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Post by Deleted on Apr 19, 2011 17:09:55 GMT -5
Wow ben your pumping out these shows rather quick! The arena looks a little better, still wish you would get that wwe wrestlemania logo to the other side so as not to see it. I liked the tag match with Styles and Sting, kinda quick though. And the whole Kingston dive off thebalcony was cool. Looks like you found your niche, stick with it.
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Squatch
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Post by Squatch on Apr 19, 2011 17:17:58 GMT -5
Wow ben your pumping out these shows rather quick! The arena looks a little better, still wish you would get that wwe wrestlemania logo to the other side so as not to see it. I liked the tag match with Styles and Sting, kinda quick though. And the whole Kingston dive off thebalcony was cool. Looks like you found your niche, stick with it. Thanks John!  I forgot to move the ring and I was far into the show. I filmed this show for several hours straight and then uploaded them and edited/commentated. I have a huge event that should take a while that it coming up. Just keep and eye out for more shows!  |
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Post by brm on Apr 20, 2011 19:33:01 GMT -5
Ok, checking out this finally. I like your arena to begin with. It looks very large, and gives a nice feeling of being in a larger arena. I like that you have a crowd, but you can't really see them during the match, so it kind of defeats the purpose. Having the Kliq in your fed is pretty cool, and I liked how they were basically all current / later era looks for the members (Hall doesn't really have an "older" scan than that one, so it works. Nice to see Goldberg in your fed. I don't see many people using him, so it's nice to see him here. I'm personally a Goldberg fan. The Dibiase match was quick, but I got the feeling it was to get him and his submission finish over. Always good to see submission moves in pic feds. I also saw you used string for the mid air move, even if you didn't edit it. Nice to see the effort to employ string at all. Ok, AJ and Sting vs. Nash and Hall. This is a pretty big match here. Ok, let's get ready. First thing I don't like though, is that you have Hall and Nash, two very large men, in RA form, while AJ and Sting are both DA. It kind of defeats the intimidating factor Nash has when AJ towers over him. Ok, that match was short. I wish it had gone on a lot longer before the swerve. It could have been good if it happened after a grueling match, with AJ waiting on the hot tag, to have Sting stare him down, and allow himself to get pinned. Main event time - Rhodes vs. Carlito. I like that you're pushing Rhodes, as it's a change of pace. Nice poses throughout. The Kofi spot was really nice, but again, this match ended rather quickly for a main event. I think you built up a lot of stories for future episodes, but you need to spend more time on the matches, so that the stories actually mean something. Overall, it's a good start and you are on the right track. You just need to hone your skills. You've got all the elements, you just need to fine tune them.
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Post by Squatch on Apr 20, 2011 19:44:33 GMT -5
Ok, checking out this finally. I like your arena to begin with. It looks very large, and gives a nice feeling of being in a larger arena. I like that you have a crowd, but you can't really see them during the match, so it kind of defeats the purpose. Having the Kliq in your fed is pretty cool, and I liked how they were basically all current / later era looks for the members (Hall doesn't really have an "older" scan than that one, so it works. Nice to see Goldberg in your fed. I don't see many people using him, so it's nice to see him here. I'm personally a Goldberg fan. The Dibiase match was quick, but I got the feeling it was to get him and his submission finish over. Always good to see submission moves in pic feds. I also saw you used string for the mid air move, even if you didn't edit it. Nice to see the effort to employ string at all. Ok, AJ and Sting vs. Nash and Hall. This is a pretty big match here. Ok, let's get ready. First thing I don't like though, is that you have Hall and Nash, two very large men, in RA form, while AJ and Sting are both DA. It kind of defeats the intimidating factor Nash has when AJ towers over him. Ok, that match was short. I wish it had gone on a lot longer before the swerve. It could have been good if it happened after a grueling match, with AJ waiting on the hot tag, to have Sting stare him down, and allow himself to get pinned. Main event time - Rhodes vs. Carlito. I like that you're pushing Rhodes, as it's a change of pace. Nice poses throughout. The Kofi spot was really nice, but again, this match ended rather quickly for a main event. I think you built up a lot of stories for future episodes, but you need to spend more time on the matches, so that the stories actually mean something. Overall, it's a good start and you are on the right track. You just need to hone your skills. You've got all the elements, you just need to fine tune them. Thanks brm! I have been working on matchups for NWA Clash of Champions. So far they range from 40 to 100 photos per match. |
