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Post by That guy next door. on Aug 11, 2009 2:33:26 GMT -5
Yes. It's here. Finally. I'm away soon so i will give shoutouts when i return.
PLEASE READ THIS BEFORE VISITING SITE!
I got the segment uploading wrong. So please view them at the stated times.
Segment 1 - After Match 2
Segment 2 - After Match 3
Segment 3 - After Match 4
Segment 4 - After Match 5
Segment 5 - After Match 6.
site: 4riwunleashed2.webs.com
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Post by That guy next door. on Aug 11, 2009 3:29:02 GMT -5
Announcements:
DH Smith got his wish. In a slightly different way. If he, Bret Hart, and Jim Neidhart, can defeat Tazz, Terry Funk, and World Champion Chris Benoit next . Then all 3 men will become contenders fort he title and RITC's main event will be an elimination chamber! However, should they lose. They can not fight for a title whilst either Benoit, Funk, or Tazz is holding any title.
Chris Jericho must explain himself. Then face Randy Orton. If Orton wins, Edge and Orton get to face Chris Jericho in a 2 on 1 handicap Hell In a Cell Match at RITC!
Sonjay Dutt and Alex Shelley have been released.
Curt Hawkins has one more shot at a contract against Edge next episode. If he wins he faces Zak Ryder for his title at RITC.
Eddie Guerrero will face The Brian Kendrick.
The Ultimate Warrior and Road Warrior Animal have an announcement to make regarding their tag title belts.
Jeff Hardy will face Rey Mysterio at Rage in The Cage.
Jeff Hardy, Rob Van Dam, Steve Austin, Booker T, Big Show, Snitsky, and Matt Stryker, will face off in tag team action against Charlie Haas, Elijah Burke, Rey Mysterio, X-Pac, Mr Perfect, Kurt Angle and Shelton Benjamin.
4RIW has appointed two new enforcers to officiate matches. Lou Albano, and Khali, they act like referees in their suties. However, they are allowed to use non-biased physicality when necessary.
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easy1986
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Post by easy1986 on Aug 11, 2009 3:42:02 GMT -5
Alright lets get to it. I didnt even reply to the first one because it honestly gave me a headache. You still have alot you can improve so I'll try not to bash you up to much here. First thing I noticed is that you dont actually have a workable link. As a viewer I dont wanna have copy and paste the link in my browser and then ave to type www and etc. As a viewer thats your job. Next thing is Pic quality in general. To me it seemed like you rushed through this. I can tell because most of your pics are blurry. The one's that arent though are very good and I commend you for that. Another thing is the wrestlers have to be in all the shots. In some of them you cut the picture of at the head and then the sequences were just to choppy to even try to follow whats going on. Posing is also something you need to work on. Now Im no expert but you should get those joints bending so that the moves look more realistic. I did like some of your angles though and even enjoyed a few things with this show. Agani this is not bashing just constructive criticism. Dont let the veterans on this board get you down, work through and try to improve little by little on each show. Trust me you'll get better if you just try a little harder to give us a more polished presentation
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Post by That guy next door. on Aug 11, 2009 5:20:28 GMT -5
Thanks easy, the blurriness was caused by a lack of light when i shot it, with a lamp aswell. So i couldn't see through the viewfinder right. The guys were cutoff due to a long lens i had on. Designed for closer zoom macro, almost SD size with FRFPSQZT quality.
