think this would be considered a grapple in my opinion? It's a bit slow but i had the speed all the way up on pivot so i don't know how to make it faster than it already is. Leave any criticism below please..thanks.
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Fave
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Who survived and what was left of them?
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Post by Fave on Jul 30, 2011 15:19:16 GMT -5
Oh and yeah credit to K3V for the area
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Post by Sleazyness on Jul 30, 2011 20:43:11 GMT -5
Eh not to shabby. Just stiff and needs better reactions.
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Post by picfedguy on Jul 31, 2011 0:01:16 GMT -5
Off to a pretty good start here man though it does need a lot work, like the jump at the start - there wasn't one, the stick's legs kind of just stayed in the same place and there was no real lift off (you do this by extending the legs) which kind of made it look like the figure was just floating through the air. It was also very stiff throughout, you did move some joints here and there but you need to try and move every joint in every frame, the sooner you start doing that the sooner you'll get rid of the stiffness. Smoothness wise it was decent though it could defiantly use some more frames to smoothen it out that bit more. Reactions were sort of there but lacked impact (stick taking the move) and looked kind of half assed, you really should do the reactions in their entirety. Overall your off to a good start, at the moment I'd say mainly just work on getting the stiffness out of your animations and I think that you should try doing easier animations until you get the basics down, again though your off to a good start and I hope to see more from you in the future!
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Fave
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Who survived and what was left of them?
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Post by Fave on Jul 31, 2011 16:46:13 GMT -5
Update...new pivot.
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