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Post by Deleted on Sept 21, 2008 14:03:31 GMT -5
Wow man, 65 pages and still going strong, nice to see you're still doing this. Unforgiven was a really good show, the card looked great, and it showed in the write up. The opener was a really good, and a great way to start off the show. I really liked the finish and I'm glad you put the belt on Dibiase, he makes a good champ, tbh. The Kingston and Carlito match was also good, but it wasn't my favorite. The ending was fine, but yet, it was also kind bland. Also, I wanted Carlito to win, but Kofi is fine. The US title match was really good, possibly my favorite. It left me on the edge of my seat, and I'm really glad Haas won. However, Punk needs to reach main event status, I feel you have left him on the mid-card for too long. The next few matches were all great. My favorite match was actually the Jericho and Taker match for the title. It was really good and very realistic. I could of cared less of who one because I enjoy both, but I'm kinda glad you put the title on Taker. The Elimination Chamber was pretty good, but I found it kinda hard to read, same goes for most of your matches. Anyways, the match was like I said good, but it could have been better. At first, I was really glad that Michaels won, but when MVP came out I got so pissed. I'm not that big of a fan of MVP and I don't think he is championship material, Michaels would have been fine. Oh well, still a good show. Now, time for my little rant. I know you have had repetitive responses about how unrealistic this is, so I wont talk about that. But I have a problem with your layout and writing style. I think it gets hard to read when you have begginging, middle, and end of the match, and then you list every single movement the wrestlers do. It's ok, but for me, it gets really anoyying. Maybe you could change that. Anyways, keep this up, and it may be the longest running diary on this board. BTW, do you think you could reply to TNA again, I posted a new Impact.
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Post by The Undertaker on Sept 21, 2008 20:46:12 GMT -5
The True MVP? Last Night's Unforgiven PPV was a huge success. After an awesome Elimination Chamber, Shawn Michaels emerged victorious, only to lose the title minutes later to MVP, who shocked the world and cashed in his MITB Briefcase. What will the aftermath of this shocking incident be?
Randy Orton and Mr. Kennedy may have been announced as the winners of last nights handicap match, but the true winners were Randy Orton and Mr. McMahon. McMahon and Orton attacked Mr. Kennedy after the match, due to Kennedy showing some sympathy for Austin. Is this the end of Kennedy and McMahon's friendship?
John Cena, Rey Mysterio, Batista, HHH, and Rob Van Dam all fell short of WWE Championship glory last night. What will be next for these men?
After becoming the NEW Intercontinental Champion by defeating Paul London in a hard fought match, who will step up to challenge the NEW Champion, Ted Dibiase Jr?
Find out this Monday on RAW at 8/7 CT, only on the USA Network!
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Post by Dwight on Sept 23, 2008 14:57:30 GMT -5
Its definitely good to see Dibiase Jr with the IC title since I just can't buy into London at the moment. I am however shocked that you had Punk drop the US title to Hass since I dont see the hype in the guy but ah well.
I'm also shocked that Austin lost but those odds were just too high against him I guess. With that beat down after the match I really hope that hes done for good too be honest since I don't buy him as coming back and being a major player again.
The Chamber match was a bit challenging to read since the text was so jammed together. Would have probably been easier if there was a space between each entrant. But at least you put each entrant on their own line unlike most people that would just pop it in a paragraph somewhere.
Amazing finish with Michaels and Hunter and you really had me going with Michaels as champ...only for MVP to cash in. Which this has nothing to do with your match, but I'm just sick of the MITB thing period. Its done so much in diaries and in the WWE with guys getting beat down after a match. Its just not shocking anymore. It now becomes "Gee, I wonder when its coming". But again thats nothing against yours in particular. I say that everywhere now.
Sides, I really wanted to see HBK as a champion for once. I know his supposed view in real life about how he doesn't want to be champion but I'm amazed that so many people take that seriously int he diaries.
But now the door is wide open for you with MVP. You could have Michaels feud with him, you could continue The Rock feud, you can have Triple H want a rematch or a combination...which is probably whats going to happen. So its great that there are so many options and the reader really has no clue where its going. Just a shame that Shawn never catches a break.
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Post by koreygunz on Sept 23, 2008 18:59:21 GMT -5
Awesome show! This was MVP's coming out party. Great way to build him up in his match with Rock, and then have him leave as champ by cashing in MITB. Hated to see HBK win the title and then lose it, but still a great moment. Austin losing was a bit of a shocker, but the aftermatch was great. I could see Kennedy as a popular face, especially if Austin becomes his manager or mentor of sorts. Dibiase as IC champ is cool, and Haas beating Punk cleanly was surprising. Great graphics as well.
