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Post by hardyboyzwwe on Sept 21, 2007 19:10:43 GMT -5
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Post by ljs on Sept 22, 2007 2:31:07 GMT -5
Hardyboyz- you're getting better but not much. Not liking the spear. It's choppy no reaction and so on. The Batista bomb is better but there's no reation. 6/10 for the spear and 8/10 for the Bomb.
Little tip put your best animation first because after the spear I didn't want to look at the BB
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Post by lukeymc on Sept 22, 2007 5:11:51 GMT -5
Just need to work on reactions dude, the spear is a little choppy, but I'm liking the Batista Bomb. though I see a little bit of string, you just need to work on these things.
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Post by hardyboyzwwe on Sept 22, 2007 6:03:12 GMT -5
by reaction do you mean like wen he gets batist bombed he rolls off and holds his back
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Post by elliot on Sept 22, 2007 6:14:48 GMT -5
by reaction do you mean like wen he gets batist bombed he rolls off and holds his back yes. exactly. because really, when someone gets batista bombed, they dont just lay there, they go OUCH! |
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Post by hardyboyzwwe on Sept 22, 2007 6:44:31 GMT -5
by reaction do you mean like wen he gets batist bombed he rolls off and holds his back yes. exactly. because really, when someone gets batista bombed, they dont just lay there, they go OUCH! at 2:57 |
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Post by Nitro on Sept 23, 2007 15:05:38 GMT -5
looks like your trying to copy two of oKaneo's animations
not a bad attempt though
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Post by mrdaystaker on Sept 23, 2007 16:32:21 GMT -5
I agree with the reactions comments.
Also, it looks like he placed cena on the steps he didn't "slam" him on them. We can still see strings.
As for the spear he looks like he's skipping through a field of daisies not running. We can see the strings still. if I were you, I always use a very obvious to see color of string so it obvious to see when editing. Using fishing line makes it possible for you to miss some while editing. They could be better but they could be worse also.
Good work.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Sept 25, 2007 18:34:27 GMT -5
the spaer was a bit choppy and unrealistic the way goldberg was running, but IMo the batista bomb was perfect. =)
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