Idea For A Storyline

[The Sexy Psychotic]

Well, I like to think myself of having a good imagination and a good storyline making mind, and heres something that I thought up, please give me feedback;

I used:
Challenger - Ken Shamrock
Champ - Randy Orton

Well, after WM, we have a superstar return/debut, and maul through the superstars and gets a WWE Title shot at Backlash. So, at Backlash, we see the big submission (ankle-lock), and the Champ (Orton) taps, however the ref does nothing, screwing the challenger out of the gold, he then gos to the ref and threatens him, the Champ trys to limp to get his belt, however, the challenger sees this, hops out the ring, and ends the PPV pounding away on the Champ.
The next night, we see the Champ in the ring, and he complains of last nights match, saying the challenger used too many fist shots, and MMA tactics, the challenger then comes out, and threatens for a re-match, howver the Champ says "no", obviously, the challenger then charges down to the rng, and pounds on the Champ, busting him open, later that night the GM gives the challenger his rematch at Judgement Day, in a Lions Den match, rules being that the winner is the one who beats his opponent unconcious. The next 3 weeks or so are used up by promos and loose matchs and build up.
At JD, the two men fight out the Lions Den, after a lengthy brawl inside, in to the ring, where the challenger beats down the Champ badly, busting him open with fist, knee and headbuts, eventually winning!!
The next night, the Champ demands a re-match, and that he wants to take out and show that the now new Champ is nothing, and he wants to do it in an I Quit match!!
Again, the next few weeks leading to the PPV are used for build up, promos and loose singles and tag matches.
The big PPV comes, I Quit, Champ Vs Challenger. They battle all night, ending with the Champ (Orton) whaling away on the challenger (Shamrock) , however, the challenger aint giving up, both are battered and bloodied, however, to stop the pain, the challenger lets himslef fall off the stage, through tables, head-first, nocking him uncoincious. Thus ending his title reign and the fued.

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Honestly, I was going to abit of a Fight Club like storyline, and I also think that if the PPV themes were old, Grunge songs, it would add to the feel of the fued, (Backlash being "Where Is My Mind", Judgement Day being "The Man Who Sold The World")

So, wat do you guys think?

[The Sexy Psychotic]

Anyone, 22 Views and nothing, come on

[Chicago]

Is your last name, by chance, Russo?

But, seriously, your booking is decent at best (in this particular storyline). Everything leading up to the I Quit match makes Orton look very weak and there is no actual resolution to the feud during the last match. Also, beating guys up can only happen for so long and so often before it has run its course.

The referee spot doesn't have any continuation making it pointless as well as confusing. Is there any reason for Shamrock to keep getting title shots other than simply being rewarded for his beating up on the champion? In my opinion, in order for Shamrock to earn his title shot, he should have to prove himself in one-on-one contests where disqualification and count out rules are enforced. If Shamrock succeeds, he should then be rewarded but Orton should be more actively involved in the feud other than being jumped repeatedly. For instance, Orton could enlist the services of someone bigger than him to take out Shamrock or weaken him for their upcoming PPV match.

There needs to be some fine tuning to the storyline, or adding in small details that will all to come to a head during the blow-off match in the feud. If you were going to go the heel referee route, you could always have the evil referee replaced upon the ending of the final match where there is then a level playing field for Shamrock to beat Orton.

Overall, though, it's not bad, but there are areas that could be improved and remember to always keep the initial storyline intact because that's what you are building off of.

[Triple S]

I'll be downright honest, I don't like it at all. Not to mention, I was totally confused with the Lions Den and the I Quit matches.

Either way, it's something TNA pretty much tried to do and remotely failed. I seriously didn't see any continuation in the storyline. Why did the referee screw Shamrock to start off with? Why is pretty much nothing continued with the corrupt official, other than Shamrock getting a rematch? Doesn't make any sense.

My personal opinion is that storyline would fail, no offense.

- Triple S

[The Sexy Psychotic]

OK, OK, I see this isn't that big of a hit, and yeah, I know there really isn't that much continuation, but this was just a 3minute idea, of course I would need to go in depth more, but this is just the core of it all