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Post by The Undertaker on Sept 23, 2008 20:48:12 GMT -5
September 22th, 2008 -Nashville, TennesseeEpisode # 800*We cut to the arena to see hear the Heart Break Kid Shawn Michaels theme music hit. The crowd gives him a huge ovation as he heads down the ramp and into the ring, holding a microphone.* Shawn Michaels: Needless to say...I...am NOT...in a good mood tonight. You see, less than 24 hours ago...I experienced one of the best moments in my career. And then...only a few minutes later, I experienced one of the worst moments in my career. I won the Elimination Chamber Match. I beat five other men to become the WWE Champion, and then, I got attacked by a talentless, little, coward. MVP, I'm talking about you. You see, the Heart Break Kid Shawn Michaels is definitely going to be the last man that attacks ANYBODY from behind. So right now, I want you to get out here, so I can take MY WWE Championship back where it belongs. *TIME TO PLAY THE GAMMMMMEEEEEE**The crowd gives the Game a mixed reaction, as he heads down to the ring without his WWE Championship for the first time in months.* Triple H: Wait...wait just one second. Did...Did i hear that right Shawn? You're the last man to be attacking anybody from behind? Well, lets look at your history. Marty Jannetty...Diesel...Hulk Hogan...should i keep going? You see, Shawn, you're a liar. You lie to these people like it's your job. You're going to be the last person who deserves a shot at MVP. The odds were stacked against me, Shawn! I deserve a shot at MY WWE Championship! And I want it tonight! *William Regal appears on the TitanTron.* Regal: Wait! wait just one second! There will be no WWE Championship Match here tonight. But, Shawn Michaels, Triple Haitch, you two WILL be in action here tonight. That's right...you two will be facing each other. And the winner will go to No Mercy to face MVP for the WWE Championship. Triple H: What?! Why should i have to fight for the chance?! It's my title, I deserve the damn shot.William Regal: Good luck gentlemen.*Commercials* *An Unforgiven Recap Video airs.* *We come back from the break to see a video air, that shows Cryme Tyme challenging Elijah Burke and John Morrison to a match on tonight's RAW.* Tag Team Championship Match-Elijah Burke & John Morrison Def. Cryme Tyme-The match was good, and Cryme Tyme got the fans behind their side big time. Burke and Morrison dominated in the early going, using dirty tactics and illegal double team whenever they got the chance. Eventually, JTG escaped and made the hot tag to Shad. Shad came in and cleaned house for a bit, and JTG was climbing up to the top, ready to deliver the Drop Down, but Burke pushed JTG off the top rope, and to the outside, sending JTG crashing into the guardrail. Shad knocked Burke off the apron with a big boot, but he turned right into the big springboard kick from Morrison, who then covered Shad to get the win. After the match, Morrison and Burke celebrated with their titles as they walked up the ramp. *We see a graphic appear on the screen, advertising that the NEW WWE Champion MVP will be here tonight. We then see another graphic appear on the screen, advertising Randy Orton's message to Mr Kennedy, NEXT!* *Commercials* -Randy Orton w/ Mr. McMahon Def. Chuck Palumbo-The match was a basic squash. Orton won in about a minute and thirty seconds, after a punt to the head, which was followed up by an RKO. After the match, Orton got on the microphone, as the lights in the arena dimmed, and the spotlight shinned on Orton, as McMahon stood behind him, glaring over his shoulder. Randy Orton: Last night...was the single greatest night of my career. I ended Stone Cold Steve Austin's career. I was the man who put Austin down for the three count! I KILLED the legend of Stone Cold Steve Austin. ME. RANDY. ORTON. As the days go on, my legacy in this business, and my impact on this business, continues to grow. Randy Orton has become a household name in America. Randy Orton has become the epitome of talent in the Wrestling business. And last night, I proved, once again, just how good I can be. And I also proved, just how weak Mr Kennedy could be. Kennedy's actions disgusted me. They made me sick. He betrayed his family, and he betrayed me. Kennedy. I'm going to say this once, and once only. Stay out of my way...unless you want to end up like Steve Austin...then stay out of my way. *Orton drops the microphone, as we slowly cut away from the arena.* *The announcers stay silent, as we then see another graphic appear, advertising that the J.R. will be speaking to the Rock via satellite, up NEXT!* *Commercials* *We come back from the break to see J.R. get into the ring.* Jim Ross: Ladies and Gentlemen, tonight we're going to be speaking to the Rock via satellite. The Rock is currently recovering from the injuries he sustained last night, at the hands of Rycklon Stephens. Take a look...*Highlights from last night's Unforgiven Pay Per View airs, showing Rycklon locking in the vicious Bear Hug on the Rock after his match with MVP.* *We then see the Rock, coming to us live from his home in Miami, Florida.* Jim Ross: First of all Rock, let me just say that everyone here wishes you a speed recovery. The Rock: Thank You. Jim Ross: Now, Rock, over the past 24 hours, the internet, the fans, and of course, the locker room has been buzzing. There's been lots of talk about you're future, and if you're about to hang up you're boots. Is there any truth behind that statement? The Rock: Well, JR, to be honest, I'm not quite sure yet. I've been through a lot of injuries in my career, but at this stage of my life, I can't really afford to risk anything to serious to my health. Jim Ross: Has Doctor James Andrews given you a diagnosis on your injuries? The Rock: Well, he did say that I do have plenty of bruised ribs, as well as a sprained back, so he's advising that I stay at home and rest for a few weeks. BUT. The Rock says, Doctor James Andrews can kiss the People's Ass. Next week, I WILL be at RAW. And MVP...I'll have something to say to you. And as for that big gorilla, planet of the apes piece of monkey trash, Rycklon Stephens. I'll have more than something to say about to him. *The Rock gets up, and leaves.