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Post by bgunn on Dec 18, 2010 11:18:30 GMT -5
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Post by picfedguy on Dec 19, 2010 1:49:15 GMT -5
Some nice improvement here as you can tell there was a lot more work put into it. Some parts still looked a little stiff though, like the Yellow's legs were very well done but the Grey's back was rather stiff. More of a minor thing here but do rember to put the sticks behind the ropes. Not too much more to say really, it was pretty smooth though I don't like how the Grey stick just stopped as you should always do the reactions. Overall a nice improvement from your last animation, keep trying and I'm sure you'll start to pick things up.
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Post by alexgg on Dec 19, 2010 9:17:48 GMT -5
I like it, style looks like something of 2007. aha.
The flow and movements are pretty desent, you look to be improving and will continure to improve if you do more.
Try keep movements going through the frames so it dosnt get stiff but the flow is good.
I like yellows movements most, the jump and legs are good althoigh fidgety towards end.
The grey stick could move better, looks good at the start but then movements stop as if you couldnt be bothered with reactions or didnt know how to end it.
Try to give it more 'bounce' and keep them behind the ropes.
Heck pretty much what Marc said aha.
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