Squatch
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Post by Squatch on Nov 24, 2010 20:10:51 GMT -5
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Post by britishinvasion on Nov 24, 2010 21:00:02 GMT -5
Well you would think the way you topped all of Tirvas threads he would of been the first to leave a response, but I dont know what to say to this. If it's meant to be a joke brilliant job, if it's not you have a lot of work to do IMO.
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Post by Squatch on Nov 24, 2010 21:02:58 GMT -5
Well you would think the way you topped all of Tirvas threads he would of been the first to leave a response, but I dont know what to say to this. If it's meant to be a joke brilliant job, if it's not you have a lot of work to do IMO. What do you mean a joke |
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Post by britishinvasion on Nov 24, 2010 21:09:24 GMT -5
I took this posting as one of those guys trying to push others work down with a bad show like some guy did a few weeks ago. Sorry if that wasnt the case mate I can be rather thicke sometimes. You have to work a lot on your poses, your arena is rubbish and and I was a bit indifferent as to what was going on. You have WWE spraypainted on some kind of wood entanceway but your fed is called NAWF? I missed the point? With all the other high quality shows being posted lately this comes off rather poor IMO.
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Post by Squatch on Nov 24, 2010 21:11:51 GMT -5
I took this posting as one of those guys trying to push others work down with a bad show like some guy did a few weeks ago. Sorry if that wasnt the case mate I can be rather thicke sometimes. You have to work a lot on your poses, your arena is rubbish and and I was a bit indifferent as to what was going on. You have WWE spraypainted on some kind of wood entanceway but your fed is called NAWF? I missed the point? With all the other high quality shows being posted lately this comes off rather poor IMO. I am sorry and the reason for spray paint being on the stage is because I made it that way years ago when I was young when I helped make the stage and I know this might be poor compared to others and thats the reason I posted because I have more to the show I have to work on and I wanted to see what was wrong with the first part of the show. |
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Nov 24, 2010 22:03:17 GMT -5
I'm no genius when it comes to Pic Fedding, but I can give you my opinion. I like the fact that you seem to have a nice attitude, like you are willing to learn and take some heat while you are starting off, and we all have to crawl before we start walking and making PPVs and big angles and stuff. I dunno if there was more than 1 segment and I really would not have watched further if there were. You'd benefit from better picture quality and maybe a nice backdrop, even a simple black board can make a difference. The poses were very stiff, you can have very simple poses and still make your show look cool in my eyes, but having the figures so stiff damages it. Some pictures seemed to be very random, like 5-6 pics in a line that seem like you took several shots of the same thing and kept them all. The far away angle is pretty static too, especially taking into consideration that you seem to have lots of physical space to move around and get more angles. Now if this is what you like doing, just the way it is now, there is not much to say and I would not comment, but you are asking for feedback, which is good, and I hope our comments help you make your show better and don't discourage you from having fun and showing off your stuff. Some of the current regulars, like Wars, Tirva and any others I may not remember out of the top of my head right now, are putting on great shows. Make sure to check them all out and see all the good things they are doing. You can also check the posing board to see how the expert poses manage to make their figs look awesome while delivering high kicks, somersaults and pile drivers. Hope it helps...  |
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Post by Squatch on Nov 24, 2010 23:02:28 GMT -5
I'm no genius when it comes to Pic Fedding, but I can give you my opinion. I like the fact that you seem to have a nice attitude, like you are willing to learn and take some heat while you are starting off, and we all have to crawl before we start walking and making PPVs and big angles and stuff. I dunno if there was more than 1 segment and I really would not have watched further if there were. You'd benefit from better picture quality and maybe a nice backdrop, even a simple black board can make a difference. The poses were very stiff, you can have very simple poses and still make your show look cool in my eyes, but having the figures so stiff damages it. Some pictures seemed to be very random, like 5-6 pics in a line that seem like you took several shots of the same thing and kept them all. The far away angle is pretty static too, especially taking into consideration that you seem to have lots of physical space to move around and get more angles. Now if this is what you like doing, just