* *Commercials* *We cut to the arena to see John Cena make his way out to the ring, to a pretty decent pop. Cena gets into the ring, and grabs a microphone.* John Cena: Even though...I lost last night, I realized a few things. One of the most important things I realized, was the disrespectful way I'd been trying to earn myself a championship match lately. There's a lot of guys in the back, who haven't even gotten a shot at the Championship yet, and here I am, out here every night, demanding a title shot. When I looked up to the top of that chamber...and I saw this superstar, jump from the top of the chamber, all the way down to the ring, and crash onto me, I realized what some of these guys were willing to do to get a shot at Gold. And I realized that most of them aren't too different from me. So, starting tonight, John Cena is going to begin his road to a WWE Championship Match. I'm going to beat everyone in above me on the Championship Ladder, until I rightfully earn my Championship Match. And I'd like to start with a certain someone who I've already mentioned. So, Rey, get out here, and I can challenge you to a match right here, right now.*WHO'S THAT JUMPIN OUT THE SKY, R-E-Y MYSTERIO, HERE WE GO!**Rey makes his way out onto the stage to a huge pop, and then walks down to the ramp, and into the ring.* Rey Mysterio: John, It'd be an honor to fight you, right here, right now. If there's anyone who deserves a title shot as much as me, it's you. *William Regal walks out onto the stage.* William Regal: Excuse me...what in the bloody hell do you think you're doing? I believe that the last time I checked, I make the matches around here. You two will have your match, but It won't be here tonight. Tonight you're going to be in a Tag Team Match against these men...*Joe Henning and Ted Dibiase Jr. walk out onto the stage. Dibiase is holding his newly won Intercontinental Championship.* William Regal: And you're match...is NEXT. *Commercials* -John Cena & Rey Mysterio Def. Ted Dibiase & Joe Henning-The match was very good, and the crowd was going crazy for both Cena and Rey. Dibiase and Henning tried to keep Rey in the ring, and prevent Cena from getting out of the corner, but eventually Rey was able to use his speed and reflexes to counter the double team attack from the two heels, and tag in Cena. Cena came into the ring like a house of fire, and took it to Dibiase and Henning. Cena tossed Dibiase out of the ring, and Mysterio launced himself to the outside with a splash, taking him out. This left Cena in the ring with Henning, who he drilled with an FU, and then locked in the STFU. After being in the hold for a bit, Henning tapped out, and Cena and Rey were victorious. After the match, Cena and Rey stood victorious in the ring, and had a stare down. These two are heading on a collision course. *We see a graphic appear on the screen, advertising that the NEW WWE Champion MVP will be here later tonight.* *An Unforgiven Recap Video airs.* *Commercials* -Jazz Def. Jillian Hall-The match wasn't that long, and Jazz pretty much dominated, as Beth Phoenix looked on from ringside. Jazz ended up hitting a Powerbomb on Jillian to get the win. After the match, Beth got into the ring and attacked Jazz with the Women's Title from behind. Beth then stood tall over Jazz, as we cut to the back. *We see a split screen, of both Shawn Michaels and Triple H, each man warming up for their big match, which will go down NEXT! The winner will face MVP at No Mercy!* *Commercials* -Shawn Michaels Def. Triple H w/Stephanie to gain a Title Shot against MVP at No Mercy-Right from the start, the Game was thinking smart, as he came down to the ring with Stephanie for the first time in a long time. Unfortunately for the Game, his bad luck streak continued here tonight. The Game put up an amazing effort, in what was an amazing back and fourth match, with lots of big moves, near falls, and close finishes. The Game and his long time rival battled for nearly 20 minutes, but in the end, Michaels was able to counter the Pedigree into another roll up to get the win against the Game. After the match, Michaels celebrated his win, as the Game was fuming. Suddenly, the Game was dropped from behind by MVP, who nailed him with his WWE Championship. By the time Michaels realized what had happened, MVP had nailed him with the Championship as well. RAW came to a close as MVP stood tall over both Michaels and The Game, holding his WWE Championship high in the air. Quick Results-Elijah Burke & John Morrison Def. Cryme Tyme -Randy Orton w/ Mr. McMahon Def. Chuck Palumbo -John Cena & Rey Mysterio Def. Ted Dibiase & Joe Henning -Jazz Def. Jillian Hall -Shawn Michaels Def. Triple H w/Stephanie to gain to gain a Title Shot against MVP at No Mercy
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Post by The Undertaker on Sept 23, 2008 20:49:41 GMT -5
26 DAYS.WWE Championship Match (c) MVP vs. Shawn Michaels
John Cena vs. Rey Mysterio
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Post by koreygunz on Sept 24, 2008 19:26:30 GMT -5
Good follow up to the PPV. Glad HBK is getting a rematch with MVP, and Im curious to see where you now go with HHH. I like the idea of Cena vs Rey, and I hope we migth see a Cena heel turn.
