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Post by Deleted on May 11, 2006 17:18:52 GMT -5
the scene opens with Radioactive standing in the middle of the ring with a microphone in his hand
Radioactive: UNDERLAY AREBA UNDERLAY!!!!!!!!!! Doucheland I am goin to beat you! So come on! DO YOU WANNA PEICE OF ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UNDERRRRRRRRRLAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! When I am done with you people are going to call you ....... uhhh..... Arab guy the taco!!!!!
laughs at his own joke
So I am gonna beat you! UNDERLAY!!!!!!
screen fades
OOC: I counted and its 62 words. This was a 100 word limit RP. Now reveiw!
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Post by Kurt Burton: Script Doctor! on May 11, 2006 17:32:18 GMT -5
underlay??? Do you mean andale?
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Post by Deleted on May 11, 2006 17:56:56 GMT -5
underlay??? Do you mean andale? I can say it however I want and thats how I roll! UNDERLAY UNDERLAY UNDERLAY!!!!!!!! Plus its kind of like my cathc phrase and I am sticking to it even though it is mispelled. |
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Post by Mr. PerpetuaLynch Motion on May 11, 2006 18:01:25 GMT -5
-_- man... you need to get better. "I am going to be you" ? What the hell is that. I take it he should either be flattered or digusted that you want to be him. You could have atleast went a smidgit over the limit like 103 words but instead you took a short cut... sad... "When I am done of you people are going to call you ....... uhhh..... Arab guy the taco" -_- sad...
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Post by Deleted on May 11, 2006 19:27:12 GMT -5
woops let me change that I meant to say I am going to beat you. I typed this upo treally fast becaus e i forgot all about that.
BTW you can't appreciate my aweosme talent as a writer. ;D
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Post by cureforthesickness on May 11, 2006 20:29:07 GMT -5
woops let me change that I meant to say I am going to beat you. I typed this upo treally fast becaus e i forgot all about that. BTW you can't appreciate my aweosme talent as a writer. ;D drop the  ing ego. I don't care if you are joking around or not. there's no place for it. There's also no reason to be rushing your roleplays and putting out crap. You aren't at the level you can do that. Every roleplay should be your very best and the roleplay after that should be better. You need to start taking people's advice if you are ever going to succeed |
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Post by Deleted on May 11, 2006 20:38:01 GMT -5
woops let me change that I meant to say I am going to beat you. I typed this upo treally fast becaus e i forgot all about that. BTW you can't appreciate my aweosme talent as a writer. ;D drop the ing ego. I don't care if you are joking around or not. there's no place for it. There's also no reason to be rushing your roleplays and putting out crap. You aren't at the level you can do that. Every roleplay should be your very best and the roleplay after that should be better. You need to start taking people's advice if you are ever going to succeed Sorry man I am not trying to annoy anyone and yeah I could have definately sone better, but I was kind of busy today and there was noway I could've posted it in time tomorrow. So yeah expect something better next Hiuse Show, but still don't expect anything great either  . |
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Post by Mr. PerpetuaLynch Motion on May 11, 2006 20:47:43 GMT -5
Oh crap... I just noticed it was the 11th... I have to do a CR RP!
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Post by Deleted on May 11, 2006 20:50:09 GMT -5
-^- has has the same reaction Jobber had
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