Tylor
Main Eventer
Joined on: Dec 23, 2008 18:17:08 GMT -5
Posts: 4,437
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Post by Tylor on Jul 13, 2011 11:28:18 GMT -5
 Theres probably a few things I need to fix. |
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Post by cmsaint on Jul 13, 2011 11:39:20 GMT -5
This is the definition of Epicosity (I say that sarcasticly as epicosity is not even a word  ) But On to the ani. Smoothness: 8/10 Flow: 7/10 Reactions: 5/10 Creativity: 3/10 (Only because its a stip and it wasnt your idea) Overall: 4.6/10 |
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Deadly
Superstar
SFBL Record: 13 - 3 - 0
Joined on: Jun 30, 2010 0:04:05 GMT -5
Posts: 675
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Post by Deadly on Jul 13, 2011 17:58:37 GMT -5
ok this was good but there are some flaws (HURR DURR  ) first of all the run was very stiff since his back wasnt moving much.then after the one everything slowed down.either the dive should have been faster or the run should have been slower. next time try to keep the whole animation going in a single pace |
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Post by xtremehardyenigma on Jul 13, 2011 18:36:00 GMT -5
Awesome animation buddy. Really smooth and the playset is really beautiful ! But you had to move the arms of the person that delivres the dive while he was running because it screwed up your work.
Anyways overall, 9/10 Great work, keep it up.
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Post by smay on Jul 17, 2011 12:51:03 GMT -5
Runnings weird, stiff, and not bent in the back enuff. And the jump and airtime is slow as.
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