FDS RP: 'Im No Student. Im Reckless'

[recklessmatten]

There is a large H on the floor. In the distance a helicopter is getting closer. The roar of the blades gets louder and louder and the wind is getting stronger. A box is visable hanging from the bottom of the helicopter. The box has hazard and warning tape sealing it shut. Reckless is sitting with his legs hanging out of the side of the helicopter. It lands slowly so the box doesnt get crushed. Reckless leaps out and starts to open the box.

Reckless: Tick, tock Obo. You have accepted to take the challenge, a challenge that will offer new things you and to me. You see, this is not a normal challenge. There are many things that swayed me to challenge you. One of them being able to show the world that i am more then just words. More the just flesh and bones. More then another wannabee. You see Obo, i know i can beat you. You are weak right now, your mind isnt in one place. You brain is working into an overload. Your out of control. I like it. And i am going to take adavntage of that.

Reckless attempts at opening the box fails. He raises a fist and smashes it through the lid of the box.

Reckless: Your mind is on Rev. Your not focused on me. Rev has control of your mind and the more control he has, the more power i have. You see, at FDS, you can not be sure of what Rev is doing. I know you wont be focused on the win, you will be focussed on what he is doing. You say i am Revs 'Student'. Why do you think that? Do you think i am affiliated to him. Maybe i am. Maybe i laid the challenge so i could help him gain the edge. Or maybe not.

Reckless rips the wood of the top of the box and cuts his arm open on a piece of it. He takes out a wrap from his pocket and wraps him arm, and goes back to opening the box.

Reckless: Blood. That reminds me, you say your the king of gore. That made me laugh. From what i know you hurt youself doing a move from the top rope last week. Your on the old drugs to calm the pain. I was laying in hospital for days in pain, i refused drugs and everything they wanted to help. To me you dont sound like no king of gore if you cant handle an ankle injury. I dont think your really who you say you are.

Reckless pulls out a roll of barbed wire, a bat and some lighter fluid. He starts to unroll the barbed wire around the outside of the H. He takes the bat and smashes the box open and reveals a little case. He then takes the lighter fluid and drips it over the barbed wire ring. He lights the ring and begins to smile

Reckless: Obo, i dare you to step into my world. A world where blood is shed on a daily basis. A world where no man comes out unharmed. Obo. You have chosen to accept a path to the wrong destiny. You have chosen to mess with me. I am no Tommy Dreamer. I am no Sandman and heck i an not close to Sabu but i am Reckless and that is that. Obo, welcome to the Reckless abandon.

Reckless walks towards the fire. He stops just before it and throws his back back and then jumps into the flame. There is a note in the box and it reads 'To Rev'. The helicopter flies of and the wind blows the note of the roof and the building.

here is my fds rp, hope its good lol

[sonstuds]

Description is really lacking. I have no idea where you are to begin with, and kind of confused about walking into a bunch of flames. You really need to expand on that.

Speech was alright, but it needs more. The basic idea is there (and it's a good one) but it also lacks a bit of logic. Just on character standards, Obo's the real "deathmatch" guy here, so to try and say that he needs to come into Reckless' world (who since I've been here has shown no signs of being a deathmatch wrestler) is kind of silly.

[cureforthesickness]

I've kind of awkward. The description and speech are definately there, but there's something missing. I also don't like the charecter cheap shot. Sure, everyone goes to them (even I did this week) but they really take away from the roleplay. Like, you're going along fine in the roleplay, then for whatever reason, you decide to pull out barbed wire.

[CBT]

Nobody seems to be mentioning, in the WFWF, Sabu.. Sandman... Tommy Dreamer..... DO NOT EXIST. Nor should you mention them. Real life celebrities, musicians, sports figures are fine. But you don't like professional wrestlers for WWE, ECW, anything non-efed.

That said, I think description was there but it was minimum. I'm not a expert when it comes to setting the even balance, but it seemed like a segment you were rushing through, so yea I gotta agree there could have been a more subtle approach to it.
As far as coming into your world, I gotta laugh. That'd be like Obo saying he's gonna show me how to wrestle with no bullcrap. It's not a legitimate statement. But I do think Reckless could have a hand in being a one time Obo follower. Maybe still is. But he is still a virgin of bloody mary in my eyes.
Speech was the strength here. I loved how you played off some of what Obo said, because it can be great basis if you let someone take the lead and respond. I more so enjoyed you playing the innocent card by saying you don't know why Obo would call you a student of Rev but you may be, or maybe not. Sort of a instigator role.
There was only one slight problem, seems like some people are contradicting themselves unintentionally. So I'll try to explain.
When you say Obo says he is a king of gore, but suffers from a ankle injury and resorts back to pills. That is a unguided link, but if you want to defend it as him being immune to pain, then fine.
But you saying, "I was laying in hospital for days in pain, i refused drugs and everything they wanted to help." That makes you come off weaker then Obo. He's got an injury but is wrestling through it. You on the other hand, sat in a hospital room, refused bookings, and 'toughed it out'.
A good rp that could have honestly been expanded up as far as balance. But still a job well done.
Good luck