Slice My Bread On The Apron Please.

[Phoenix Nitro]

Tryed to make this vid:






Credit: I Made ring from temps, Stciks were from dustins folder, and bg is sero's i think

[trøy]

A little fidgety at the beginning but that can be fixed with an edit, the walk backwards to meet him. If your going by the vid, Alex Shelley slowly shuffles over to him, but in the ani, the blue stk does like weird steps backwards. The mid-air is good, just a little stiff and need some spacing. The reactions are alright for the brown stk, but if you look at the blue stk, he ends up in a position that is well, awkward. Not to bad man. Keep working at it.

[picfedguy]

This is pretty good man. The small set up at the start was alright but I think at this stage you'd be better of just skipping that part and going into the move. So during the move you moved some of the joints but you need to try and move all of them to get rid of the stiffness, like on the Black stick you only moved the first back joint when you should have moved all of them. This was pretty smooth though a few more frames certainly wouldn't hurt. The reaction was sort of there but looked rushed and was rather lackluster and could have used a slight bounce for impact. At the moment I'd say that you should mainly work on moving all the joints to fix up the stiffness and throwing in a few more frames, once you get that down you can start on spacing. Good job man. By the way you should totally use this or make a new animation and hand it in for the Slobber knocker challenge at the PPV, even though you didn't sign up I'll defiantly throw it in the mix if you PM me an animation for it.