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Post by raabhimselffanv2 on Apr 21, 2011 23:40:13 GMT -5
Alright, since you took the time to send me a PM to check this out, Ill see it and comment on it. Like the arena first off, gives it that big feel. Also the crowd being above the entrance ramp is a nice touch seeing how i havent really seen that alot, but the overhang that goes over the ring somewhat kills it as it cuts the airspace limiting you to one side of the ring to work on aerial moves. I do like the cage piece against the ring though, you can do stuff with that being there so if you can get your crowd situated above the ring then it look crisp. Nice seeing the Kliq, open challenge by HBK? Lets see who comes on out. GOLDBERG? Nice choice there, I can see him fitting in your fed no problem. Good job setting up the main event with the spear by Goldberg. Alright, we got Ted Dibiase Jr. coming out, lets see who he faces. Oh boy, we got a dude named Ace Cade, this looks like a quick pick up for Dibiase. A fist to reverse a diving headbutt? And how did Dibiase stay on his feet? I don't get that really. Nice counter by Dibiase turning a School Boy into an armbreaker! Like how you thought about that, and Im guessing that is his finisher? Extremely quick match, it could of gone a bit longer to be honest. Sting and Styles vs. The outsiders for the tag titles in the second match? Hm, I really don't get the booking decision at this point but lets run with it. The string is really distracting, you could take your show to the next level if you take the time to edit that out, I really think you can take your show to the next level. Pele kick early on? Unexpected to say the least. And how can AJ tagging in Sting early be the end of AJ? Woah, extremely fast swerve, this should of went on alot longer seeing how this will be even short than the first match. Cody Rhodes vs. Carlito for the NWA Championship? Unexpected, but in this case its good seeing how you're building your own stars, thats a very good thing you have going for you. Nice dropkick, but as I said the string really hurts the pose. High elevation elbow drop, you're string work is decent to say the least. Woah! Kofi from the crowd, smart move using the elevated crowd to your advantage, plus you can hardly see the string, so this is probably one of the best poses of the bunch. Nice DDT by Carlito, but it wasn't enough for Cody to flip over and get the fall! One question, why is Carlito still down although Cody simply flipped him over? You should fix that for the realism effect. Decent show overall, the matches could use a lot more time seeing how each match was extremely quick and almost look like squash matches. But the tools are there for you to become a better pic fedder and you are setting up storylines for future shows, its good seeing that. Hopefully as you produce more shows your skill will increase so we can see you at your best, and always produce more! |
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Post by Squatch on Apr 21, 2011 23:53:19 GMT -5
Alright, since you took the time to send me a PM to check this out, Ill see it and comment on it. Like the arena first off, gives it that big feel. Also the crowd being above the entrance ramp is a nice touch seeing how i havent really seen that alot, but the overhang that goes over the ring somewhat kills it as it cuts the airspace limiting you to one side of the ring to work on aerial moves. I do like the cage piece against the ring though, you can do stuff with that being there so if you can get your crowd situated above the ring then it look crisp. Nice seeing the Kliq, open challenge by HBK? Lets see who comes on out. GOLDBERG? Nice choice there, I can see him fitting in your fed no problem. Good job setting up the main event with the spear by Goldberg. Alright, we got Ted Dibiase Jr. coming out, lets see who he faces. Oh boy, we got a dude named Ace Cade, this looks like a quick pick up for Dibiase. A fist to reverse a diving headbutt? And how did Dibiase stay on his feet? I don't get that really. Nice counter by Dibiase turning a School Boy into an armbreaker! Like how you thought about that, and Im guessing that is his finisher? Extremely quick match, it could of gone a bit longer to be honest. Sting and Styles vs. The outsiders for the tag titles in the second match? Hm, I really don't get the booking decision at this point but lets run with it. The string is really distracting, you could take your show to the next level if you take the time to edit that out, I really think you can take your show to the next level. Pele kick early on? Unexpected to say the least. And how can AJ tagging in Sting early be the end of AJ? Woah, extremely