Squatch
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Post by Squatch on Apr 29, 2011 16:21:06 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2011 16:53:15 GMT -5
Great show Ben! Good little arena, nice pics and some great action. Glad to see you sticking with one fed and building up momentum. Only thing is you not editing the string out. It really takes away from some of your high flying spots especially with your show being so well lit. Besides that you are on a roll! Keep up the great work. First reply WHOOOO!
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Jordan
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Post by Jordan on Apr 29, 2011 18:46:20 GMT -5
I only viewed the first segment, man, i'm sorry it was just so bad. The dialogue.
Apart from that, i like Cody as the champ and the images and stuff are nice. Just try and be better at the writing side of things.
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Squatch
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Post by Squatch on Apr 29, 2011 19:52:18 GMT -5
I only viewed the first segment, man, i'm sorry it was just so bad. The dialogue. Apart from that, i like Cody as the champ and the images and stuff are nice. Just try and be better at the writing side of things. Hey Jordan please watch other NWA episodes first to get the general idea. Also thanks for the replies John and Jordan. |
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samsson
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Post by samsson on May 12, 2011 0:49:36 GMT -5
Not bad dude...my main comment is the string...if you can master editing that out your action seqences would be 10xs cooler !!!! I will now have to go back and checkout your other shows  |
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tirva
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Post by tirva on May 20, 2011 16:37:33 GMT -5
You must not replies to other people's shows or else your replies would be in greater frequency!
I'm about to start watching, right meow!
Entrance setup and location are 100 times better. Your best yet.
Opening segment could've been longer. You gotta draw stuff out. Neither side had any reaction. You can't just switch sides. Cody didn't even give high fives or anything.
Edit the string. Use the smudge tool. It'll make things that much better.
Try and set your moves up better. I know for a fact that AJ Styles couldn't drag Samoa Joe into a tree of woe. Everything you did with the tree of woe was sweet but you needed a better way into it.
Your camera angles were sweet from the suicide dive that Joe hit. I think you should consider keeping it and only do the other camera angle for entrances. Overall, that was the best match i've seen from you! Great work!
I was about to hate on your HBK vs. Foley match till HBK turned on Sting! My only beef with this match was that HBK and Foley should've did more. Your matches are a bit short other than that 3-way but great ending!
CM Punk promo was shit. All you did was basically say Styles and Joe have no credibility. At least the interview could've said he was lucky to even get that win than Punk argue that he's the best NWA junior ever.
Links after that didn't work.
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