Hoboturtle
Superstar
Joined on: May 26, 2010 12:47:08 GMT -5
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Post by Hoboturtle on Aug 8, 2010 14:05:30 GMT -5
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Deadly
Superstar
SFBL Record: 13 - 3 - 0
Joined on: Jun 30, 2010 0:04:05 GMT -5
Posts: 675
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Post by Deadly on Aug 8, 2010 18:01:33 GMT -5
its was ok but the running was kinda weird lookin but when he did the cutter it happened a bit too fast in my opinion.but its overall still good.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 8, 2010 21:10:32 GMT -5
Some of your spacing / movements look really awkward, running was stompy and the arm movements looked odd. The green stick was really stop starty throughout and the way the Blue stick just stopped looked weird, the reaction was very good though, had nice impact just the spacing on the way down looked off. Good job.
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Post by alexgg on Aug 10, 2010 13:13:19 GMT -5
It looks fantastic, like Marc said the spacing is a little off, the speed changes are noticable, too fast/too slow. eeehhhharghrhehehe!!!
I do really like it tho, how it starts off with the run under the clotheline, instead of straight into the move.
Green looks pretty good on the miss, and the run looks good, but dislike the no-arm movement.
I also dislike how Green stands there, too stiff.
Transitions are quick, but look great, love the movements and the end is pretty awesome how it turns to a stunner.
Green has great reaction, but blue kills all impact.
Overall fantastic work. 8.5/10/
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