fast swerve, this should of went on alot longer seeing how this will be even short than the first match. Cody Rhodes vs. Carlito for the NWA Championship? Unexpected, but in this case its good seeing how you're building your own stars, thats a very good thing you have going for you. Nice dropkick, but as I said the string really hurts the pose. High elevation elbow drop, you're string work is decent to say the least. Woah! Kofi from the crowd, smart move using the elevated crowd to your advantage, plus you can hardly see the string, so this is probably one of the best poses of the bunch. Nice DDT by Carlito, but it wasn't enough for Cody to flip over and get the fall! One question, why is Carlito still down although Cody simply flipped him over? You should fix that for the realism effect. Decent show overall, the matches could use a lot more time seeing how each match was extremely quick and almost look like squash matches. But the tools are there for you to become a better pic fedder and you are setting up storylines for future shows, its good seeing that. Hopefully as you produce more shows your skill will increase so we can see you at your best, and always produce more! Thanks japtable! I liked making this show and I have been working on my first big event for my next show. The show is called "NWA: Clash of Champions 2011" and I really hope you check it out! I have a triple threat match between CM Punk, AJ Styles, and Samoa Joe that made almost 100 photos. |
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Post by StingerSplash on Apr 22, 2011 22:15:52 GMT -5
Looked good Ben! Glad to see you create an entrance-way, and also adding a nice little touch with the crowd there.
1. DiBiase looked strong. Hope to see you further establish him.
2. The tag-match went rather short. But, interesting swerve. I'm excited to see what you have planned for Sting, and Styles. I smell a feud?
3. Kofi/Rhodes is a pretty good feud thus far. Only thing is, with Batista and Umaga, it seems like another stable. With the Kliq already involved, I'm not sure that two heel stables is a good idea. But, I like how you've used Rhode's group so far.
Overall, good work! Only complaints was the string, and maybe consider making your matches a little longer. Keep it up, Ben! It's impressive how you've got two shows out this quick, as well. Maybe you can give me a lesson on finding time to film. haha
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Post by Mr.Amazing on Apr 23, 2011 22:10:04 GMT -5
great second show! Kingston was crazy!
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Post by unionjack on Apr 24, 2011 7:03:22 GMT -5
I like your arena and the start to the show was good i can't wait to see more of the kliq and i hope we see more of Hbk and Goldberg as i think this could be a really good fued i really like the group of Cody Rhodes , Batista and Umaga and i really like the Cody / Kofi fued i really want to see Kofi win the nwa championship, i enjoyed watching Ted Dibiase vrs Ace Cade it was a fun match to watch it the best bit of the match was when Ted gone for a diving head butt but Ace hit him in the face good match keep it up that was brilliant in the tag match i was shocked to see Sting turn on AJ i would really like to see Cody's group merge with the Kliq that would be awesome, i really enjoyed the main event that was brilliant when Kofi jumped on Rhodes and his lackeys i like this storyline with Armando using a needle. really good show i enjoyed watching it you are improving and keep it up mate i can't wait to see the third show great show  . |
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Post by Squatch on Apr 24, 2011 8:56:23 GMT -5
I like your arena and the start to the show was good i can't wait to see more of the kliq and i hope we see more of Hbk and Goldberg as i think this could be a really good fued i really like the group of Cody Rhodes , Batista and Umaga and i really like the Cody / Kofi fued i really want to see Kofi win the nwa championship, i enjoyed watching Ted Dibiase vrs Ace Cade it was a fun match to watch it the best bit of the match was when Ted gone for a diving head butt but Ace hit him in the face good match keep it up that was brilliant in the tag match i was shocked to see Sting turn on AJ i would really like to see Cody's group merge with the Kliq that would be awesome, i really enjoyed the main event that was brilliant when Kofi jumped on Rhodes and his lackeys i like this storyline with Armando using a needle. really good show i enjoyed watching it you are improving and keep it up mate i can't wait to see the third show great show . Thanks Tom, I'm working on a big NWA show right now. |
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Post by Ramos on Apr 24, 2011 9:31:48 GMT -5
Right here we go:
I lke the look of the arena and the Balcony should make for some sick dives
Nice segment with the Kliq and Goldberg, although there were some out of focus shots that you shoud have really reshot, the spear pose was nice.