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Post by iamthefreak on Sept 24, 2008 20:55:48 GMT -5
Good show with lots of big names. I like how you are using Orton and it truly reminds me of why he was the Legend Killer. Not sure about Triple H losing on a random Raw but HBK wants revenge so it makes sense in that regard.
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Post by The Undertaker on Feb 23, 2009 16:55:26 GMT -5
Still The Big Dog Last Sunday at Unforgiven, the Undertaker was able to fight off the challenge of Chris Jericho, allowing the Deadman to retain his World Heavyweight Championship that he won from his Brother Kane at SummerSlam. Having defeated another foe, who will be the next to challenge the Deadman?
Edge let loose a terrible rampage last week on Smackdown. After attacking Jeff Hardy with steel chairs, Edge turned his attention to Jeff's brother Matt, who he delivered not one, but two spears to in a horrible attack after the two faced off in a grueling match. Will General Manager Teddy Long have any punishments for Edge's actions?
After pinning CM Punk at Unforgiven, Charlie Hass has finally won the United States Championship. Coming off the biggest win of his life, Hass will be in action this Friday on Smackdown for the first time since being crowned the NEW United States Champion. How will Hass perform? Tune in this Friday to find out.
Speaking of the United States Title, the former United States Champion, CM Punk, lost the title after a long run at the top. What is next for the Straight Edge Superstar? Will he look to go after his lost prize? Or will he begin another journey towards something even greater?
Kofi Kingston was able to defeat Carlito at Unforgiven last Sunday for the second time in a row. Will the Jamaican Superstar be able to continue his hot streak?
Speaking of hot streak, Jake Hager, the All-American Athlete, stands at an 11-0 record in the WWE thus far. Will anyone step up and be able to take out Hager?
Find out all of this and more on Friday Night Smackdown! Tonight at 8/7CT on the CW 11 Network!
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Post by DTP. on Feb 23, 2009 16:57:21 GMT -5
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Post by The Undertaker on Feb 23, 2009 17:00:00 GMT -5
Damn it feels good to be back.
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Post by The Kevstaaa on Feb 23, 2009 17:18:45 GMT -5
This is back? I'm interested as this was one of the diaries I used to read before I joined the boards.
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Post by Self-Savior on Feb 23, 2009 18:19:20 GMT -5
Yay. I can't wait to get back into this.
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Post by The Undertaker on Feb 23, 2009 18:39:24 GMT -5
27 Days.WWE Championship Match (c) MVP vs. Shawn Michaels Climbing the LadderJohn Cena vs. Rey Mysterio
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Post by Jord on Feb 23, 2009 18:47:18 GMT -5
I never expected to see this back. Even if it is unrealistic, it sure as hell is a fun read.
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Post by iyfwkidzc on Feb 23, 2009 19:04:01 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Feb 23, 2009 19:05:53 GMT -5
*seizure*
This is gonna be insane.
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Post by The Undertaker on Feb 23, 2009 19:09:39 GMT -5
I never expected to see this back. Even if it is unrealistic, it sure as hell is a fun read. yeah, i thought the same tbh. I know its unrealistic, but hey, i like writing it. I have a lot of good ideas brainstormed for this now.
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Post by Chris Hammers on Feb 23, 2009 19:33:37 GMT -5
The only problem I ever saw in this was bringing back Austin and Rock. If you can get them out of the diary there'd be nothing un relistic about it.
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Post by The Undertaker on Feb 23, 2009 19:40:12 GMT -5
The only problem I ever saw in this was bringing back Austin and Rock. If you can get them out of the diary there'd be nothing un relistic about it. Yeah, well if you read Unforgiven, you'd see Austin's gone for a while if not forever. The Rock has some stuff with Rycklon to finish off, but you'll see what will happen with him. I'm gonna shape this up a little and give it a new edge to freshen it up.
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