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Post by secondcitysaviour on Feb 5, 2011 10:50:30 GMT -5
This is my first animation on this board. im not sure what the whole idea of his board is so will someone explain.is the ni any good?  |
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Post by wwetypo on Feb 5, 2011 15:36:26 GMT -5
Your actually ok. Just work on it a bit better.
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Post by matfin123 on Feb 6, 2011 7:52:34 GMT -5
collab? im a beginner btw
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Post by secondcitysaviour on Feb 6, 2011 7:55:35 GMT -5
yeah,form a team?
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Post by matfin123 on Feb 6, 2011 7:56:54 GMT -5
if you want depends if our first collab is any good |
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Post by picfedguy on Feb 6, 2011 12:07:07 GMT -5
Name in reference to the second city saints of CM Punk and Colt Cabana  . First off the style is quite nice though the cage looks a bit short for the ring. Not really liking how you had the sticks fall out of the frame, kind of seems lazy - if you didn't have enough room you could have extended the width of the animation a bit more or moved the ring to one side. Animation wise though, for your first this is very good, of course with this being your first theres stiffness and fridgets but it was very smooth with a consistent speed throughout. To six up the stiffness you need to try and move every joint in every frames. To fix up the fridgets, which is where a joint on the stick figure makes a movement which doesn't fit in with the previous frames you need to play over the animation whilst making it and go through the previous frames to make sure that it all flows together. Also you should try to add in more impact and reactions, like when the stick hit the canvas from the GTS there should have been a slight bounce for the impact then you should have done a small reaction to the move. But yeah very nice for your first, hope to see some more from you in the future! |
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