JWS Short Match

[jwsowner]

Over 550 subs on You Tube special short match I made. Since I came in November, this is my first FULL MATCH. But it's a short one.

Enjoy what little of it there is and leave a comment or advice:

[firedath987]

loved this jordan i really like he impact in the fight and how sandman came out like he does and the hardcore and blood in this match8.5/10

[Scotty]

550? God damn you to hell jordan!

Ok to the match... I like your entrance stage, it seems kinda weird tho how theres no actuacl spot where they enter. I real like how shane entered the ring. Liket the rope bounce. AWESOME! YOU USED ENTER SANDMAN! Nice taunts at the beggining, shane kinda slides back a little tho, another nice rope bounce. Saw string on the sandmans jump. Ok we're getting extreme now. Wow this isnt one bit stiff! So extremely smooth. Ha nice "did u know" like the commercial break thing. Good pin. Wow overall a real good match. It wasnt choppy and was reallll smooth. The only flaw was the string
9.5/10

[sicknicholas]

That was amazing

When I got 500 subs I didn't even have the skill to make a match like that..

[sweetchinmusic1997]

Enter Jordan!

Amazing, you call this a short match? Really smooth, I liked Sandmans Entrance, was really hardcore, a bit slidey during the start, the chair thing was great, the Senton was great, I liked the ending. Overall I really enjoyed it, hope to see more great matches from ya!

[[The Ukrainian One] Dimburuk]

Wow,,JWS,that's awesome! Liked the "Did You Know" thing) That was like real tv match! Very smooth,all was VERY realistic(especially bouncing ropes,how did you do that?). Awesome entrances,awesome moves=AWESOME ANIMATION!

[jwsowner]

Thanks for the comments guys, I appreciate it.

SCM1997, well yeah. I would have liked to make it alot longer. I would like to have like 10 minute or longer matches if possible.

Anymore comments??

[Ben - #6 Munchie]

loved it. the only flaw was the string. 9/10. also how did you record the sounds form SVR game?

[sweetchinmusic1997]

Just wondering JWS, whats your form of lighting?

[jwsowner]

Apr 20, 2010 16:48:55 GMT -5 sweetchinmusic1997 said:

Just wondering JWS, whats your form of lighting?

Fluorescent light on the celling.

[wwestevo07]

Awesome match jws, pretty cool setup, i like it, your working isn't that bad but i think it would look better if you moved the legs foreword a slight bit more each time, loved when shane ran up the steps, that looked pretty realistic, and i like how u add the rope bounce, you add alot of small detail in it, you seem to do alot of stuff i never get round to trying myself lol, im not a big fan of showing the real entrance video in stop motion (even though i use to) but its not that big of a deal, the start of the match was good with the taunts and stuff, i loved the elbow by sandman, and the camera turning round slightly looked cool, and not sure if you did but it kinda look like you switched sandman to a DA in the middle of the elbow beacause it kinda looks like a DA the way his legs are, it looked great, the chair trow by sandman kinda look like he barely trew it, dosnt really look like he put much power into it, i liked the build up to sandman's top rope jump and the jump looked great too, good idea with the did you know thing even though there pretty annoying on wwe lol, i liked the ending, was pretty cool, nice barbed wire, overall a great relistic match as normal

[nhwdomination]

good aniamtion match congrats 0n the 550 subs 10/10

[jwsowner]

Apr 21, 2010 14:50:22 GMT -5 wwestevo07 said:

Awesome match jws, pretty cool setup, i like it, your working isn't that bad but i think it would look better if you moved the legs foreword a slight bit more each time, loved when shane ran up the steps, that looked pretty realistic, and i like how u add the rope bounce, you add alot of small detail in it, you seem to do alot of stuff i never get round to trying myself lol, im not a big fan of showing the real entrance video in stop motion (even though i use to) but its not that big of a deal, the start of the match was good with the taunts and stuff, i loved the elbow by sandman, and the camera turning round slightly looked cool, and not sure if you did but it kinda look like you switched sandman to a DA in the middle of the elbow beacause it kinda looks like a DA the way his legs are, it looked great, the chair trow by sandman kinda look like he barely trew it, dosnt really look like he put much power into it, i liked the build up to sandman's top rope jump and the jump looked great too, good idea with the did you know thing even though there pretty annoying on wwe lol, i liked the ending, was pretty cool, nice barbed wire, overall a great relistic match as normal

Thanks for the long and detailed reply, Stevo. I actually didn't switch Sandman to DA (I don't even have one) I tried to move his joints as best I could for an RA fig. I find RA easier to work with because they stand up better than my DA figs. lol. I never knew that there was anything that you didn't do! You've done basically everything in my view. Glad you liked the running up the steps. It was a bit of a challenge because it was my first time doing it. I'm really glad with how it came out. I see other animators (past and present) have close ups of figs walking up the steps and it looks like hands are used so I wanted to try something different. I wasn't satisfied with the steel chair throw either, it could have been better. Thanks again for the long comment I appreciate it!