the way it is now, there is not much to say and I would not comment, but you are asking for feedback, which is good, and I hope our comments help you make your show better and don't discourage you from having fun and showing off your stuff. Some of the current regulars, like Wars, Tirva and any others I may not remember out of the top of my head right now, are putting on great shows. Make sure to check them all out and see all the good things they are doing. You can also check the posing board to see how the expert poses manage to make their figs look awesome while delivering high kicks, somersaults and pile drivers. Hope it helps... Thanks for the reply I moved my arena because I want to have my black backdrop in place which I have now and I also do animations! I will check out the poses and I loves Wars and Tirva's shows I watch them all the time! |
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Post by Squatch on Nov 24, 2010 23:46:31 GMT -5
I put in effort into my 1st show, if you would have put as much effort into this show as you've put into bumping old shows and ignoring some new quality TWA Show's, then it would probably reflect in your work, but you did not. We have a big day tomorrow, hope you show up to ignore our efforts. I put effort into this to I don't know if you ever think about it but I just made ONE PART of my show and you are coming off and are angry at me for posting something and asking for an opinion on the show and what I can work on but you came onto this and didn't tell me anything about the segment/match. I was being nice about this but I want replies not things about TWA in this thread |
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Post by Byron F'N Saxton Fan on Nov 25, 2010 0:17:46 GMT -5
I put in effort into my 1st show, if you would have put as much effort into this show as you've put into bumping old shows and ignoring some new quality TWA Show's, then it would probably reflect in your work, but you did not. We have a big day tomorrow, hope you show up to ignore our efforts. Seems overly negative. If he doesn't want to reply to TWA, he doesn't have to. No rule stating he has to reply to at least those shows. As for Instant Classic #1, it needs some work, but I saw the effort in the show/segment and liked it. I would cut down Entrance Pics to two at the most, as unless you're going to have a sneak attack when somebody is coming out, you don't need to have four-five pictures of the same Figure in a different spot on the Ramp. The Commentary team you chose is a great one, but you need to work on their actual Commentary and the Wrestlers' Promos. You showed flashes of good material, but I wasn't a huge fan of most of what I read. I've been told my Commentary and Promos are good, and while I'm still a "Rookie" to Pic Fedding, I'd be glad to help out on that type of stuff, if you want me to Poses/Camera Angles/Arena: The poses were stiff, for the most part. Everyone says it, but it's true, bend the joints. Your a Pic Fed fan, so just look at some of the pics from the shows you watch and maybe even attempt to copy poses with your own figures for practice, and eventually you'll be able to feature great poses from your own thinking. The two Camera Angles were bad. You need to either get much closer to the Ring and Entrance Way if you only want one angle on each place, but I strongly recommend various Camera Angles for both areas. The Stage its self was nice, but you need to give it some color and logos Introducing Us to Characters: Everything was very sudden and felt like stuff we should have already known, which isn't the way to go on your first show. Let the Announcers explain the people and their ways, not just telling us who they are and going from there. Let the Wrestlers talk about themselves and introduce themselves (No Anderson pun intended) via Microphone, that way we can get attached to the characters right off the bat, not just watch a Match with a Heel and a Face. I really didn't like the way Test was revealed. Taking off a shirt after being on Camera for so long should not be the way to identify Test. I would have advised either having the Test figure be someone you made up or if he was Test, make it clear he's just there as a Fan, not a Wrestler. I didn't like the Champion being beaten on the first show, but at least we now have an interesting three-way storyline for the next show, which is the key to a great Fed. I'd say the shows should be posted in their entirety, and if you don't do that, at least give us more than one Match for a Half. Sorry if my review sounds mean, as it isn't meant to be that, at all. I think your someone who with some work can be great at Pic Fedding, but you need to study the shows you watch and apply their talent to your own. |
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Post by Squatch on Nov 25, 2010 0:24:53 GMT -5