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Post by deskjet on Aug 12, 2009 7:03:33 GMT -5
ok, here we go. Still some blurry pics, but u knew that  . Deuce as gm...ok, cool. Poses are a tad better but you still need to work on that. Also on yur transition poses from one pic to the next. Now some pics are missing...guys are off the ring one minute, on the next  . Every match, pics are just so unorganized and have no flow whatsoever...ya got Big show on the turnbuckle and the next pic Snitsky's on the turn buckle...it really hurts my brain  . tazz/funk had nice clear pics and not too bad except for taz miraculously standing in mid air. WTF? The show ends with 4 straight backstage segments? Gaaaaaaah! Well, this show i think was worse than the last show. The spacing of your show with moves, segments, etc is just bad. pic quality has improved some but it just means now I'm watching guys in the ring then on the stage in the next pic in high def. And ya gotta use some fishing line for midair poses once in a while. I think you need to really take your time with your next show and work on the suggested improvements by myself and others before you put another show out. Keep tryin though |
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Post by dmallett4 on Aug 12, 2009 7:27:41 GMT -5
WTF? The show ends with 4 straight backstage segments? Gaaaaaaah! ) it doesnt, as lay said, I got the segment uploading wrong. So please view them at the stated times. Segment 1 - After Match 2 Segment 2 - After Match 3 Segment 3 - After Match 4 Segment 4 - After Match 5 Segment 5 - After Match 6. although this could of been sorted if he had posted a link at the bottom of the page. i hate the fact that you have more than one entrance song on a page, its dreadful. i get about 6 songs playing at the same time. |
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Post by hippo123 on Aug 12, 2009 7:41:42 GMT -5
WTF? The show ends with 4 straight backstage segments? Gaaaaaaah! ) it doesnt, as lay said, I got the segment uploading wrong. So please view them at the stated times. Segment 1 - After Match 2 Segment 2 - After Match 3 Segment 3 - After Match 4 Segment 4 - After Match 5 Segment 5 - After Match 6. although this could of been sorted if he had posted a link at the bottom of the page. i hate the fact that you have more than one entrance song on a page, its dreadful. i get about 6 songs playing at the same time. I don't know where to go when watching the show. There's too many links at the top of the page and the entrance thing really gets quite annoying. |
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Post by dmallett4 on Aug 12, 2009 7:48:32 GMT -5
it doesnt, as lay said, I got the segment uploading wrong. So please view them at the stated times. Segment 1 - After Match 2 Segment 2 - After Match 3 Segment 3 - After Match 4 Segment 4 - After Match 5 Segment 5 - After Match 6. although this could of been sorted if he had posted a link at the bottom of the page. i hate the fact that you have more than one entrance song on a page, its dreadful. i get about 6 songs playing at the same time. I don't know where to go when watching the show. There's too many links at the top of the page and the entrance thing really gets quite annoying. yeah, basically the show is a mess. with all the tips youve had, and viewing other shows, you must understand this isnt that good. some pics are really nice, while others are really blurry. your match work is horrible, the poses are horrible, the backstage segments are just plain odd, theres no links, the show doesnt have any flow, the matches have no flow, and worst of all, we have at least 2 songs playing at the same time on one page. btw, there is no way in hell that you are 27 or whatever, and can release a show like this. |
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MXW 6 is here! https://youtu.be/LiDlNuiKmjA
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Post by Deep Shadows on Aug 12, 2009 17:01:32 GMT -5
I don't know where to go when watching the show. There's too many links at the top of the page and the entrance thing really gets quite annoying. yeah, basically the show is a mess. with all the tips youve had, and viewing other shows, you must understand this isnt that good. some pics are really nice, while others are really blurry. your match work is horrible, the poses are horrible, the backstage segments are just plain odd, theres no links, the show doesnt have any flow, the matches have no flow, and worst of all, we have at least 2 songs playing at the same time on one page. btw, there is no way in hell that you are 27 or whatever, and can release a show like this. I have to agree with Mallet...to me your shows just aren't watchable. You really need to step it up, man. |
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Post by hippo123 on Aug 12, 2009 17:17:26 GMT -5
Listen to me when i say this. I think your shows would be better off on Proboards.. At least there you can't get lost in the masses of Links.
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Post by That guy next door. on Aug 19, 2009 13:23:13 GMT -5
To hippo123, everytime i use the image tags on proboards, nothing shows up. I am working harder all the time to make my stuff better. And i was a little rushed to get it out before my vacation.
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Post by Elliot on Aug 19, 2009 16:28:09 GMT -5
To be honest, it didn't have my interest at all, it was very messy. I spent 5 minutes listen to 'Dude Look Like a Lady' by Aerosmith, it entertained me more. Why is was used as X-Pac's theme I'll never know, but yeah. You need to work on your poses a lot more and take care with the blurry pics. You need to improve a lot if you want a good show on here. The links at the top were a mess and I couldn't really navigate around the site. The theme music needs to be edited because you get multiple themes playing at once and that will put people off. Why have you changed all the superstars themes to things that don't match them at all? Like I said, I really couldn't get into this. I'll keep watching, but only for improvements. I wish you all the best.
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Post by Elliot on Aug 19, 2009 17:53:20 GMT -5
I was Hippo Lay.. Seriously, upload to photbucket and then post on proboards.. It'd be alot better than your current crapfest The point I was trying to get across. Thanks, Shifty. ;D |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Aug 20, 2009 13:04:30 GMT -5
Usually... i name the pros and cons, but in this show i saw nothing but cons.
the picture quality is horrible, and that is surprising because some of the pictures you take, come out quite nice. and the rest of them are blurry messes. THERE IS NO WAY YOU ARE 27. A 27 year old would know very well that this work is not good... at all. the poses were stiff, the photos were blurry, the commentary was bad. this is honestly a step down from your first show. i don't want you to think i am being mean just for the hell of it, I am telling you this because hopefully you will realize that you need to improve. you are able to give people constructive feedback on their shows... TAKE YOUR OWN ADVICE. That is all I have to say... try harder. |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 21, 2009 11:14:01 GMT -5
Brilliant performances£¬You certainly spent a lot of time making that,Unfortunately, some picture very fuzzy. Continue efforts !
