FDS RP Worthy

[Yukio Blaze]

“You must be worthy of the best, but not more worthy than the rest.” - Denis Waitley

“Some men dream of worthy accomplishments, while others stay awake and do them.”



The time has come once again for Yukio to face off with some of the youngest talent the WFWF has. This week, he will be teaming with WFWF newcomer Josh Dean to take on Christian Shields and Reckless in a tag team match. A couple weeks back, Yukio was able to survive both Shields and Reckless in a three way match, but this time seems wrong. It seems like there is more to this match and Yukio can smell it, but will he be able to figure it out...........


No one can see within five feet each other on a night like this. Snow is coming down very hard and hitting the city streets causing drifting snow. On top of that, a thick fog is in the air. Tonight seems like hell has froze over and it's starting to look as if it is so. Sirens are heard screeching from a distance, but are coming closer and closer. Kitty corner from a old theatre is a jeep that has flipped over, but it appears that no one is inside the vehicle, but the theatre, the marque lights have just been turned on. Which is very strange. The theatre itself appears very run down. Bricks chipping, broken lights, even the marque is sagging from the building and it still has Jaws listed as showing here. A noise of rummaging through things is heard from inside the theatre. The inside of this place doesnt look half bad. The walls are intact, carpet looks as new as it was years ago, and the funny part is that the candy corner is filled to the gills with candies. Dots, Raisinets, and other goodies. Popping up from the floor is Yukio Blaze wearing one of those goofy usher hats and a typical winter coat and gloves. Yukio places his elbows on the counter as if he was ready to serve someone.



Conscience

This should add some fuel to the fire. I'm wearing one of these stupid usher hats from like 1959. Yeah, its stupid but I kinda like it. It's also kinda cool that I was able to find a place like this. It's in damn good condition, what the hell am I thinking. Talking about properties when I'm supposed to get my head in the game. This week is like no other because I can sense a greater power in the match that I'm involved in and I'll think about that some more later.



Ladies and gentlemen good evening. What can I serve to you this evening. Dots, crusty forty year old popcorn, or how about an old souvenir that is a pepsi cup. No, I'm just kidding, but I will have to admit that this place is something. It's worthy of being here because of all of the memories and impressions that this place has left. Jaws, Citizen Kane, The Good The Bad and The Ugly have all been played here. Could you imagine what it must of felt like to watch those movies here back in the day. It brings goosebumps to my neck, but I cant talk about this place or movies all night. I've got bigger fish to fry.



Yukio looks at his watch and its a quarter til eight. He looks out the window as if he is expecting someone. He sees nothing and goes about playing with the candies......... but outside of the theatre is that ambulance that was heard earlier stopped at the flipped over jeep. The sirens have been shut off and so has the lights. Out comes two paramedics with there bags seeing if anyone is inside the jeep, but there isnt. Stuck on the steering wheel is a note that states...

Roger and Joe. I know you two are working the evening shift tonight and I also know you are on a break. Dont shake your head at me, but put your sh*t up and come into the old theatre asap. I have a idea that give you guys a easier job..... JS

Not for sure which one is Joe or Roger but they both look pissed off, but it seems like they are loading their stuff up and debating should they go inside of just leave.



Conscience

Those two clowns should be coming in pretty soon, but I cant get on my match off my mind. Reckless and Christian Shields vs Josh Dean and myself in a tag team match. I'm loving the match and all, but why was I thrown in this conflict. Reckless and Shields have beef with each other and Josh Dean will be trying to get another FDS show contract and then there is me. Was I put in this match because I'm not worthy of teaming with someone else or am I supposed to be the one to show Reckless, Shields, and Dean what being worthy is all about. I just dont know what to think.



This week on FDS, I will be teaming with Josh Dean to take on Christian Shields and Reckless. Now those two guys right there have been fighting over who is better. No one can tell me other wise because I have seen it over and over. Yeah, they will pretty much never face each other again after there Last Man Standing match. I give them props on the PPV match, but that is all because that does not make one worthy and then there is my tag team partner Josh Dean. I like this guy, he has the skills to become a future WFWF champion, but then on the other hand he really hasnt been here long enough to be worthy either.



Christian Shields, we have a past together. You have pinned me once and I have done the same to you. You also know at one time I was going to mentor you, but you wouldnt have nothing to do with it. I have not liked you since that day and hate you even more thinking that you'll get somewhere by getting another win over me, but that will not happen because you will buckle under your own pressure because you will be tagging with your enemy. Not only will you need to keep your eyes on me and Dean, but Reckless as well. There is no way in hell you'll be able to keep your head in the game.



Then there is you Reckless. You are one of the very few guys that I've kept my eye since you debuting in the WFWF. I like your reckless and that your trying to make a name for yourself, but you really cant do so because you have yet to have that one match in the WFWF to put you as a credible superstar. Yeah, your LMS match could be that time or it could come months down the line. Simply put, you are not yet classified as a worthy superstar just yet, but I do see you becoming one very soon. Until then, that this advice and turn yourself into a wrestling machine.



