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Post by The Immortal One on Jan 2, 2011 14:49:39 GMT -5
Hey people, I made a new animation. I hope this you people like it. All advice is welcome since I'm always looking to improve. Here it is:  Please let me know what you think! It is one of my first so please go easy on me.  Thanks! -Coenronaldo |
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Deadly
Superstar
SFBL Record: 13 - 3 - 0
Joined on: Jun 30, 2010 0:04:05 GMT -5
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Post by Deadly on Jan 2, 2011 15:52:42 GMT -5
hmmm...this is pretty ok for a beginner
but it was very stiff
at the beginning there was no jump he just swung his arms
the airtime honestly i liked but he should have moved more
overall this was ok...5/10
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Post by The Immortal One on Jan 2, 2011 16:22:12 GMT -5
hmmm...this is pretty ok for a beginner but it was very stiff at the beginning there was no jump he just swung his arms the airtime honestly i liked but he should have moved more overall this was ok...5/10 What can I move more in this moonsault? |
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Ian
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Post by Ian on Jan 2, 2011 16:34:32 GMT -5
well as deadly said its rather stiff choppy and kinda floaty Choppy - animation doesnt run smoothly Stiff - when the joints (red dots on the stick) arent moved enough or at all Floaty - when the stick remains in the air too long causing it to not look realistic there was no jump and the ladder should have had some sort of reaction use about 5 frames for a jump alone and develop a style whether it be cartoony realistic its up to you just practise and practise keep animating mate and im sure you will become better |
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Post by alexgg on Jan 2, 2011 18:06:17 GMT -5
The unrealistic nature of the animation dosnt help because the jump dosnt seem physically possible from the point of jump and the way its executed.
The porportions of eveything also look off, the ring looks oversized.
Although I will say its a good animation for one of your firsts, it has good spacing and somewhat good movements.
Needs some work on bending the joints, such as the knees for the jump and arching in the back.
Just try to make shapes look realistic and think how each boy part would react.
But for now, your doing good.
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Post by samyxxy2 on Jan 8, 2011 18:02:11 GMT -5
i myself have never made an animation because i use mac and cant use pivot alright whatever back to the animation.....its a bit choppy and the guy on the table doesnt really move for example he just maoved it diden look like he got hurt or felt pain at all..... well my opinion 4/10
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Post by kezley008 on Jan 8, 2011 18:31:11 GMT -5
Not bad really. Stiff choppy and all but smooth and floaty. Work on them and you will be ok. 5.1/10
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