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Post by Titan Wrestling All-Stars on Aug 21, 2009 11:37:35 GMT -5
Your second offering of Unleashed and yes, I'm watching it out of order but it's ok, here goes:
Good promo by Austin but Deuce as GM, odd choice if you ask me. Austin Vs. Angle in a HITC, sounds good, so does tonight's tag match. Hawkins pins Ryder with one punch? To the defense, I'm sure he didn't see it coming.
6-man is up next! Damn, I need that Hardy! As with your last episode, liking the use of X-Pac. Elijah Burke, excellent choice. Quite a bit going on, I'll stay focused with Pac and Burke. Hardy hits the twist of fate on Pac! Dutt and Benjamin are gone. Ok, did I miss something on the Elijah Experience cuz now I'm randomly in the corner with Burke and Shelley? Images just bit the dust with Burke going for a suplex. Images are working again with poetry in motion onto Burke, I guess X-Pac is gone, I don't what the hell is going on now. Twist of fate on Shelley. Rey has come out, Shelley is gone, Rey and Jeff staring each other down.
Tag match now. Animal is out but who's his partner, shouldn't it be Hawk? Rated Y2J are out and it looks like Animal is going it alone, for now. Animal is not fairing well. Warrior is the partner, shouldn't this match be over, he doesn't job you know. LOL, I knew it, Warrior pins Edge, new tag champs!
Big Show and Snitsky are up now. Man, Snitsky already took Show down, surprising. What the hell, Snitsky with a hurricanrana, he's just serving it up to the Big Show. Wait, poetry in motion by Snitsky, this is getting bizarre, sign him up for the cruiserweight division. German suplex fails and Show plops on Snitsky, lol. These two are just kicking the crap out of each other. Snitsky wins, thankfully this one is over, what a train wreck.
Funk and Tazz are up next! Tazz blindsides Funk with a chairshot. Nobody home on the moonsault. The ageless Funk with a senton onto Tazz. Damn, over already and no winner, I was pulling for a Funker win there.
LOL, Lou Albano is enforcer number two, I love it. Austin & RVD against Perfect & Angle, they're already going at it! That double ankle lock looked odd. Angle and Perfect are killing, they're working great as a team. Ah man, they both go flying and crashing through the table. Double Stunners and a win for Austin and RVD!
Matt and Jeff segment, Matt's out for revenge, I don't really think Jeff cares.
Good Hart Foundation segment, never let the Anvil drive, DH Smith getting a title shot, could be interesting.
Well, I guess Jericho is cutting ties with Edge.
Quick and to the point with Austin and RVD, like Austin actually strategises, RVD you stoner.
DH is still making it interesting, what kind of shape will Funk and Tazz be in though.
Ok here's the over assessment, I can see that you've tried to improve but there was a lot lacking. At times the pics were blurry while other were very good quality, take a little more time to get the right shot. The lighting was killing the show at various points with a couple of shots partially black. Poses at times were rough, and I do mean rough. I found the Big Show/Snitsky match to be very unbelievable, mostly with the high flying spots, the brawling part and the knock down drag out fight was the right way to go, just ditch cruiserweight moves in it and it's fine.
Now that the cons are out of the way, there is a plus side, obviously you've made improvements from your first episode, I didn't find myself distracted by the happenings in the background, most likely from the change in lighting. This episode overall was a definite step in the right direction, based on other watchers replies and your replies to there's, you take criticism well and use it to make improvements, when I first started out I didn't really handle it well, but with time, you see the truth in what's said and when you do, you tend to excel at getting better. By the way, I'm coming after you for using my show title, lol, good show though, I look forward to Episode 3.
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Post by That guy next door. on Aug 21, 2009 15:27:57 GMT -5
Just some shoutouts here.
Deuce i chose as GM because he can be harsh, yet if someone is still peeving him off. He can go in there and beat the hell outta them himself.
Proboards refuses to work for me!!!! My pic sizes are too big. You get a red X or nothing at all.
Links will be added next time round along with music that plays one after the other in one longer track. I didn't realise that they started automatically.
Also, you may notice over the next few weeks that names like Big Show start to change to real names like Paul Wight. Through what i have filmed so far i have been back through every pic to make sure not a single one is blurry. And wwefan. I am taking my own advice, and i think it's working for episode 3.
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