FDS RP: 'I Have Had Enough..'

[recklessmatten]

Ryan Riddle is standing in the centre of the ring with a microphone in his hand. The fans are chanting 'WFWF' at the top of their lungs. Riddle is taken back by the noise of the fans.

Ryan Riddle: Ladies and Gentlemen. Tonight is the fall out from Forever Unscarred and what a night it was. We saw some epic fights and one of them is the reason i stand here now. The house had is own tournament called 'New Breed' with the winner scoring a contract with FDS. Also as a bonus, the winner won himself a World Heavyweight title match here tonight. Ladies and Gentlemen, would you please well FDS newest full time member, he is Mr New
Breed...

Just as he is about to finish the introduction, Reckless music begins to play. The crowd is confused but stand up in applause for him. Reckless stands at the top of the ramp and nods his head. His hair is now completely black and is wearing a skull and crossbones bandana. He walks down the ramp slowly with an angry look on his face. Fans reach out for his normal high fives but his arms remain in his pockets. Some fans start to boo, but soon drowned out as Reckless enters the ring to a chorus of cheers. He snatches the mice out of Ryan’s hand and tells him to leave. He stands in the middle of the ring.

Reckless: I bet you are all asking yourselves, what is he doing here? The boss is probably making his way to the truck to get this mice cut off. Well how about you sit your ass down and listen to what i have to say. That goes for all of you in the crowd. Sit you asses down and listen to me. Forever Unscarred. I built up so much hype for it. I built my match up to be what should have been the best match of my career. But as you all know, i lost. I lost to Josh Dean, the man who should be standing here now saying how happy he is and all of that other crap that follows.

The fans being to boo. Reckless starts to laugh. It seems as though the boos don’t bother him. He puts the mice down and stands on the top rope at one corner and screams for the fans to boo louder. He gets off and gets back to the mice

Reckless: There we go, You finally got something right. I don’t give one ounce of crap what you do. Boo me all you want to. It doesn’t matter to me. Nothing you or anyone can say matters to me. I am fed up of being this guy who deep down i am not. I hate being the one people love to cheer. I hate the fact that everyone sitting listening to me is holding me back from who i really am. I grew up as a bad ass kid who did not give a f**k what people thought. And i still don’t, only management had me make you believe i did.

The fans are booing even louder. Several members of the roster and management are now standing on the ramp looking down towards Reckless. Reckless looks at them and gives them all the middle finger. The fans react with a heavy chant of 'Reckless Sucks'. Reckless gets out of the ring and stands up on one of the announce tables.

Reckless: For months now you guys have made me fake. You guys have separated me from who I really am. I am not a nice guy. I am not me. I am yet another creation of the world you want to run. Well i have a newsflash, im living in my own world now motherf**ker and there is not a dam thing anyone can do about it.

Security run from the back towards Reckless. Reckless leaps off of the table and grabs a chair. He swings the chair around and they slowly back off.

Reckless: You leave me alone now or i swear you will have hell to pay. I am nearlly done having my say. I am warning every person in this building. From the janitor to the boss, dont cross me or you will have hell to pay. Three men will find out what it is like first hand to go against the real me. Oh and by the way, one more thing. Josh Dean. You know your going to lose tonight dont you? You dont stand a chance against Obo i mean come on. Reality check. Tonight is the beginning of the end of my life as a fake. I am Reckless and there is not a damn thing anyone can do about it.

Reckless throws the chair down and his music begins to play. The crowds boos are louder and Reckless walks grinning. He stops and looks at all the guys standing on the ramp. He looks down then forces his way through them all. He stops before he gets to the curtain and faces the crowd. He bows and on his way up he sticks his middle fingers up. He walks behind the curtain and slowly everyone follows.




Taadaaaaa here is my rp. A heel turn
meh rate it bash it wotever lol

[sonstuds]

There were some annoying typos and grammar problems (continually spelling mic(rophone) wrong, not capitalizing "I").

In theory you'd get it from other people (but everyone in the WFWF is lazy and don't feel the need to reply), but you should never do a roleplay in the ring. It really doesn't leave anything setting wise, and really only works for segments in the results really.

Speech was alright for what it was, but that kind of goes back to the whole "roleplay in the ring" mentality. A lot of the creativeness is pretty much left at the door as soon as we find out it's taking place in the ring. There's just no where to really go with it.

The description was kind of plain with some strange ideas. I don't really understand why security would run out and try to stop Reckless when he's really not doing anything that would warrant it.

Otherwise, this is one of your stronger roleplays.

[recklessmatten]

thanks man. I apreciate your feedback. You give very good advice that i try and build on. Sometime i fali at it but sometimes i am just a little step off.
Thanks Dude

[Calvin]

I like it....although this as EBR said seems more as a promo then anything to me. BUt it's all good. Good work.

[CBT]

First time replying to this, though I had read it. I really look forward to seeing you as a heel. May bring new inspiration, also opens up a lot of opportunities. I also think most agree, you were a good guy who played the bad guy, so now you may be on track in presentation.
Speech wasn't bad, description was on the fence. But the roleplay wasn't bad by any means.