Finally, there is my tag team partner for this week, Josh Dean. You have climbed perhaps the fastest in the WFWF. Getting PPV match slots and defeating a few superstars along the way. I want you to have this same advice that I've told Reckless and Shields in the past, dont let power and money go yo your head. It can change a ordinary man into a money grabbing monster. I want you to go onto greater things and become a worthy wrestler. Just remember that.



Conscience

I despise Shields, but I kinda gotta give something to Reckless and Josh Dean. I like then two guys, but as I said, they arent worthy enough. Until I see the day that they get their asses kicked my Immune, or put through a table by Tha CBT, or even lose five times to Justin Tyme and go onto win the sixth and final encounter, then will I consider them worthy. I want to see all three of these men to put their bodies on the line like I have done so many times over. I want to show that I can pep talk the new blood in the WFWF because one day, not only will the old bloods walk away, but one day this flame will be snuffed out...



Yukio stretches his neck out and sees both Roger and Joe walking towards the door. Yukio lifts up the candy stand divider and greets both Joe and Roger into this place.



So fellas, you ready for my big announcement.

Roger: What is it JS. We dont have all day. We gotta get back to the station or we will both get fired.

Dont worry guys, because you both will have a new job. You see, I bought this old place. I plan to hire people to get this place running ans you two will be my new managers

Joe: Thanks man

Roger: What the hell, why not for a old friend.



Yukio shakes both Joe and Rogers hands and then looks at this place in a whole new meaning.Yukio has made a new financial idea and it seems like a good one and Yukio also got his point across at just about everyone in his match, even himself, but will something happen like he senses or will everything go off smoothly. Only time will tel...........



“Character is the firm foundation stone upon which one must build to win respect. Just as no worthy building can be erected on a weak foundation, so no lasting reputation worthy of respect can be built on a weak character.” - R.C Samel

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“The most splendid achievement of all is the constant striving to surpass yourself and to be worthy of your own approval.” - Denis Waitley [/center]

[Yukio Blaze]

This was perhaps the funniest/funnest rp that I have ever written. There was something to it and I just like it.

[hardyz]

I like it. You should win this week. Good luck.

[sonstuds]

Alright, I really hate the multiple colors. Personal preference, yes. But man, do I find it looks goofy.

Description was fine. You’ll probably get the “need to expand more” replies (and I’d be hard pressed to disagree), but the reader got the picture.

I don’t like how you’d take something from the description and put it in the dialogue (in this case, the conscience). I’m talking about the usher hat. There’s no need to mention it being “stupid/goofy” twice, it comes off as you, when writing it, found it funny and want everyone else to see the humor in it.

You did one of the things I really hate in roleplays, and that’s the monologue/dialogue combination roleplay. It really doesn’t work. When you write the monologue roleplay, it’s with the impression the character is talking in front of a camera. That’s fine. When you do the dialogue roleplay, it’s with the impression it’s two (or more) people talking, either with or without or a camera documenting it. Also fine. But when you combine the two it’s unnatural. Why would someone talk about their opponents, then film something personal (in this case, owning a movie theatre)?

In terms of the actual dialogue, it was alright. You can’t take awkward breaks and start talking about something no for reason

It brings goosebumps to my neck, but I cant talk about this place or movies all night. I've got bigger fish to fry

If you’re there to talk about your opponent, then why would Yukio Blaze even bring any of that up? Or if he’s there to talk about the movie theatre, then why would he bring up his opponents?

The conscience thing is cool, as was the emphasis on worthy. The only thing is that you didn’t go into it enough, and at points it was just as if all you were doing is bolding the word worthy. Personally, I think you should have gone a different approach in terms of talking about your opponents. It really had no overall point with the roleplay, and you didn’t have much to say about them. By the time I finished reading it, the overall point I got was that Yukio Blaze now owns a movie theatre. When that’s the case, talking about your opponents ends up just being filler.

The quotes were cool. Since I’ve been back, you’ve always been the best one at using them.

I think you should have gone into a longer thing with Yukio Blaze and the two paramedics. It was really underdeveloped and took away from potentially good dialogue. Plus, you have to kind of wonder why two people would opt to work in a movie theatre as opposed to being paramedics.

It was an alright roleplay. I just thought you paid more attention to the unnecessary instead of what the roleplay was actually about.

[hardyz]

sonstuds said:

Alright, I really hate the multiple colors. Personal preference, yes. But man, do I find it looks goofy.

Description was fine. You’ll probably get the “need to expand more” replies (and I’d be hard pressed to disagree), but the reader got the picture.

Well I like the pretty colors and it was very discriptive in my eyes.

[recklessmatten]

I like this.

You have stuck with ya title Worthy and i do belive you are a worthy winner. Good luck in the match

[sonstuds]

hardyz said:

sonstuds said:

Alright, I really hate the multiple colors. Personal preference, yes. But man, do I find it looks goofy.

Description was fine. You’ll probably get the “need to expand more” replies (and I’d be hard pressed to disagree), but the reader got the picture.

Well I like the pretty colors and it was very discriptive in my eyes.

...I said the description was good.

[Revvie®]

I would comment but i would seem repetitive b/c EBR pretty much covered it all. lol

Revvie