DWF Genesis

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this is my first ever PPV I would really appreciate some feedback guys (=
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[WCM's Izzy]

Sorry, man, I really don't like your fed one bit. I'm betting it has lots of potential, but something in the execution doesn't work for me. The pictures are huge and some of the figure poses are so awkward, like you don't even try to rotate and move some joints to make them look more natural and you end up with twisted wrists and legs and such that make the overall pose look hideous. I don't believe you need to be an ace poser or even use string, but even in some basic poses, it looks like you are just rushing to putting your figures in place and shooting frames, so you can knock out shows real fast. Sure, your episode count is going up at an awesome pace, but maybe if you took just a bit more time, the results would be better. Not talking like a pic fedder here, talking to you as somebody who watches the show.

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I really wish you'd try more with your arena and overall production. Seems like you managed to do some good poses and you're using deluxe figures which I can't tell you is so much easier than using these damned RA figures I'm using that refuse to pose... But the lack of production values kills a lot of it.

I feel like you rushed to PPV, but I do like that the table match had some great teased table spots. That felt like a really good match, even with the production issues.

Of course it sort of defeats the purpose when you use a table spot in the very next match. I blame modern wrestling for not teaching you that these are supposed to be big moments.

The main event had some more flow, but definitely would have been better with a bit more build. You've been blowing through shows, but I think we'd all appreciate it more if we saw everything else improve along with it. Some good spots here, camera work got a little unclear at points, though. Not bad.

It's a decent show, but I wasn't feeling "Pay-per-view" when watching it. Apply yourself not just in the posing and pushing out of shows, but making storylines and characters and production values.

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Also, I've responded to a few of your shows now, please share the love in return when you can. I don't believe in crapping all over you, because I think it's clear you're trying. However I think everyone should be working to comment on other people's shows too.

[pwsphil]

I agree with others, you have a nice roster & stories just take a little extra time for things to look a bit better. Keep going ! i enjoyed the show!