Revvie®
Main Eventer
Somewhere between Reality, and the Absurd
Joined on: Jun 29, 2005 1:04:26 GMT -5
Posts: 4,327
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 17, 2006 9:59:48 GMT -5
so yea I decided to get my rp up first, turned out really well actually, im starting up a new storyline sort of thing for Rev. and i hope you can kind of see it in the rp. Well Good Luck to Miguel. Revvie  PS: Comments and Critism is more then welcome  "And God created Higher Authority" |
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Yukio Blaze
Main Eventer
WFWF Record: 58-54-03-02
Joined on: Dec 15, 2004 21:50:34 GMT -5
Posts: 4,515
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Post by Yukio Blaze on Nov 17, 2006 10:54:40 GMT -5
No critism from me because I liked this rp. It has a higher calling kinda deal with it and I want to read more to find out who Michael is. Is he an angel or someone from the WFWF offices. Good luck Shadow Boss
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Post by tobeornottobe on Nov 17, 2006 18:59:51 GMT -5
This was a great rp, Rev. I'm going to have to really step it up if i want to top that. I'm confident though that I will come close to something around that magnitude. Really great stuff man
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Post by Kurt Burton: Script Doctor! on Nov 22, 2006 17:46:33 GMT -5
Good RP, I think this character is great. I don't know if the hypocrisy of the Reverend is intentional, or if that is just what I am reading into it, but I have to say I like the un-Christianness of the Reverend. I am also interested to see how the Michael thing works out. However, I do have a complaint, and I will quote Genesis to summarize.
"And on the eight Day, after he had rested, God created Spelling and Grammar Check."
OK, that might not actually be in the bible per se, but I do think that there were a few grammatical errors. They stuck out at me. Although, I know I have made a few myself in the past. One actually got a chuckle out of me. Suite instead of suit. HEHEHE. I was like, sweet!
Which is also the overall review of this RP, SWEET!
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Revvie®
Main Eventer
Somewhere between Reality, and the Absurd
Joined on: Jun 29, 2005 1:04:26 GMT -5
Posts: 4,327
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 22, 2006 17:48:42 GMT -5
Good RP, I think this character is great. I don't know if the hypocrisy of the Reverend is intentional, or if that is just what I am reading into it, but I have to say I like the un-Christianness of the Reverend. I am also interested to see how the Michael thing works out. However, I do have a complaint, and I will quote Genesis to summarize. "And on the eight Day, after he had rested, God created Spelling and Grammar Check." OK, that might not actually be in the bible per se, but I do think that there were a few grammatical errors. They stuck out at me. Although, I know I have made a few myself in the past. One actually got a chuckle out of me. Suite instead of suit. HEHEHE. I was like, sweet! Which is also the overall review of this RP, SWEET! I HAVE SPELL CHECK...i just dont have grammar check lol, this computer didnt come with it and lately i have been to lazy to read over to minute errors that most could figure out on their on lol...plus I own you so yea   |
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Post by CBT on Nov 22, 2006 20:36:26 GMT -5
If I didn't know better, I'd say you showed no rust. But always one to keep active, I knew to expect a strong RP. Nicely done Roo.
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