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Post by thepedigree22 on Mar 28, 2011 17:37:42 GMT -5
 not my best animation  i like it though. feedback
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Post by zinku418 on Mar 30, 2011 19:37:56 GMT -5
Its choppy, you need to really take your time and make sure that you are spacing out the movements better so it flows.
the airtime pattern is a tad weird, i don't think it follows a specific circular pattern, and the connection between the sticks lack the kind of "oomf" that creates the illusion of realness.
As for the reactions, the lying stick's arm movements and legs movements don't correspond to how he was hit, makes it unrealistic, and you had the arms hover in the air before the connection, makes it look choppy again. Red's reactions were also choppy, but better than the others.
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