Shikari Ferrari
Mid-Carder
October 14th o2 arena newcastle <3
Joined on: Aug 20, 2010 6:24:06 GMT -5
Posts: 392
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Post by Shikari Ferrari on Aug 22, 2010 7:20:18 GMT -5
15 minutes of boredom made this Cred:Kev for attacker stick and style Cred: Alexgg1 for victim stick
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Post by alexgg on Aug 22, 2010 9:48:34 GMT -5
Its kinda weird, theres not too much movement going on. You need to work on a jump, 'cause there really isn't one. He needs to bend down then expand out before going airborne.
Frames are needed for a transition, don't just flip the guy, you need 3-5 frames showing him from different sides.. 1. Facing Left 2. Facing Left with arms and legs slightly separated 3. Facing screen with one arm and leg on both sides 4-5. steps 1&2 flipped'
The fall is kinda stiff too because he doesn't crouch in until half way down, he should do it slowly and the move should start to take its shape as soon as he reaches the air. And the reactions... well...screw them.
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