Gotta be honest the clicking on the NWA logo and a new window popping up format really annoyed me, if there was a way around that It would make me enjoy the show more.
I like Cody's group and the segment was nice
Nice poses in the DiBiase/Cade match, but there were quite a few blurry pics again.
Rght the swerve in the AJ/Sting vs Hall & Nash match was nice but you used it far too early, a good length match before the swerve would have made it much more shocking and really added to the enjoyment of the show.
I liked the Cody match but I thought it was a bit too short again, considering it was your main event, that being said the dive from Kofi was nice and I enjoyed Cody cheating to win.
Overall you are doing things well but you need to work on the length of your matches and the overall presentation (blurry pics make viewers less inclined to watch again), I also wish you had built up the storylines you are using for your next show as the matches on a "Pay Per View" should have been built up through your tv shows as opposed to just thrown together as they seem to be. But keep trying man you just need to work on the stuff that you are doing wrong cos you are doing quite a lot right such as your commentary and your poses are good.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 25, 2011 11:07:28 GMT -5
nice work like you entracne way
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Post by tirva on May 19, 2011 13:19:23 GMT -5
HBK promo was way too bland.
Your arena setup is a 10000000 times better!
Everything seems way too rushed. HBK wouldn't just stand there and get hit with the spear. You should've added some drama to build that up. Even if Hall and Nash jump Goldberg and HBK runs away so only Hall gets hit the spear, it adds more story because HBK just got away and later in the show or in next shows, Goldberg finally hits HBK and that's your big payoff!
It's cool that your adding stuff to Cody's group but he sounds lame and plain. Proof read what you write and add more.
Poses were ok in ted vs. ace. Seems very rushed though. I understand it's a squash match but it was missing something.
The Sting/AJ tag match was a creative ending but you didn't build up the match for us to get invested in it. AJ did one move then got screwed and you had Nash standing up like nothing happened after he got Pele'd.
Your main event was a bit short. I really liked what you did with Kofi jumping from that platform. Your main was the best thing on the show. Glad Cody retain and your building that match up very well.
Now just work on your promos and edit your string! Much better than your first show!
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Post by Robert69 on May 31, 2011 22:51:00 GMT -5
I like the setup better. It's always good to see the Kliq around, can't complain about that. The string is still in a lot of photos. It is distracting. Favorite part was definitely the Kingston spot. Sting laying down? Mehhhhhh, my favorite wrestler of all time, Idk if I can favor him doing that...but I'm interested to see where that goes.
Sometimes your commentary becomes repetitive. The sentence before a photo and right after a photo will be nearly the same exact thing, but by each of the two commentators...it just gets -- boring -- for lack of a better word. Overall the show is entertaining though, and I do look forward to your super-show you're working on. Your show has a ton of potential keep it up.
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Post by deskjet on Jun 3, 2011 8:05:58 GMT -5
Trying to make my rounds today, I like the new setup. Pics are really good. All the matches were decent with pretty good storylines. Only thing would be to try to edit out the string. Other than that, one of your better productions.
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