I put in effort into my 1st show, if you would have put as much effort into this show as you've put into bumping old shows and ignoring some new quality TWA Show's, then it would probably reflect in your work, but you did not. We have a big day tomorrow, hope you show up to ignore our efforts. Seems overly negative. If he doesn't want to reply to TWA, he doesn't have to. No rule stating he has to reply to at least those shows. As for Instant Classic #1, it needs some work, but I saw the effort in the show/segment and liked it. I would cut down Entrance Pics to two at the most, as unless you're going to have a sneak attack when somebody is coming out, you don't need to have four-five pictures of the same Figure in a different spot on the Ramp. The Commentary team you chose is a great one, but you need to work on their actual Commentary and the Wrestlers' Promos. You showed flashes of good material, but I wasn't a huge fan of most of what I read. I've been told my Commentary and Promos are good, and while I'm still a "Rookie" to Pic Fedding, I'd be glad to help out on that type of stuff, if you want me to Poses/Camera Angles/Arena: The poses were stiff, for the most part. Everyone says it, but it's true, bend the joints. Your a Pic Fed fan, so just look at some of the pics from the shows you watch and maybe even attempt to copy poses with your own figures for practice, and eventually you'll be able to feature great poses from your own thinking. The two Camera Angles were bad. You need to either get much closer to the Ring and Entrance Way if you only want one angle on each place, but I strongly recommend various Camera Angles for both areas. The Stage its self was nice, but you need to give it some color and logos Introducing Us to Characters: Everything was very sudden and felt like stuff we should have already known, which isn't the way to go on your first show. Let the Announcers explain the people and their ways, not just telling us who they are and going from there. Let the Wrestlers talk about themselves and introduce themselves (No Anderson pun intended) via Microphone, that way we can get attached to the characters right off the bat, not just watch a Match with a Heel and a Face. I really didn't like the way Test was revealed. Taking off a shirt after being on Camera for so long should not be the way to identify Test. I would have advised either having the Test figure be someone you made up or if he was Test, make it clear he's just there as a Fan, not a Wrestler. I didn't like the Champion being beaten on the first show, but at least we now have an interesting three-way storyline for the next show, which is the key to a great Fed. I'd say the shows should be posted in their entirety, and if you don't do that, at least give us more than one Match for a Half. Sorry if my review sounds mean, as it isn't meant to be that, at all. I think your someone who with some work can be great at Pic Fedding, but you need to study the shows you watch and apply their talent to your own. Thanks for replying I will be really working on poses and I liked this Pic Fed and I think that over time it will get better but this will be a good storyline I hope people enjoy. Also I moved my arena around and I think that was a test match and the episode hasn't begun because now I have had many replies. What could I do to the stage and could you help me with some commentary I would appreciate it! Just Private Message Me |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2010 1:46:16 GMT -5
I know some people got on me for stiff poses, but a lot of those it looked like you didn't even move the figures at all. You gotta have them move a bit more. Other then that, it was just messy. Try to clear things up a bit and make a little more focus and maybe it'll shape up some.
Good luck.
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Post by unionjack on Nov 25, 2010 6:46:34 GMT -5
Don't worry man you will improve, you took alot of effort in doing this and i thank you for it, the posing needs working on but don't worry you'll get there . |
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Nov 25, 2010 10:16:56 GMT -5
One way or another, the guy put up a show, and some people come here with the bash stick and later complain why nobody wants to start a fed. I'm not talking about those who offered constructive criticism, just those that came here with a really bad attitude, no matter how much of a pic fedding veteran they feel they are, you are not prima donnas, guys, just people posting shows, this isn't the WWE where somebody new comes along and you feel they are the rookies in the locker room and you are entitled to go Hardcore Holly on them. Some regulars need a little bit of an attitude adjustment if they expect us, the public which we still are whether we post shows or not, to keep replying to their shows.
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Post by britishinvasion on Nov 25, 2010 11:13:22 GMT -5
I agree ardilita that people need an attitude adjustment. Why in the world would you top this thread again? This guy came onto this board and topped all of Tirvas older shows, pushing down everyone else's new work btw, and then put up this match which he knew was not really good. It belongs in the discussion thread if he wants advice. I also notice that you took time to reply twice here and yet havent replied to the five or six great shows that have been posted in the past couple of weeks.
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