Terrible first try!

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My patience runs thin at 5 am..terrible I know
Edit-credit where due, forgot that!

[smay]

its very stiff, and floaty, not horrible at all for your first, good try. Move the joints more and take less air frames or speed it up, add reactions too.

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Quick question, when it's choppy, is that because i'm moving the sticks to far away? Or do I need more frames?

[TheNinthCloud]

Little bit of both, man.

Focus on movements also.

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Alright, thanks..this was done at like four in the morning and I haven't had sleep in days. Haha, I'm working on another one now, This isn't my actual first..just first in like..four years.

[TheNinthCloud]

Try getting a ball and moving it side to side, then it falling. Start with small movements then get bigger. When you want it to stop, reverse those movements. (Bigger movements getting smaller)

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One more thing, how do you make a jump, you know..look like a jump?

[Dr. Octagon]

The animation was stiff, choppy and fidgety. You need to work on spacing, theres a tutorial in the first aid thread I think. Also you should move every joint in every frame, and leave 10-15 frames at the end to make it look finished.

yourimg.in/m/9f24448.piv this is a quick ani i made to show you to make a jump

[dustinpwi]

that was a terrible way to jump it was hardly realistic and kykobra if you want to learn to jump on pivot I would suggest looking at some tutorials on DarkDemon or something

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So..it's starts with small movements, then on to larger movements, then when you want to change the move, or direction, it goes big to small? I believe I'm catching on.