My first match

[therealdealbookr]

Didn't know where to put this, but here's my first ever match. It sucks lol, but that's because I don't have Adobe so I don't use string, it's pretty short. Please don't be too harsh, since I already know it's pretty bad.

JLK: Well were here with CFW's first match ever on TV!

Mick: Some awesome X-division action! Shannon Moore takes on Billy Kidman!



JLK: Well here comes Billy Kidman!

Mick: He looks prepared JL!



JLK: A very young athlete making his way to the ring...

Mick: What a match we have, moments away!



JLK: Well we start with a lock up!

M: Man what a great view we had of the ring there!



JLK: An arm drag!

M: I think that was a hiptoss...




JLK: Oh man Kidman right back up...

M: And an armdrag of his own!



JLK: A flipping senton!

M: So far a great way to start the match!



JLK: A whip into the ropes!



JLK: A back body drop...

M: No, Moore lands on his feet!




JLK: What a hurricarana from Moore!

M: Moore really impressing me!



JLK: Clothesline taking Kidman back down!




JLK: A whisper in the wind...

M: Kidman moved!



JLK: A complete shot! This may be it!




JLK: He goes up top...

M: And hits the shooting star press!



REF: 1...2...3!

JLK: Well Kidman wins it!

M: What a match!

JLK: See ya folks!

[Deleted]

Funny how a MOD got this wrong. You need to host it on a site, also, resize your pictures and turn it into a full fed and youll be laughing.

[blackcherry]

pooky said:

Funny how a MOD got this wrong. You need to host it on a site, also, resize your pictures and turn it into a full fed and youll be laughing.

He isnt mod of this board

everyone maskes mistakes

[Deleted]

Yeah, but surely Mods are the first to read the board rules?

[Man Without Fear]

i did the same thing my first time
its all good hehe

[fireworks]

The pics are blurry, resize your pics, USE STRING, and your figures are stiff as a board.

Better luck next time

[Eyce]

I'll be rather blunt.

- Don't use a Webcam, that's Insane NJ's trademark.

- Keep the camera still.

- Make positions look realistic.

- If you're holding up figures by their feet, make it look good at least.

- Don't make it look like you did it in your bedroom - at least give some effort to the presentation.

- 440x330 is the max you should have pictures in a show.

[ringofpoison]

It was a good match, I'd love to see you work on it some more, I like your FB fed, and hopefully you can produce a pic fed of the same calibre.

[Gazza]

CFW is already taken, by slash.

[ovwlegend]

blackcherry said:

pooky said:

Funny how a MOD got this wrong. You need to host it on a site, also, resize your pictures and turn it into a full fed and youll be laughing.

He isnt mod of this board

everyone maskes mistakes

u mean how u had an extra s in makes

id enjoy this alot more if it were hosted on a site but i applaud u for takin the pics its too long 4 me

[Jacob]

You need to change the name of your fed, dude.